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By : mannahpierce
  • From ANON - v on November 04, 2010
    This has become so exciting, aside from the fact that I think your trying to kill me by suspense alone, there's just so much to worry about...and that line, that wonderful, thrilling line as a cliffhanger!! What an incredible call to arms..I can almost see it in my head..that title alone peaked my interest into reading about the universe you've created with your unbelievable imagination, I'm so grateful you've invited us in to experience it with you. :)
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  • From ANON - Ryu Earth on November 04, 2010
    The ending of this chapter was spine tingling! xD
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  • From meowkuu2 on November 03, 2010
    I was wondering when we'd see Sakura show herself
    and YEA!!! I HOPE THE FIGHTS ARE SUPER EPIC!!!
    Though I'm afraid of people getting hurt...but the speech was epic!! NO GUTS NO GLORY! TEAM UCHIHA KILL KILL KILL!!
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  • From ANON - SidonieStarr on November 03, 2010
    The Uchiha call to battle! Yes!
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  • From roro237 on November 03, 2010
    WoW wOw and one more wOw! That had action all over the place. Yea Baby! I always enjoy the way you come up with the old but new characters. Sakura! I'm looking forward to see how she will fit in:) Space Queen this was incredible. I loved it ^_^
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  • From ANON - lonelylulaby on November 03, 2010
    Another awesome chapter just shoting out of your fingertips. LOVED IT. I just have a question, is 'in the cold of space you find the heat of suns' the spacer motto? Cause if it was it had never clicked until this chapter, lol. Anywho keep up the good work. this is awesome.

    ja ne till next time and see ya next time
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  • From bloodshound on November 03, 2010
    Yayz! Sakura made an appearance. Tytytytytyty. And things are getting tense. This bodes bad things.
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  • From ANON - jalana on November 03, 2010
    Oh, I'm so glad you found a way to work Sakura into the story as something other than the ship!

    Thanks for another great chapter!
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  • From roro237 on October 30, 2010
    When I read the title I got scare! What could the mistake be? Thank goodness it was nothing to do with our boys:) You know how you get a call at work and you think bad things first:) I mean it is bad that a look alike got on board but there is no danger this time. Security will have to look into that:) Wonderful chapter as always ^_^
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  • From ANON - Moonmoore on October 30, 2010
    Wow! I'm austounded for all that has happened. I can't even process it all! I am amazed by you! You are a genius! I hadn't been able to chack on this story for almost 3 weeks. Now I just want more and more and I have this huge rush of adrenaline that I don't know what I am going to eliminate. Wow, really there are no words. I had been thinking about the situation on The Warren and the lack of action for The Uchiha or Naruto to try and do something to help them out. I am so glad that something is finally being done and I just hope the don't suffer any casualties. My mind is going crazy with all the possibilities but it comes up with so many that they are almost immeadiatly discared and new spring up to replace them. You really have my mind sppining! I gotta love you! I tip my hat to you, you are amazing. What a talent lady. Thanks for sharing this part of your life with us and I will be waiting for bated breath for your next installment. *kisses*



    Sincerely


    Moonmoore

    PS: I love the ending of the last chapter! Indeed, Naruto is Naruto and like him nobody! *Hugs Naru*

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  • From ANON - v on October 30, 2010
    I'm so nervous, your evil..horribly, wonderfully evil!! What is going to happen..I don't know!! I can't wait to find out...unfortunately that means i'll be checking for the next chapter..over and over and over...my weekend is shot...still love your writing completely and the storyline is "on the edge of your seat" exciting...is there going to be a battle? Will someone we all love get hurt?...what is gonna happen??!! I'll be the one banging my head on my computer desk while waiting patiently for your next update (lol) :)
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  • From meowkuu2 on October 30, 2010
    I was soooo happy when I saw two chapter to read!!! yea!...but..Han...He feels like he's gonna cause some problems in the not too disitant future..like he might flip his lid and want to "liberate" Naruto from Sasuke..or some such foolishness...I don't think the Uchiha charm is gonna work on that guy..plus he seems that he wants to get "fame" more than help hybrids

    Next..OMG! Sickler..you big idiot..*sighs* poor Ebisu....

    Is there gonna be like some major kick-ass fighting btw Sumaru and Kimimaro??? I feel it in ma bones!!!

    and always...THANK YOU FOR THIS EPIC STORY!! ^____________^
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  • From Prism0467 on October 30, 2010
    Wow. Who knew?
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  • From cynaga on October 30, 2010
    better than ever!
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  • From bloodshound on October 30, 2010
    damn your good. another update already. Oh I hope they can get to Sicklers person in time.
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