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Reviews for Iteration

By : mannahpierce
  • From ANON - LovelessAngel on August 27, 2010
    I just want to let you know that I love your series. I have to admit that when I am reading it I tend to lose track of time and tend to end up in this wonderful world with the characters. Your writing is so emotional that I find myself feeling what the characters are feeling. I want to let you know that I am very happy that you have continued and cannot wait until the next chapter. Personal question? How long have you been writing fan fic? I write a little myself and would love to become as talented as you are about drawing your readers into your world.
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  • From RyuEarth on August 27, 2010
    To tell the truth, I never noticed chapter 8 until you updated to chapter 9 ^^;;;;

    And I don't review all the time, not on aff anyway =/
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  • From Prism0467 on August 26, 2010
    The fall semester has begun in many places, I suspect.

    You won't lose me.
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  • From blugirlami21 on August 26, 2010
    I am still reading but I think with all the different stories you have started, it might just be confusing to the other readers. I think you could have easily included this set of stories into Tales of Tarrasade but I can see that you want them to be apart from one another. So it's a bit of a dilemma I think. As for the story, I'll review everything since I didn't review before. It's interesting. I am sort of enjoying learning more about the minor characters of the main storyline but I say sort of because I am much more interested in Sasuke and Naruto's story with their relationship, the kits, and Kakashi and Iruka. And that also may be why it's a quiet time for Iteration. The reader just may not be as interested or invested in reading about Inari, Konohamaru, Tayuya, and Sumaru. I am intrigued by Ranmaru's story and what his role as spy will ultimately impact the characters we care about. I can see that he has been brainwashed by Konan but I also think he feels more for Maru than he thinks. I would want the Uchiha to show mercy, maybe rehabilitate him but he is also a threat, a major threat because of who he is working for. So if you don't mind a smaller audience for this story, I think it could turn out to be a very good story, one that I will continue to read as you post it.
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  • From ANON - v on August 26, 2010
    August must be a quiet time for site..school starting soon!! Still love the writing and love seeing the characters and story grow!!
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  • From satterb on August 26, 2010
    I follow this story faithfully. I don't always review, (sorry). This universe you've created is brilliant! Great work, and I look forward to more. I love Haku, and Sasuke and Naruto are lovely. Also, many of us go back to university in the fall, and getting used to the new work load leaves us with very little time to spend here. But I will always stop to read your stories. Thanks for all your hard work.
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  • From NarutoVixin on August 26, 2010
    Ino = Cat
    Hanabi = Cat
    Hinata = Cat

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  • From ANON - the_boyfriend on August 25, 2010
    hi,
    can`t wait for more. Ohhhh, now orochimaru is back and Ranmaru is connected with the Akatsuki. Let see where the intrigue will bring ous. Update soon. The character that comes in my mind just like that is Sai I think he should be a panther (black) or cat hybrid. He is lean and well define muscles but not bulky in body type. There is Suigetsu (he could be anything, I don`t know to much of this one; with his white hair he could be a snow leopard or fox) and Jugo (I see this guy as a bear due to his stature and the fact that he is a beserker). Also Deidara, hidan, kakuzu and Madara are left of the characters that I know. Which alligence will they have? Since the story is not the quite the same. Keep with the good work.
    read you later.
    :)
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  • From ANON - intresator on August 23, 2010
    I have read all that you have posted, and i love your work. Your work is creative and well writen, sorry i havent yet taken the time to review but i just wanted to say that your amazing, and that i hope you keep wrighting! Anyway, no mater what i'll keep reading!!!
    oh and by the way your in my top 5 authers on AFF.net!! Keep it up.
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  • From meowkuu2 on August 22, 2010
    hellooo!!! haven't lost me as a reader just been out of luck with the net for awhile, I both love and am afraid of what's happening in the story...I don't knu if I can manage something disastrous happening....(i was suspicious of that ranmaru guy....)
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  • From ANON - Jenova625 on August 22, 2010
    Man--I feel so bad for Kabuto, he's so abused T~T He needs to find someone better XP

    Aww~ poor little Deluded!Pawn!Ranmaru DX

    GAH--I'M SO EXCITED FOR ITA-CHAN AND KISA-CHAN TO GET BACK TO HA-CHAN AND BABY!MAI~!! *0* -loses mind- I love that her name is Mai, by the way, that's so pretty~
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  • From ANON - lonelylulaby on August 22, 2010
    It's probably just the back to school craze, and people are just distracted. By-the-by I really enjoyed this chapter and thought you did a wonderful job. I can't wait till you update again. Why did Orochimaru have to come back, and Ranmaru I want to shoot him so he doesn't integrate into the Uchiha household.
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  • From ANON - ash on August 22, 2010
    Hey hey... I heard you wrote august was a quite month for reviews. Well that is just unacceptable! This story is great and I am so happy you are continuing it with more sagas. This one is prooving very interesting! I am excited to see what you plan to use akatsuki for, and kennenth just got a lot more interesting haha. I kind of hope the target is sasuke. Sasuke almost seems to be fading from the plot a little bit to me. Naruto has taken almost all the light when he is around... otherwise it is the children. I adore sasuke in your story so I hope something big brings him back in. It is almost like he is just laying on the shoulders of all those around him while he himself gets all the credit for doing nothing. Anyway thats just my point. I LOVE this story this story to pieces! Keep writing!
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  • From roro237 on August 21, 2010
    Space Queen that was awesome! The message from the holoprojection was some incredible writing! ~Bowing~ to you on that wOw! The plot really thicken up with this chapter. I loved it ^_^
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  • From roro237 on August 19, 2010
    I didn't realize how much I misses our boys until now:) That was an all round great chapter! There was something about everyone. Espeically a Naruto Sasuke and the children hog like myself:) Kakashi and the scissors was funny:) Space Queen I loved it ^_^
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