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Reviews for Iteration

By : mannahpierce
  • From Prism0467 on September 29, 2010
    I adore those Naruto and Sasuke moments.

    A weasel? This should be interesting.

    And was Tsume making eyes at Kisame? Ooooh...
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  • From ahmenet on September 29, 2010
    Priceless. Simply priceless. You've made such wonderful use of the summons from the manga. I am deeply impressed and thoroughly enjoying this story. Thank you for sharing such a wonderful gift.
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  • From meowkuu2 on September 25, 2010
    nnoooo!!!!!!!!!! they found out!!!!!!!!!! *frantic* what's gonna happen!!????
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  • From roro237 on September 25, 2010
    OMG!! They know who Shik is! The plot thicken and boils:)
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  • From Prism0467 on September 25, 2010
    Oh, Jesus, not this again. Leave Shikamaru alone, for crying out loud!
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  • From cynaga on September 25, 2010
    Gaara-chan!


    ...



    do NOT come after our Shika!
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  • From ANON - the_boyfriend on September 24, 2010
    hi,

    i'm late in my read, it's been a while. But, you have always my support and can't wait to read more. As for more hybirds the ones that come to my head are the twins Udon and Sakon(the two bullies,ie: hyena), sai(cat type), yamato(even if you kill his tenzo ''form'', strong bear), tsume or hana(dog type). Good luck
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  • From GudenMulle on September 23, 2010
    They want Shikamaru. WELL THEY CANNOT HAVE HIM!!! Where is Deidara in this mess?
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  • From meowkuu2 on September 23, 2010
    CRAZY!!!!!!!! I LOVE THIS TWIST! LOL!....this makes me VERY VERY HAPPY...damn...I wonder what will happen to gaara....more please
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  • From Prism0467 on September 22, 2010
    Oh no! Why are they messing with Gaara? What's going to happen to GAARA?!
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  • From cynaga on September 22, 2010
    someone pls save Gaara!!!!
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  • From GudenMulle on September 19, 2010
    I have sort of an ambivalent view on your fic. On one hand; I LOVE it, the story, the way the characters have developed, how you bring in minor characters instead of the obvious ones, and so on. On the other; I have a job, and when I'm not working, eating, writing or sleeping, I'm just plain exhausted, and you have so MANY chapters, and they are so long, and I don't want the pleasure of your hard work being cut up in pieces (me reading a few chapters here and there) because, nomatter how exciting the story is, I will fall asleep when I finally have time to read late at night. (Please don't be offended I can fall asleep in the midst of the most exciting action-movie). You wondered why the number of reviews have lessened, maybe it is because there are others like me who find the sheer volume and mass of your work a bit.. overwhelming? Please don't misunderstand, we all love your work, but it's alot. It was definitely a good idea to stop "In the cold of space .." where you did, and start a new one as ther sequel. I LOVE "Tales of .." because I can mostly remember the first story, and those moments in time for the different characters are fantastic.

    Now for the real review! I was, as usual, intrigued and drawn in. I'm worried about Kabuto, as crazy as it sounds, the guy has some SERIOUS problems. I love how you have all these different types of people living together, when their types really should clash ALOT. Example; Haku's personality actually annoys me relatively much, but he is a good person, so I still like him any way, y'know? And, it may unrealistic, but I LOOVE that most of the people think rationally about most things before taking action or speaking, something that the real world is sorely lacking.. Shikamaru just steals my heart away..

    I've read all these chapters in one go, as well as the new ones of the "Tales of ..", and this review is supposed to cover both, because I really have to sleep now XD. I'd LOVE to receive a notification whenever a new chapter is up, for this one or for the others :) . My email: egf_tas@hotmail.com
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  • From ANON - richon on September 18, 2010
    yes ramaru is okay, the uchiha familly has got a new menber !!I love this fic !! see you soon
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  • From nivell on September 18, 2010
    Another member added to the Uchiha family. My mind is going to boggle from trying to remember all their names. XD
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  • From satterb on September 18, 2010
    I can't describe the intense emotion I sometimes experience from reading your stories. I was teary eyed at the end of this chapter, and I look forward to seeing more of the grandmother. I'm so happy for Kiba. He tries so hard and deserves so much happiness. Thanks for all your hard work!
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