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Reviews for Iteration

By : mannahpierce
  • From ANON - Lixx on September 10, 2011
    OMG OMG OMG!!!! I need the next chapter. Naruto's going to kick ass!! Please let everyone be okay!
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  • From ANON - Moonmoore on September 10, 2011
    What a chapter! I am in tenterhooks wanting to know what's next. It is incredible the faith Shika has in Naruto even in his current state. He is a pretty amazing guy. My adreline levels are shoting thruough the roof. I can barely type anything coherent. Sorry for all the typos and what not but I am seriously incoherent. Wow!! Sreiously! What a chapter! You have aoutdone yourself. Thank you so very much!! :)

    Moonmoore
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  • From Prism0467 on September 10, 2011
    OMG I was on the edge of my seat this whole chapter!
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  • From roro237 on September 10, 2011
    WoW!!! That was intense and more sweating for me:) I loved it! I'm scares but the adrenaline is pumping! When will Sasuke and the others reach the ship? Where will they break in next? Will Orochimaru or Kobuto be there? Will everyone be all right this time? Space Queen you are on a roll:) I thought last chapter was a cliffy from hell! Hey this one can only be part two from hell:) Guns blazing that's what I love about you! I should say space pistols blazing:)
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  • From bloodshound on September 10, 2011
    Ah crap... you're about to drop another bomb on us, aren't you. The brown smelly stuffs aboutt to hit the fan again... isn't it.
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  • From ladybird425 on September 10, 2011
    Ah, excitement never ends now. Mm.
    This was interesting to read - very nice that Naruto practiced to become adjusted to his new form.
    Also good that Sasuke managed to "outrun" the challenger.
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on September 10, 2011
    Oh Gods! I have never read THAT fast! It was amazing. And at the end I could practically hear the music! This was just great! I've been down since Wednesday worrying over Sasuke.... I know it's too early to celebrate but until the next Wednesday I will be calmer...
    All those changes in text editing on AFF pisses me off to no end! Apostrophes and other marks are disappearing and because of that I can never be sure if someone really said something out loud or if he just thought of it in his head. From what I see you probably tried to use txt... I doesn't work, I know...

    Recently you said once again something about ending Iteration. I hope that we won't have to wait for another continuation. Please...
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  • From ANON - Aflyingmonkey123 on September 10, 2011
    Mannah-san you gave me three mini heart attacks this chapter... Thank you for this awesome writing!

    Can not wait for the next chapter!
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  • From superflaj on September 10, 2011
    Naruto and the Blossom had arrived
    go naruto!
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  • From ANON - liby318 on September 10, 2011
    Am behind in my reviews, however the story is still the greatest and am waiting to see how Sasuke gets out of the trouble he is in at the moment.
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  • From ANON - angelj232000 on September 10, 2011
    I hope no one dies. I loved Kisame's & Haku's idea. Keep up the awesome work. HUGS!!!
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  • From Prism0467 on September 09, 2011
    Oh, shit...
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  • From ANON - SunaoTsuji on September 08, 2011
    oh yea! chapter 113? woot! a climax! a climax! thanks so much for the update and i'm covered in chill bumps for the next chappie! woot! i luv this world of yours.
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  • From ANON - SidonieStarr on September 08, 2011
    Another exciting cliffhanger, oh my! I never know whether your chapters will end with Sasuke thinking he's the luckiest man in the universe, or the bottom falling out of it for Uchiha. I really thought Deidara would succeed in blowing something up, maybe while Inari was bringing him back. Orichimaru is so much worse, and you have told us who he's after.
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  • From ANON - kanazerosukenaru on September 08, 2011
    Too lazy to log in, sorry!

    Anyway I knew that mofo Orochimaru was going to show up during Dei's execution when you said, it had to be public.

    Seriously, can this be the end for him, and the beginning of their happily ever after???

    Look we have Shika, Kakashi, Sasuke, Itachi, and OMG, Darrent-san on Terrasade...(and please forgive me if I'm misspelling names), but really all these geniuses on hand, and we are all sweating bullets that Sasuke will die??

    NO! I'm just not going to believe it...I think this is the final straw for Uchiha and Darrent-san and Orochimaru is going to be fried.

    I have to believe that because if this doesn't happen, and Sasuke get's hurt, or worse the kits get taken,then all the hype about Shika's genius and Darrent-san's power is not to be believed. How can we believe in the power of Uchiha and it's allies if Orochimaru can just waltz in with some half ass let's make the bodyguards tired, distracted Uchiha and steal the kits scheme?

    The bastard will try, but he will not succeed, he can't otherwise the whole story behind Derran-san's power and Shika's intelligence, makes no sense!

    That's just my thought on that chapter.
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