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Reviews for Iteration

By : mannahpierce
  • From missbri88 on October 05, 2010
    One of these days you're gonna get me in trouble... This saga is too awesome for me to stop. Everytime I see a new update I MUST stop everything else to read it then. I'm even skipping food on my lunch breaks. I love this and thanks so much for sharing!
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  • From ANON - jalana on October 03, 2010
    I normally don't read AU/AR stories, but your series is truly engaging. I found myself completing "In the cold of space", "Tales", and "Iteration" all in the space of two days. The world you have created in these stories has been so fascinating, and I can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - lonelylulaby on October 03, 2010
    OMG, this chapter was so sweet at the end. And then the explanation for Kiba's absence through his point of view I liked very much. I can't wait till you update again. Keep up the good work

    ja ne till next time
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  • From meowkuu2 on October 03, 2010
    yea!!!!!!!
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  • From blugirlami21 on October 02, 2010
    Aww, the end was so cute. I hope you don't stop writing these stories because I look forward to each update. I don't always review and I will have to work on that in the future. It was interesting to see how the absence of Kiba could shake the family so badly. I didn't think that the children cared for Kiba to that degree. I'm not sure why I felt that way but that is how their interactions have come across possibly because Kiba is very no nonsense with the children. So on the flip side it was really nice to see the children cling to him and be happy to see him. Haru is Haru as they say. The way Haru thinks of himself as a nuisance or a troublemaker kind of worries me. He is those things but he is a small child. I know we had Rin's chapter and while I understand her better I still hate her. This chapter kind of underlines why. She's irresponsible when it comes to what she says to people, what she implies and how she thinks things should be. Other than that, good stuff as always, I look forward to the next update whenever that may be. Don't be afraid to space out the updates, every other day(s) is great for us because we are greedy but it can't always be easy for you.
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  • From ANON - Moonmoore on October 02, 2010
    I am a little confused with Gaara's reactions. I had understood that he was cloned and all the bad things done to the clones, he didn't experienced. I really don't remember him being hurt but I guess he woke up at more than one time while in the pod and that traumatized him? However, I like that he is finally accepting Lee and I hope the phermones help him get him his hybrid. Man, that Haru is one smart cookie! Sheesh. Poor Itachi, he indebeted to half the world and what's worse he has Haku as a conscience that never lets him forget. *snickers*

    Sorry for being absent lately. I keep reading but I am usually in lurking mode so I don't review. I just wanted to let you know that even if I don't review I am here and that seeing an email alerting me to a new chapter always brings a smile to me face and it sparks excitment for the future read. Do please don't get discouraged, do keep writing and I greatly appreciate all the effort and time you invest in this course of action. Thank you very much! Please keep them coming! *snuggles*

    Sincerely

    Moonmoore
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  • From ANON - richon on October 02, 2010
    haru is amazing, lee fell better and gaara too. I really love your story !!! See you soon !!!!
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  • From roro237 on October 02, 2010
    My computer is running at the speed of a snail on this cloudy day:) The three year old is amazing! I love how the kits are running jumping oh hell I love reading about all the children and crew! You are the amazing one Space Queen to keep all these incredible people places and emotions going strong. This is another great chapter! Thank you for your hard work ^_^
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  • From ANON - v on October 02, 2010
    What a good chapter..I love your story. The glimpses of the children and their misbehaving is always cute and wonderful. I'm so excited for Lee!! and seeing how much Kiba means to everyone is heartwarming. Poor Gaara. *sniffle*
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  • From ANON - Icenight009 on October 02, 2010
    "The trial was extremely hopeful. In Kiba’s absence, Gaara hugged the pillow that they had sprayed. He was calmer. He even slept.

    Two days later Lee rotated as they sprayed him."

    I laughed so hard reading this part. I loved those lines so much, I think you just got me back into the Gaara/Lee pairing. And it's been years since I've ever considered it. I'm writing this review just to remind you that I'm still reading every chapter of Iteration and Tales of Terrasade(sp?) you post. If you keep writing, hell, I'll keep reading for sure!
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  • From cynaga on October 02, 2010
    I love the round about way you told Gaara and Lee's story through Kiba~!

    Your stories are so emotionally fulfilling they don't need explicit sexual content.

    However, I really enjoy the sexual content and if I were to make any "criticism" of your work, it would be that more sexual content should be included.

    Just an opinion. Like they say, we all have one... doesn't means it's "right"...
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 02, 2010
    i'm sorry i've been a bit lazy at leaving you reviews lately.....i am still a devoted fan reading all your stories......and this particular chapter had me almost crying at how the kits reacted to the possibility that kiba was fed up with them....ugh heart breaking....Haru is my little hero....i'm in love with the tiny Uchiha...I just want to beg and plead that he have some interaction with his uncle Itachi.

    i know Haru knows Itachi is his uncle, I just want a nice genius to genius conversation it would be interesting to see how Itachi reacts to the little genius before his own daughter is born. Will Haru be starting school soon?
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  • From Prism0467 on October 02, 2010
    Oh, wow...
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  • From bloodshound on October 02, 2010
    wow, man u r fast with the up dates. your muse must really be on a roll. Kudos.
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  • From ANON - Jenova625 on October 02, 2010
    Please let Gaara be okay and not have any terrible side-effects~ D:

    I love Kamatari! He's adorable~
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