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  • From cynaga on August 19, 2010
    The waiting chapter was really nicely done. It was entertaining and moved the story forward in so many nice ways.
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  • From Prism0467 on August 19, 2010
    I don't think I've ever read Sasuke apologize to Naruto in any fic so adorably. The fact that he was wearing Naruto's orange shirt was just the icing on the cake.
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  • From ANON - eau_vive on August 16, 2010
    hi,

    happy dance for the update. Keep with the good job. Wow, new member. Well, let see where they go from here. Guess things are getting hot for the young ones.

    read you later
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  • From ahmenet on August 14, 2010
    I was wondering what kind of spy he was, now I simply feel sorry for him. I wanted to let you know I have re-read "In the cold of space..."and "Tales in Tarrasade". These are wonderful stories you have written and are continuing to write. I hope this world continues for as long as you can find inspiration.

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  • From roro237 on August 14, 2010
    Space Queen of Naruto somehow I had a feeling Ranmaru was to good to be all the way true:) Tayuya woman's intrusion is still saying don't trust him yet. Plus Konohamaru knew he was throwing a seducing looked on the vido. Which surprised me last time. But an empath huh?! Well I'm looking forward to see how our crew will handle this!! ^_^
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  • From Prism0467 on August 14, 2010
    You can't trust anybody these days.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 14, 2010
    when you first introduced haku to the crew, i thought that he was going to kill sasuke or was going to be a spy of some sort. he turned out to be one of the most loyal people around, i get the very same feeling about this little empath of yours. i don't like him, i can't imagine the people he works for, they have to be brutal and very clever. i'm pretty sure it is the akatsuki, and i hope they are not trying to get to sasuke, and it makes me wonder if itachi has been playing a role all along.
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  • From cynaga on August 14, 2010
    lovin' the empath spy for Konan story line...
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  • From ANON - m0rlana on August 12, 2010
    Double sided intrigue!!! Ranmaru and his siren ways with Kono and the coin. Could either be a symbol of death for Sasu or Naru, especially if only dead heros adorn the trinkets? Are they inviting a trojan horse into their midsts? I anticipate the next chapter!
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  • From roro237 on August 12, 2010
    WoW!!! Kono has a lover:) I know it's to early to be sure but I do hope he's not a spy or anything?! Can I take it that Inari is in love with our wild child Tayuya:) It seem like Sumaru might have an eye on her to?:) You already know what I found so sweet that I did the fangirl squeal NARUTO and SASUKE coins I love it! ^_^
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  • From Prism0467 on August 12, 2010
    Konohamaru is a himbo.
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  • From ANON - richon on August 12, 2010
    Really enjoy reading your story !! I am craving for more!!!
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  • From RyuEarth on August 12, 2010
    Why do I feel that Kono-kun is lining himself up to get hurt??? Dx

    But awesome update! Thank you! =)

    As for the ff(.)net thing, people over there are weird (or stuck up/can't see a good story even if you shove it in their faces), it might take a while to get it up and running... and tend to be more SasuNaru fans (but that is just my thoughts on it, since I read this for the plot then the NaruSasuNaru moments) ^^;;;;;;
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 12, 2010
    for some reason when you wrote about the coin with naru and sasu on it, it made me think of the song Us by Regina Spektor...weird.

    anyway this was a good chapter, i liked the fact that sumaru is letting tayuya know that he it interested in her, and he will only take her as she is, and not expect her to change for him.

    i'm anxious to see how itachi's daughter is growing. i can't wait to see how he will behave as a daddy.
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  • From meowkuu2 on August 09, 2010
    yay!! I love it and I want more of it, what can I say, this stories addictive ^____^
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