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By : mannahpierce
  • From bloodshound on October 28, 2010
    damn al thuis building tension. *hovers on edge of seat.
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  • From ANON - the_boyfriend on October 27, 2010
    hi,

    It`s been a while, trying to catch up on my reading. I work like crazy. Poor kiba, I hope he does not regres to much. Is itachi going to address ``back to the kenel behavior`` issue. So lee could hope! I have to ask; if inari and tayuya eventually will be a couple or a treesome with sumaru. Cause sumaru should have something else then training in mind. interesting deidara is in the picture now, cool I like the crazy blond. I should stop or I`ll blabla forever.
    read you later
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  • From roro237 on October 27, 2010
    WoW! That was ah-inspiring:) I could visualize all the colors and feel the intenseness of the situation. That was the bomb Space Queen. I'm ready for battle! Oh and Papa was so sweet with Ha-chan ^_^
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  • From ANON - liby318 on October 27, 2010
    Sorry for the lack of review, but I have been reading each chapter and the story is still as good now as when you started it. Thank you for all of your hard work in giving us a truly wonderful story.
    I really liked the last line of this chapter!
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  • From ANON - eau_vive on October 27, 2010
    hi,

    I did a lot of read in one shot, it has been a while. Wow, we need more of shika x neji sex life. Look like neji can take it now! Talking about weasel what happen to the minky army (the 30 little solders they stole from the lab)? Hey, what with Haru playing people, so much for a genius? I`m surprise with kiba, how can he think the children don`t love him? I think I should stop with all thoses questions. So much to look forward. Keep with the good job.

    :)
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  • From Prism0467 on October 27, 2010
    Everyone is always so blinded by Naruto. He seems epic, larger than life, in this, and appropriately so. Reluctant folk hero, indeed.
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  • From ANON - lonelylulaby on October 27, 2010
    Aww man, why did it have to stop there? Not really a cliffy but close. lol really liked this chapter and I cannot wait to see what is going to happen next. Man all the excitement is going to be in the next chappy or the one after. Also thanks for the shoutout, I appreciate your writing and don't ever want ya to feel like people don't

    ja ne till next time
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  • From cynaga on October 27, 2010
    EXCITING STUFF!!!
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  • From ANON - SidonieStarr on October 24, 2010
    There is so much to admire about this story and your AU, I hardly know where to start. In Sasuke, you have, over time, created a compelling but human leader. The "Battle" chapter in "In the Cold of Space..." is one of my favorites and it's good to have confirmation in recent chapters the Sasuke we saw there wasn't a one-off. (In "Battle", I wasn't sure why, given all the technology, there was a need for a gunner [Naruto] but I'm completely willing to suspend disbelief on that one. And yes, I do remember [barely] that it's just a story.)

    The world the characters inhabit is rich and detailed: the spacer culture, Uchiha mores, hybrids, the (science fiction) communications and travel technology, the importance of economics. The desire of most of Uchiha to preserve the innocence of the few who do not have abusive backgrounds,is interesting. With respect to female characters, well, this is a slash story and that's really what we want to read about. Nonetheless, for most slash authors (and I am not one) I think the authors' own self-respect requires that they acknowledge the importance of women, but they are usually two-dimensional. Tayuya is an exception and I can't wait to see what happens with her. Thanks. Sidonie
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  • From ANON - telynaayuri on October 24, 2010
    Pap loves to-chan too. i love the end of this chapter. its good that they got that instead of them thinking they were fighting/hurting each other.
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  • From meowkuu2 on October 24, 2010
    ...........AWESOMENESS TO THE EXTREME!!!!!

    1) I AM ON THE FRIGGIN EDGE OF MY SEAT WAITING TO SEE HOW THIS SAVE THE HYBRID MISSION IS GONNA WORK OUT

    2) “To-chan loves Papa lots,” Hikaru whispered......
    Papa loves To-chan too,” Ryuu observed into the silence that followed."

    I LOVE THE MINDS OF THESE KIDS!
    ......Your stories and writings make me happy
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  • From ANON - lonelylulaby on October 24, 2010
    I just realized something, you have to be some kind of typed genius too, because you are the one coming up with all of Shika's eccentricities and super smartness. Just wanted to let you know that I really liked this chapter, especially the end about to-san and papa loving each other. You are doing an excellent job and I'm sorry I don't tell you that enough.

    keep up the good work and see ya next time
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  • From ANON - Midnight Essence on October 23, 2010
    Ooooh... Out of the mouths of children... Lol!

    But the drama is building and the battle is looming. I can't wait to see more.
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  • From roro237 on October 23, 2010
    OMG! That was intense and just wOw!! I'm ready to put on my battle gear after that:) What the children thought was the sweetest. I loved it!!! You know what I love so much still about the saga is no matter what the love Naruto and Sasuke share is so never ending:) It's like their together power. What I'm getting at is I understand why it's so important for them to be seen on the station. That's why you are my Space Queen of the Naruto Universe. 'Yea Baby' ^_^
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  • From Prism0467 on October 23, 2010
    "Papa loves To-chan too."

    LOL who wouldn't?
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