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By : mannahpierce
  • From Prism0467 on October 13, 2010
    Uh-oh.
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  • From nivell on October 10, 2010
    Cute chapter with the kids all going on an adventure. Something about the sex scenes in this story irks me a little as I see (and I may be a little petty about this) are the more prevalent SasuNaru scenes (which are described heavily than the Narusasu scenes). I admit that I am a NaruSasu fan and your story starts out with Naruto being more dominating and fucking Sasuke whereas here, it's the other way around. Would be nice to see more of a balance or seeing Sasuke get dominated more by Naruto. Sorry if I sound petty, but that's just my honest opinion.
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  • From ANON - telynaayuri on October 10, 2010
    i know i havent reviewed in a while so im going to now. this story and your others are simply amazing.
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  • From meowkuu2 on October 09, 2010
    As I was reading this chapter I felt all warm and fuzzy...then at the end I was like...oh shit they know about shikamaru!!!!!!!!!!..Which broke the fuzzy feeling of happiness and now I'm anxious for more!

    *waves hand* oh question...Since Uchiha is getting so popular and are bond to create more enemies just because some people are evil wouldn't it also be a good thing for the adult and teenage members of the group who don't know how to fight to learn at least some basic self-defense..you know..just in case? ...mew
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  • From ANON - lonelylulaby on October 09, 2010
    I don't know what it was about this chapter, but it make me keep on thinking about how Naruto wont be there for the long run and I made me sad. Oh well, I need to be like Sasuke and just live in the moment and quit worrying. You did another excellent job if I do say so my self, and I do ^_^. Can't wait for what comes next.

    ja ne till next time and keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - v on October 09, 2010
    I adored this chapter so much... I love to see how their family grows..of how important the children are to all of them..This is my favorite story line in all of AFF. Some things are worrying for me..like evil people in their lives, Naruto and Kiba's lifespans, how much responsiblility Shika has, if Itachi will handle having a child well...but I think that I'll trust in the "god" of their little world (you) and know that you will lead them where there meant to be...Its also a little worrying to me that I'm pulled into your storylines this much (lol), but I'll just aquit that to you being a wonderful author :)
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  • From roro237 on October 09, 2010
    The adventure/training was grant:) I loved it! You're the bomb for having all the children on a outing:) But I think you know what my favorite part was? Yess! Sasuke turning a fluffy soft Naruto is always a welcome read and a hot one I might add ^_^
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  • From ANON - richon on October 09, 2010
    oh an aventure, I want one too!!Work is so boring!!I need more action!! I love your story
    See you soon !!
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  • From cynaga on October 09, 2010
    Where do I go to pledge to Uchiha?
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  • From Prism0467 on October 09, 2010
    OMG OMG OMG adventure! And what an adventure it was! I could just see them all tethered together, moving in zero gravity, and riding on the train with Kakashi as conductor. Wonderful!

    Mannah, your lemons are not explicit, but that does nothing to detract from their impact. I feel all of the love shared by the characters when they are intimate. It's beautiful!

    I have two children myself and know how lucky Sasuke must feel.
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  • From cynaga on October 09, 2010
    I guess you showed me... :D

    I enjoyed the Adventure just as much (if not more!) than the delightful SasuxNaru that followed it.
    Your dialog is so engaging and revealing of character.
    I enjoyed it so much when Sasuke questioned the children about the "rules of adventure'.

    Your writing is like hot cocoa in front of the fire on a cool Fall night. ♥

    Thank you so much for sharing and considering input from the readers!!!
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  • From ANON - silverblaise on October 09, 2010
    I'm ashamed to admit I am a terrible reviewer but I promise I am still devouring this series each time a new chapter comes out. It's too hard to say which bits I like, because there are so many! Reading this story I've laughed out loud and been teary eyed, sometimes in the same chapter! I hope this series will continue for a long time to come. :-)
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  • From bloodshound on October 09, 2010
    wonders if sakura will ever put in an appearance as something other than a ship and if ino will put in an appearance at all... or did she already as part of Tsunade's crew. Can't remember.
    At any rate i could so totally see Sakura as a kitty... or maybe something to do with her name, do they have plant based hybrids in this? And Ino as an Ino-pig of some sort (like no one saw that coming. lol.) Ino pig the warrior boar, dealing with the flowers of her friendly rival Sakura hybrid. hehe.
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  • From Prism0467 on October 06, 2010
    So...Ebisu has his own hybrid and Katamari is learning the lay of Uchiha land. Interesting.

    My how the crew has grown!
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  • From blugirlami21 on October 06, 2010
    Interesting developments. It was nice to see the crew from someone who is kind of on the outside. Makes you look at their relationships differently and for some reason I wasn't aware that everyone was on the ship at the same time. I'm starting to think Amachi hybrids aren't as rare as I thought. You somehow manage to include a new character into the middle of things. I have to admit I'm no super interested in meeting more new characters in addition to the lot we have now but that's how I am with any story I read. Anyway good update I am looking forward to reading more.
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