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By : mannahpierce
  • From ANON - richon on November 08, 2010
    they won, naruto did go bersek. What will happen next. I really en joy this story. What happen to lee. see you soon . I love it
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  • From ANON - Mirror¢¼ on November 08, 2010
    I was first introduced to this saga [for that's what it is, an epic saga] on ff.net, and was immediately captured by it.
    It is by far one of the most plot-driven, original, and compelling fanfictions I've ever read. I can honestly tell you I have spent many a sleepless night just devouring your stories and hungering for more.
    It is not only the descriptive battle scenes [although those are nothing to scoff at] but the intricity of the dynamics between each character that makes this story such a good read. And that last one is no easy feat, I can tell you that much.
    And not only that, but you are an author that updates regularly too! I cannot tell you how many terrific stories I've read that have gone unfinished..
    So that being said, I will stop this rambling review and just condense my thoughts.

    YOU ROCK.


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  • From ANON - kanazerosukenaru on November 06, 2010
    man i owe you so many reviews...love every single chapter i am so happy that you have made this an epic. I LOVE IT!! keep up the good work.
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  • From meowkuu2 on November 06, 2010
    *EPIC SCREAMING* first I was like yea!! then I was like NOOOOOO!!! then I was like yea!!! yea!!! this chapter is filled with epic awesomeness! I had to stop reading then take a breath then start reading again cause I was soooo afraid!!! (and i still am in one sense)

    side note: You have made Naruto exceedingly WOW...I mean like..there are so many sides and personalities of him to explore now like..wow..I wanna see warrior-naruto again..but not in battle..more like..that sort of skill in the bedroom LOL!..and I am soo serious about that..he's sooo smexy serious I love it!
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  • From Prism0467 on November 06, 2010
    Uchiha makes a daring rescue. This was WONDERFUL!

    Are we nearing the end of this?
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  • From ANON - Jenova625 on November 06, 2010
    OH MA GAWSH--if I loved this more I think I'd die! THIS CHAPTER WAS SO GOOD!! DX
    Gaara is so adorable, he's growing, I love it so much! I was literally cheering for him when he hit that epiphany, I came "this close" to crying outright when he started actively protecting Lee! T~T -sobbing- That's so beautiful~
    I love that Naruto has learned to control his berserker side better. He just keeps becoming more awesome--what is that? It's kind of making me crazy--but like--good crazy XD
    ARGH--I'm so worried about all those hybrids in that tight space, and Ebisu and Sickler, and Inoichi! Please make them okay, if Ebisu, Sickler, Inoichi or any of the other Uchiha I've come to know and love die...I don't know what I'll do...probably cry about it for a while but--I really don't want that to happen. D: -resigns self- But if you will it as Almighty Author, I guess I'll have to accept it, right? I just wanted to put a bug in your ear--DON'T DO IT--PUH-LEASE DON'T DO IT! XO
    That's pretty much it ^^; Just stay awesome, okay? Whether it's fan-fics on AFF or other stuff someplace else, never stop writing please! And if you do move things somewhere else, or you write a book (-nudge nudge- ;D)let me know, I'll read everything and support you for as long as you write, okay? ^_^b -gives mountain of cookies for being so awesome-
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  • From ANON - v on November 06, 2010
    I feel so many emotions right now..Sasuke's and Naruto's first combat, how scary and awful. The heroics by his warriors, so damaged and yet so honorable. Gaara and Lee...I have no words. To read this chapter is to see the people they have become, may I just say..how well you've raised them up..How wonderful that you've born such heros...as always you never disappoint in your writing, whatever I imagine comes next, never compares to your fluid and fertile chapters that keep us all enthralled..I'm also a little weepy and grateful that N & S are alright, and I've decided to blame you that i'm over involved in this storyline..its just that good :)
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  • From ANON - gingitsune on November 06, 2010
    I love you! This & it's prequel are easily one of the best stories I have read in the SasuNaruSaru fandom. I have to admit I go to AFF every morning hoping for an update. I seriously don't know how you do it with the updates but as a fan, I'm very grateful.

    Btw I was really tickled last chapter to read this line,"In the cold of space...you find the heat of suns." :D I was wondering how long did you want to write that into the story! XD

    Thanks again for a wonderful story!
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  • From roro237 on November 06, 2010
    OMG! That was your greatest chapter to date. I can't fine the words to describe that incredible action:) WoW! You had so much going on. We were in every corridor. I said I was ready for the battle but I wasn't. I couldn't help the boys out:) That was so intense and I was scare. I fell in total love with Sasuke this time and my ever growing love for Naruto grew some more:) As Sasuke said "awesome". You are the Space Queen of Naruto Universe that's all that needs to be said! I'm chanting SQNU SQNU! ^_^
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  • From cynaga on November 06, 2010
    Hey, I wrote the first and the 200th reviews for this story. It's an HONOR! :>
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  • From cynaga on November 06, 2010
    I wish someone would make an animated film of your stories! These last few scenes were incredible! I'd love to see them. . . ♥

    Gaara saving Lee from Kimi (again) and still protecting Lee while beserk was intense. Warroir Naruto was also HOT. But the best, BEST is when Sasuke and the other spacers say, "In the cold of space, you find the heat of suns".

    APPLAUSE!!!!
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  • From bloodshound on November 06, 2010
    Warrior Naruto ftw. ^^
    Die you prick bastards die.
    Glad Gaara's finally come around.
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  • From ANON - Moonmoore on November 05, 2010
    Amazing as always. How you build the tension and then the cliffy with Sasuke and the spacers finishing his phrase...made my skin stand up. I loved the ending of this chapter. Really beautiful. I had been wondering if Sakura would be introduced and now I have my answer. I have been wanting to have the opportunity to have The Uchiha fighters, and of course, Naruto in action again. I do love to see Naruto fight. I find him enthralling in battle mode. You made him so awesome! I would have liked to see the meeting of Naruto with Sickler even if only in passing. I am a sucker for scenes where Naruto is hero-worshiped. Anyway, great job as always. I just a little sad I won't be able to read next chapter until up coming midweek. I hope that they find Sickler in time and that nothing too bad happened.

    Until Next Time


    Moonmoore
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  • From ANON - Jenova625 on November 04, 2010
    This is so good, I'm dying.
    That is all ^_^
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  • From blugirlami21 on November 04, 2010
    How exciting. It feels like we are about to go to war, I hope that there are no major casualties. It seems Sickler may be one but hopefully that is not the case. I was wondering when you were going to introduce Sakura if ever and you finally have. I must admit I am a little confused about who she is. Is she the woman that Shika activated a chapter or two ago? She seems to be really well informed and it sounds like she is gonna to have a big role in things to come. I miss my kits especially Haru, I hope we can get back to them soon. Good stuff, I can't wait to read what happens next.
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