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By : Darkprism
  • From Prism0467 on March 06, 2011
    OMFG how do you do this?! You have a gift. God, what a visual! I'm combusting right now...
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  • From ANON - Tarn Vedra 5 on February 24, 2011
    This is story which I wanted to continue so bad.. and now finally so many chapters I read :D eh, I must admit that at first I was slightly disappointed that Itachi is the one... because I just couldn't still get out of my mind the scene with Kiba... I can see Itachi as someone who likes to switch ... but not to be sub to Kiba... That just doesn't work in my mind... Pain, Kisame, Kakashi... YES... but Kiba!!!??... hm... So, when I found out that Itachi is the Dom... I just couldn't imagine that he would be so perfect for two of them and the perfect person because he has so many experiences from both sides and he would know how to manage two subs who had morbid and sick doms... So, I changed my mind about Itachi and now I have a much better opinion about him... if it wasn't for this story... I would still be disappointed about him. Thank you for this great story :) please continue :) It shows that even if everything is bad that there is still some hope...

    But,... heheheh I definitely didn't expect such a horror mansion, not to mention iron maiden... I burst out laughing because of such disappointment in battler that this torture device Iron Maiden wasn't in use... hahaha So, Itach definitely has sadistic servants, hehehehe... Amazing :D I love this horror mansion... But I got scared a little... I mean... Itachi lives in that mansion all by himself??? Eh...scary and disturbing. Not to mention so much lonely.

    I can't wait to see what will happen next :)
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  • From moodysavage on February 12, 2011
    This story is amazing. I love everything about it!

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  • From ANON - Kazuki Erisa on February 11, 2011
    Gosh, your story had me hooked up right from the first chapter. You have made ItachiXKimimaroXHaku pairing so convincing!! It's my first time reading up on this pairing and i totally loved it because of you.

    You have made the characters realistic. I love the way you explain their emotions and in the latest chapter, the narration for Itachi's house is superb!! Good one on the flamingo. Hehe.

    Since Itachi loves roses, what do you think of a scene of them on a bed of rose petals?? It'll be better if Haku/Kimi or both have their hands bound, all ready for the taking on a bed of roses. OK.. Bad thought!! It's still too early for them at this stage ne..

    I'm looking forward to your next chapter~~
    Give a Hug to Haku, Kimi and Itachi for me.
    Thank you so much for the hard work!! =D


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  • From nivell on February 10, 2011
    Wow, deep and heavy chapter. Wonder what Haku went through during Zabuza's time for him to react like that.
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  • From Ajablue on February 10, 2011
    Ugh, I was not ready for this chapter to be over. *continues trying to find more underneath the review button* So lovely and poor little Haku. Heehee to the plastic fishies and flamingo. Definitely deserving of a more coherent review, but ah well. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Jen on February 10, 2011
    I like the fact that this story is mostly Kimmimaro x Haku. It's more realistic that Itachi wasn't quickly and easily brought into the picture, and that they didn't instantly fall in love with him, though they do desire him. I think it might be nice, actually, if the three of them never fall in love in a conventional sense. What I mean is, rather than a grand romance, I think it would be much nicer if the three of them were to form a little family since that's what I think they all need most. (Of course, it would also be a family that has sex...) Itachi fits into their lives because he's a lot like Kimmimaro and Haku are--gentle and just a little lost. It's good for them that he's not a psycho dom, actually. He can play the role in bed so they have sexual fulfillment, but doesn't live his life that way. After putting up with Orochimaru and Zabuza, Kimmimaro and Haku really don't need to be with someone like that again. (But I wonder, if Itachi is a switch, would there ever be times when he might like to be dominated? And would Kimmimaro + Haku together be able to play that role for him?)
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  • From Prism0467 on February 09, 2011
    Wow. So much barely-corralled emotion! Please, please let Itachi escort them all upstairs for some much-needed release!
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  • From ANON - qwerty on February 09, 2011
    Awww. Haku! Poor guy. I just want to hold him!
    Great chapter!
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  • From Prism0467 on January 13, 2011
    Wow. Itachi has Haku in a tizzy and he's never even laid a hand on him! Now that's a gift!
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  • From ANON - Carousel on January 13, 2011
    This last chapter was so wonderful and sweet.
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  • From foreploy on January 13, 2011
    Is dead. Finished chapter 11 and I'm dumbstruck. I want more. I want it to never end. I want Kimi and Haku and Itachi to exist in this story forever. I want to have your babies. I apologize for my review being nonsensical babble.
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  • From ANON - qwerty on January 13, 2011
    I'm on pins and needles for them! I hope everything goes well!!
    Great chapter!
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  • From ANON - melvinssyn on January 13, 2011
    Dear God, I love you!! I love how you keep us trembling with anticipation. I feel blind folded with ears plugged. It is it's own bliss. Thank-you!!!!
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  • From ANON - Shivawn on January 05, 2011
    This is such a spectacular story. It's so emotional, dark and light, pure if that makes sense. One of the most beautiful stories I've ever read. I can't wait for more and to see what Haku decides, for if Haku says no then Kimimaro will say no, no matter how much he wants Itachi. I also have a feeling (which may be just wishful thinking) that Zabuza and Orochimaru will be making an appearance at some point.
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