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By : mannahpierce
  • From Dorkchic on September 14, 2011
    I wonder if Karin was in on this one? She is on the station so it would make sense that she at least had a hand in the support aspect of the operation..... I seriously hope bad things happen to her.
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  • From ANON - A on September 14, 2011
    *phew* And all is well...

    Great chapter as always Mannah-san
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on September 14, 2011
    That was perfect! That's what I've been waiting for! That's what I want to read after a shitty day at work!

    I think it lifted everybody's spirits, especially Shikamaru's (and mine!)
    But it also dangerously looks like coming to an end. Naruto is getting better and all...
    I hope that the end of the series that you were talking about won't mean the end of the story.
    I wonder what do you plan for the continuation. Another small jump in time?
    I also hope for some really good smut with growling-possessive Naruto when he gets better!

    Thanks for this awesome update!
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  • From ANON - richon on September 14, 2011
    yes orichimaru is dead, they did it !!it's so good, I really don't like him !! Everybody participate and they are safe, naru you can slel well!! Love this stoy so much !! see you soon !!
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  • From cynaga on September 14, 2011
    [ch 115] Wonderful A C T I O N chapter~! A real treat.
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  • From ladybird425 on September 14, 2011
    Aaah, that sneaky snake QQ
    And, of course, suicide on top of it >.
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  • From Dreamfool on September 13, 2011
    Note to self: do not stop looking for updates on this fic for more than a month. I mean damn I had a lot to catch up on. I'm so glad the Sumiko issue was resolved and that Naruto may get his legs back. I'm also happy to see En-san and In-san in a healthy relationship. I look forward to the next update.
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  • From missbri88 on September 13, 2011
    Oh my goodness, I was literally shaking during this chapter! Matter of fact, I'm still shaking. I am completely blown away by your writing with each and every chapter you post and I'm always looking forward to more. So until next time.
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  • From ANON - kanazerosukenaru on September 13, 2011
    Ha! I had complete faith in you Shikamaru...I knew you wouldn't fail us, but OMG it was a treat, a real treat to have Naruto back in a gunners/pilot seat. No one can aim and fire like he can..NO ONE.

    Orochimaru, bit off more than he can chew this time, and my dearest hope is that Kisame catches his pasty ass. How Grand would for Kisame to have an opportunity to avenge his Uchiha? Becasue Kisame was still wearing his plaque when all of those atrocities were done to Itachi in Orochimarus Lair. Itachi may not be an Uchiha in name now, but Kisame was, is, and will forever be his Beloved.

    I was incredibly pleased that Hannah and Kiba are working together, they are BOSSES!!! They are kicking asses and taking names, LOVE IT!

    I hope the rest of the crew will be safe on the ship and that they will be able to help soon. I also have to say that I see a Naruto/Sasuke like realtionship forming with Haru and Ran, even though they are too too young to know it yet, it's so darn cute to watch the chibi's watching out for each other like they do.

    Can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - richon on September 12, 2011
    ahah they are under attack!! i am not here 3 days and there it is !! 2 wonderful chapters full of action !! naru you are the best !! hopefully you will kill the other pot !! see you soon with more !!
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  • From ANON - v on September 11, 2011
    So excited to catch up on the chapters I had missed, gathering my thoughts and opinions in order to review in my usual organized, concise, and unemotional manner (lol)....and then...OH MY GOD!!! Who does this CRAZY, PSYCHO, PERVERT think he is!! Challenging Sasuke, attacking the household, trying to kidnap the kits, THE KITS!! We should skin him alive..and then kill him slow!!!....ahem..I mean, THEY should. (lol) :)
    On another note, Shikamaru is certainly holding up well, even dealing with allowing his thought process free reign, and Choza is definitely an unsung hero..he's always there taking care of everyone but when push comes to shove he's unbelievable in his devotion and willingness to throw himself in harms way. I'm so stressed, they need to win this one, they've only just begun to heal, I will not allow myself to believe that Naruto
    spent so much time training himself to adapt in order to defend, only to lose...*fingers crossed, nails bitten to the quick* :)
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  • From blugirlami21 on September 10, 2011
    That was terrifying. I am so anxious and nervous for the conclusion of this unexpected arc. Will everyone survive? I can't bear the thought of Orochimaru getting his hands on any of the children or any of the remaining Uchiha being killed. We have lost so many already. Only time will tell I guess.
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  • From ANON - angelj232000 on September 10, 2011
    No one can die. Seriously no one can die. I like the remaining members to much. Awesome action. I need to know what will happen. OMG I am going crazy already!!!! Keep up the awesome work.
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  • From Dorkchic on September 10, 2011
    Lets just hope that it wasn't a ploy to get Naruto off the station so he could be ambushed without the protection of others. Fortunately that is a huge longshot because I do not think anyone would have predicted that the paralysed person would be put out to the first line of defense. Fingers crossed!
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  • From ANON - SunaoTsuji on September 10, 2011
    chapter 114! woot! exciting climax! thanks so much for the update and i hope to read more from you soon! great appreciation for ur hard work!
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