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By : mannahpierce
  • From bloodshound on October 23, 2010
    so torn. i want to wait till i know how the raid goes but at the same time i find myself here reading the latest offering before i can help myself.... damn adictive stories. ^^ *mock shakes fist.
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  • From ANON - v on October 23, 2010
    The suspense of this situation just keeps building...I'm on the absolute edge of my seat..although I have no idea whats going to happen and thats kinda freakin me out..I hope no one gets hurt, again though i'll trust in your vision and just hope you won't make me cry :) also, loved the little snippet about how the children think of their To-chan and Papa, so heartwarming.
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  • From meowkuu2 on October 20, 2010
    ..THIS MAKES ME HAPPY!!! I'm soo glad for your fics you have no idea...more please.. feed the addiction!..Though it is terrifying that Sasuke wants to be in the front lines...has he been training at all?? scary thought if something happens to him..then again if Naruto flips..alot of baddies will go down in a matter of seconds...

    more please mew -^_^-
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  • From bloodshound on October 20, 2010
    woah, risky much.
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  • From Prism0467 on October 20, 2010
    Chapter 25: Sasuke grows a set.

    Awesomeness.
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  • From roro237 on October 20, 2010
    WoW! I knew something big was coming but I didn't think Sasuke would be on the front line! This is going to get scary huh?! I like how you always give us a taste of old with your touches on it:) Tonton I like:) This was out of this world as usual oh great Space Queen of Naruto Universe ^_^
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  • From ANON - richon on October 17, 2010
    oh shika is so a strategist !! how many move has he beforehand in his sleeve ?? too much. i really want to know what the plan is. see you soon
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  • From roro237 on October 16, 2010
    WoW! Shika is really something else. I shouldn't have been surprise but wOw all that going on?!! Of course the absolute best was the thing Sasuke said that has him tearing up:) Yea I'm thinking Haru will get his jokes:) Great chapter ^_^
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  • From OniKamiKitsune on October 16, 2010
    Brilliant love shika, want my own naruto and sasuke and i think Tannyo three just stole a piece of my litle black soul...

    cant wait for the next installment!

    Oni~K
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  • From ANON - cynaga on October 16, 2010
    You love Shikamaru. I love Shikamaru too. I thought he crossed the line... Sasuke handled it well.
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  • From bloodshound on October 16, 2010
    wonders who Tennyo three is...
    hey, will Sai ever be making an appreance? He, Ino and Sakura are the main three still missing at this point.
    As usual, your story sucks me in and leaves me waiting in anticipation. It doesn't hurt that u up date super regularly too. Thanks for the good work.
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  • From OniKamiKitsune on October 14, 2010
    hey just wanted to say i have been following your stories from the very begining and to my shame this is my first review.
    I love the depth of your universe you have created though the out line of your characters are taken from another midium what you have started to create has urged my soul to soar during the highs, to plumet during the lows to hum with the continuos follow of desire, lust and of coures love both in evident and unreqited.
    The interaction of naruto and sasuke and thier children is bueatifull to read, even with trubbled times on the horizen i still feel rivited and await all your updates with bated breath.
    If you ever doublt wether you are still being read i say now i will be here till the time you hang up your keyboard.
    your ever adoring reader

    Oni~K
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  • From ANON - richon on October 14, 2010
    I nearly misse this new chapter.Hopefuly I check everyday... ooho shika you are dead man but so ingenious. hopefully they will stop de massacre . see you soon
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  • From meowkuu2 on October 13, 2010
    ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh somebody's in trouble!!!!..I too would like to know what Sasuke-sama wants to know
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  • From blugirlami21 on October 13, 2010
    I didn't review the last chapter and I apologize. When there are chapters more focused on fun or the kits I don't have much to say because they are my favorites and I am usually satisfied with what you have written down. This was an interesting chapter. I'm not gonna lie, I skimmed through most of the hybrid/purebred stuff because it kind of bores me. Not because of your writing but because if it's not directly connected with the main plot or the characters then I lose interest. It's just the way I am. I don't like reading about people I don't like and Kabuto and Orochimaru are at the top of that list followed by Rin and maybe Haku. I want to like Haku but something about him rubs me the wrong way. Anyway it seems things are rolling along with Kabuto and Orochimaru's plans but it's nice to know that some people are opposed and went to the Uchiha for help. However I am afraid of the consequences of Oro getting his hands on Sasuke or Naruto or one of the kits or Shikmaru or anyone from the family because it would break my heart for anything to happen to them. I know that they can't always save the day but I am afraid of what happens when they actually can't. It seems that Shikamaru has some splainin to do. I can't wait to see how that conversation goes over.
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