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By : Darkprism
  • From TheReapersMule on September 25, 2010
    You know, you are terrible when you leave such huge cliff hangers. -cries-

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  • From ANON - Brigette on September 25, 2010
    Ok so I don't review stories very often. I much perfer just being a voyeur. However, I have to say that I love ALL of your stories!! This one has a special place in my heart for very personal reasons. I am all a shiver with anticipation. I hope you can find a loving Master for Haku and Kimimaru. The thought of a loving comitted threesome with one Dom is very intriguing. The way that you write a Scene is amazingly detailed without going overboard and leaving us bored. That is no easy task and you handle it flawlessly. I wait quite impatiently. Thank-You!!
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  • From ANON - qwerty on September 25, 2010
    Ah! i'm so on edge!
    great chapter!
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  • From Vex on September 25, 2010
    Ohhh~ Ending here of all places!

    But this chapter was just so titillating and has left me on edge.
    Wonderful!
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  • From Prism0467 on September 25, 2010
    "Iruka in a dark suit and fedora" -- oh, my god somebody fan art this please?! That one line made the ENTIRE chapter.

    I share Kimimaro's anxiety and surprise. I can't wait to find out who his dom is!
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  • From Vex on September 25, 2010
    Who is this mystery man?!
    I keep thinking Orochimaru due to the fact he was so deeply involved with Kimi?

    I don't know but I sure want to!
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  • From ANON - Carousel on September 23, 2010
    This is one of my favorite stories by you yet.
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  • From ANON - Nivell on September 22, 2010
    Short chapters!! Aww man, I wanted to see who Kimi's mysterious man is....dun dun dun, be it's ****** or *** or oh effit, *waits patiently for the next chapter*
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  • From Prism0467 on September 21, 2010
    Holy shit! That was short, but sweet! I can imagine the two of them writhing together in a bed. Sensual!
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  • From ANON - qwerty on September 21, 2010
    Great (but shorter) chapter! I'm excited to find out who's the stranger!
    Keep going!
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  • From mannahpierce on September 21, 2010
    I look forward to each update of this story. The language is so rich. You can almost smell and feel it. The vulnerability of both Kimimaro and Haku is breathtaking and the idea of Kimimaro being willing to take risks in order to look after Haku, even going out of his comfort zone, is wonderful.
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  • From ANON - Ambie-Chan on September 17, 2010
    Woot! I love your stories. I really enjoy how you write the characters and just your general descriptive ability-amazing. NaruSasu is definitely my favorite pairing but Kakashi and Iruka are growing on me. Kimimaro and Haku as well. And it's big thanks to you! I can't wait to see the mystery man. Update soon please!
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  • From ANON - qwerty on September 07, 2010
    Such a good story. Loved this chapter. I cannot wait to find out who wants Kimi!
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  • From mistressofyaoi on September 07, 2010
    that was really good and sneaky of you to not reveal what was in that folder in that chapter. though i have to say as much as i am enjoying this is there going to be an updater for the gaara story?
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  • From ANON - Tarn Vedra 5 on September 07, 2010
    You know... I really had a bad day and this new chapter 3 made me so happy :) As usual I can't wait to see what will happen next and what will happen to both of them. Thank you for your stories. They are really magnificent. Hm... will you please maybe, if you want give some hints who could be that VIP person... :) Please :) I like to guess :)
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