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By : mannahpierce
  • From missbri88 on September 08, 2011
    Amazing chapter- Now when do you plan on writing a book series?! I would seriously buy every novel published! Your talents are too awesome to stay within this limited circle of circulation.
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  • From satterb on September 08, 2011
    What a creepy development. I got cold chills reading this. Why can't anything ever be simple??? LOL Thanks for sharing. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
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  • From Dorkchic on September 08, 2011
    Oh crap, this is not good! Horrible, horrible cliffhanger! Have the hybrids been brainwashed, lobotomised in such a way that they keep going with no other thoughts except that one order? I hope the guys get past whomever is cyber attacking the compound so they can help!
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  • From blugirlami21 on September 07, 2011
    You're scaring me Mannah. Just when I think that we are going to be ok, you hit me with a shock. What is the purpose of the endless challenges on Orochimaru's orders? Is this an opportunity for him to attack and take one or more of the kits? Everyone is down in the killing square. Who would be able to protect the household in the event of an attack? I understand that there is protocol and tradition to be followed but I have a hard time with everyone being so willing to surrender to it when honor and tradition are not always being held on the other side, if that makes sense. This story makes me crazy sometimes, I need a good long chunk of happy times after this. I know this is a drama but damn we just got bombed not too long ago, we can't afford any more casualties. Good chapter as always, keep it up.
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  • From roro237 on September 07, 2011
    Space Queen wOW! Small beads of sweat have gather on my forehead!! First off I missed you. Second off wOw!!! I was like everyone else thinking the worst was Sasuke slitting a man throat. I was hoping he could handle the aftermath of something like that. Then the great moment of Sasuke saying "In the cold of Space the crew you fine the heat of suns" I loved that part! I could visualize that:) The kids looking and acting Uchiha. Then just like Jaws you know the music right? BamB!!!! The challenges began. Oh Great Queen of the Naruto Space Universe that was a truly amazing chapter! That was an incredible visual intense OMG exciting amazing heart wrenching chapter! Thank you for all the hard work you put into that ~Bowing~ wOw! Plus the coup de graw you left with a back breaker of a cliffy! You blew the smoke from your six-shooter and put it in your hoster after this chapter:) I LOVED it ^_^
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  • From ANON - Aflyingmonkey123 on September 07, 2011
    WHAT'S HAPPENING!?!?!?! GAH!!!

    Great chapter as always Mannah-san!
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  • From superflaj on September 07, 2011
    my heart is beating so hard i think it might explode.
    i hope i make it til the next update 'coz just when i think i know where the bad guys are coming from
    you pull another brilliant twist and blow my mind
    superb writing and imagination
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  • From ANON - TanuKyle on September 07, 2011
    FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFf.

    FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFf.


    MANNAH!

    No! Dx
    NO SUSPENSE!
    BAD MANNAH!

    Actually I lie this chapter was greatbutff.
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on September 07, 2011
    no... just.... please don't.... hurt them any more... They were supposed to be heroes and they have to stay hidden because their always somebody's target. How much more they can last?
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  • From ANON - cynaga on September 07, 2011
    [ch 113] Ah! Sasuke! Challenges? What challenges? Naruto to the rescue? Maybe ... great cliff hanger!!!

    I love it when Sasuke says, "In the cold of space..."

    And the crew answers, "you find the heat of suns!"


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  • From ladybird425 on September 07, 2011
    Aaaah, so unexpected and worrying O:
    I don't really understand what white noise signifies but I guess I'll find out soon enough.
    Aaah, damn Oro >.
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  • From ANON - MikaSamu on September 05, 2011
    Chapter 95, wow, what a terrific chapter! I love how you give us a feel for how Shikamaru thinks, and that we can only get that close because he is so tired. Itachi is the perfect foil for him, understanding exactly what is needed. The trio of Haru, Ran and Kazuki are incredible -- like Shikamaru, quite dangerous even at their age. I love how Ran uses his empathy to help his friend, and Haru's sudden realization that Kazuki is more important than his array. Ran and Kazuki sharing a touch of being feral is a great touch, understanding one another in a way that the others perhaps can't. Like Shika, Haru is so caught up in his conception, he's can't see that using his friends, as very willing as they are, is an ethical problem -- but he is still a very young child and that is so understandable. Sasuke's, Shikamaru's, and Neji's exhaustion is also a useful learning experience. I love Ran's decision to check with Kakashi rather than Iruka, and Kakashi's reaction -- not to mention how close he came to catching the young trio who worked so beautifully together to avoid detection and set up the array. The ending, with Iruka first reassuring Sasuke with Kakashi's admission, and then the "concert" allowing Sasuke to laugh was wonderfully theraputic and a perfect ending to the chapter.
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  • From ANON - MikaSamu on September 04, 2011
    Ah, best laid plans, even of incredibly smart (can't say genius with Shikamaru as part of the crew) well trained and organized Sasuke, rarely go fully according to plan. That adaptations and improvements are done through the remainder of the crew is just one of the reasons I love this story so much. Tears came to my eyes as the children committed to caring for Sasuke while waiting for Naruto to heal. I love Haru's mental dialog. His scheming, however is dangerous. His making sure that Ran was unpodded was dangerous (as it creates a misperception that the pods might not be safe) and callous, without regard for Ran's welfare or indirectly the concern and stress this might cause Iruka and Kakashi. I suspect Haru might come to regret his actions when he realizes the effect his schemes have on others. It was wonderful hearing from Iruka's perspective. A bit painful that after all this time with Kakashi, he still doesn't expect that Kakashi would spend the time to personally care for him. It is a matter of priorities, of course, and understandable from that perspective. That Kakashi needs to express it in seemingly selfish terms, and Iruka's response is a moving moment. With Iruka back, and the children being irrepressibly themselves in unexpected as well as expected ways, we can feel the extended Uchiha family beginning to stablize again. Beautiful chapter.
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  • From ANON - MikaSamu on September 04, 2011
    Finally back, and attempting to review each wonderful chapter. I love how beautifully you show Inari's response to the tragedy. Grieving, but competent. All so human with his musing over his relationship -- thoughts rarely stay in complete focus on just one topic, even when as huge as the bombing. Both have matured wonderfully. I stood up and cheered the introduction of the ninken and their choice of Kakashi as a hero. I hope we might see them again at some point, although meeting their hero in person might be sad as they find all heros have feet of clay -- then again, canines have a rather different take on loyalty. The effect of Uchiha, with tales, songs and interest spread so far, might mean that contrary to Inari's belief, Centre has or will become interested in what is happening as well. Fascinating yet again to see the layers of Shikamaru at work.
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  • From ANON - angelj232000 on September 03, 2011
    OMG!!!! I can't believe that I almost forgot to review. I just sent you an email when I realized that I totally forgot to write my review. I loved this chapter. YAY!!!!! Iruka can now walk & have normal sex!!!!! I so loved the family moment at the end with Kakashi, Iruka & Ran. I nearly cried. Thanks for all the awesome work you do on this fic. Keep it up. HUGS!!!!
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