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Reviews for The Price of Love I

By : JaydenNara
  • From tawanawelch on August 24, 2010
    Awww, poor Shika but at the same time poor Kiba because he's so so worried that he isnt even thinking about himself. Also, I never even thought about how Shika's thoughts work. I KNOW he is going through HELL. I hope he wont be traumatized too much longer.:( I really love to see the tenderness between them, I just melt.
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  • From mannahpierce on August 23, 2010
    I have been enjoying reading this story but it was Tsunade explaining how someone like Shikamaru would experience the abuse, the endless possibilities he would see, that made it stand out to me. I would very much like to continue reading, so I hope you will continue posting.
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  • From ANON - skratch on August 22, 2010
    NOOOOOOO!!!! write i say! write write!!!
    a fantastically well written story you have formed my dear. i am now a huge shipper of this couple because of you. i beg you to post more of this fabulously hot couple!!1
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  • From tawanawelch on August 20, 2010
    Yaaay!!! Is Shino the jealous rival?!! OMG!!! I can't WAIT!! I'm soooo excited!!!!XDD
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  • From tawanawelch on August 18, 2010
    I liked the talk they had about their sexual past and Temari hitting Shika over the head with her fan, hilarious!! I can totally see that.XD I also liked how vulnerable Shika was in Kiba's big strong arms. As for other couples, how about Naru/Neji? Geez, I can't remember if you referenced Naruto and Sasuke being together already. How about when they get back to Konoha, Shika's crush tries to hurt Kiba because, "you can't even keep Shika safe on a
    mission!" Something like that. Maybe a jealous Sasuke or Shino or something. Unless you don't wanna take it in that direction. Well I gave it a shot and I hope it was helpful in some way.^^
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  • From tawanawelch on August 16, 2010
    "He's so toned, wait why am I looking?" That part I cracked up on. Well, I would like to see more intimate moments as Shika heals and then they come to terms with their feelings for one another. Unless of course theirs another out to steal Shika's love from Kiba. I always love to see jealousy and one fighting off the affections of another.(squeeee)¤.¤
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  • From tawanawelch on August 16, 2010
    The first part of the chapter was sooo funny with their denial at being a couple. Now, I'm scared for Shika, but I loved Kiba ripping the enemy to shreds for 'his Shika.'
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  • From tawanawelch on August 16, 2010
    OH BOY!!! If only Kiba knew.XD That's just like Shika to over analyse a situation. I really enjoy this playfully fun fic.:3
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  • From tawanawelch on August 16, 2010
    I can't wait to see how the mission goes. I'm so excited!! I love to see Shikamaru in an uke position, he is always seme. It's time for a change.lol
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  • From tawanawelch on August 16, 2010
    Yeah, I like Kiba and Shikamaru too after reading other stories. You made it seem so believeable.
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  • From setoswifey on August 12, 2010
    OOOOh! This is going to be fun I can tell. Let's see where the adventures of Shikamaru and Kiba will take them.
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  • From setoswifey on August 12, 2010
    Interesting pairing. I cant wait to see how this goes. I have never seen Shikamaru lose his cool before so this is quite amusing to say the least. Kudos to Naruto for thinking this up.
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