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Reviews for More Than He'd Have Hoped

By : AscendedDreamer
  • From ANON - Akuma on March 12, 2013
    I really hope you continue this! THis si the best NaruIno I think I have ever read. And you only have 2 decent sized chapters! Is this a harem or solely NaruIno?
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  • From thmanwithnoname on October 02, 2010
    I very much like this. It's neat seeing a well-trained naruto who isn't instantly a genius in everything, and I really like the way you're advancing naruto and ino's relationship. I'm looking forward to more.
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  • From holyknight on August 13, 2010
    You only slipped on one point. From the moment on that Naruto became a Konoha Shinobi, he's under the direct authority and command of the Hokage.....the Council hasn't any saying or judgement on this....to boot, the Chuunin that Naruto killed, did attack first a HEIRESS of a Clan, AND broke the Hokage's law also.....so the Council hasn't any valid charge against Naruto......
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  • From on August 04, 2010
    A good story thus far. I was kinda falling over in shock when I read the part about them thinking Sasuke was psychotic.... maybe the idiots should have thought about that before UNNECESSARILY killing his entire immediate family and beyond!
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  • From Badclyde on August 04, 2010
    This story is great so far, I hope you continue to keep it a little more intimate instead of just rushing headon into the smut.
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  • From theimpacientone on August 02, 2010
    it's great, the moment between them was both hot and real (considering it was the first time)
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