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By : mannahpierce
  • From Prism0467 on November 17, 2010
    So much love! This chapter was perfect. So full of Shikamaru love! Thank you!
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  • From roro237 on November 17, 2010
    Kakashi had me giggling at he's on a roll:) Sometimes that man can be an ass but he showed me his stuff this time. I never thought about Shik like that untill Kakashi. I also got a good chuckle out of Sasuke saying stop sama-ing me so much:) Na-chan fixing any problems with the alpha males not following requests:) I love how the crew just fits together like puzzle pieces. This is a 'Yea Baby' chapter. It cover so many people and so many happening. ~Bowing~ to you Space Queen of the Naruto Universe ^_^
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  • From Cognizant on November 14, 2010
    Chapter 1-32. I've started off with reading the first arch of this fanfic and followed through with the second and now have caught up on the third one. You've woven a tale with your beautiful world and finding places for the Naruto crew to fit in. I'm anticipating an update to your series and I've read your original stories as well. Should you decide to publish, please let me know at sunao.tsuji@yahoo.com. Other wise, I'll be back again for more updates and reviews.
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  • From bloodshound on November 13, 2010
    I repeat... things are going to get hectic. Still, what is that nutty cow trying to accomplish. Seriously.
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  • From ANON - the_boyfriend on November 13, 2010
    hi,

    OMG, ``this is bad; real bad``(quote of Enzo, from Reboot) can`t wait for more. Update soon PLS. Keep with the good work. And I have to say what an amazing work you do. Cause I could not pull something like that.

    :)

    read you later
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  • From ANON - jackie on November 13, 2010
    Hi! Another review, this one for Chapter 32 =D

    I smiled at InariTayuya, you made them so sweet. And I loved that you put Shizune and Tonton into perspective, I wondered whether there would be the froggies and Naruto in the future. I kept imagining Gamakichi asking Naruto for snacks lol.

    The chapter's nice, I can't wait to read more :)
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  • From ANON - jackie on November 13, 2010
    I think it was me, don't worry about it, at least we got an early update :) Anyway, for the review, I think it goes like this:

    "Good arc, I like how you build the tension slowly towards the climax, and I'll miss Inoichi, he kind of grew on me from the previous chapters."
    (I think that was it, or maybe something about how I like Inoichi)

    On a side note, I just googled Chamu, he's actually a Narutocast, and here I thought that he was an OC. Is Sickler an OC? And please don't call me Janey D= Or maybe I did sign my review as Jane-y unconsciously...

    Sincerely,
    Jackie
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  • From ANON - v on November 12, 2010
    This is an unbelievable standoff...I could not have imagined any of it..I knew a battle would occur but this..the suspense just keeps building and building..all the sub-characters and how their choices and actions affect the story, each time I think I know what will happen I'm left with absolute shock and a little of WTF!!! I really want Sasuke to let shikamaru loose on the bad guys...however that would be sorta wrong..I guess..dammmit... lol. I also think that I have to go back and reread...I missed Han somewhere or just can't remember him..unless he's new...I think I might kinda like him though. :)
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  • From roro237 on November 12, 2010
    WoW! I'm nervous it looks like the game of life and death is beginning.
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  • From meowkuu2 on November 12, 2010
    like..wow...the action in this is speeding up! seriously I can't wait for the next chapter I am toooo excited to see what's going to happen next! ( I knew Han was going to cause trouble..he only wants fame not to actually help anyone...though his plan maybe useful in some way....)

    THANK YOU FOR YOU EPIC FICS!!! I anxiously await your next update ^________^
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  • From ANON - Nivell on November 11, 2010
    Nooo...Inoichi's dead??? Even though he was a minor character, it still saddens me that one of the oldest members of the crew, one of the Uchiha guardians died.
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  • From ANON - the horseman of death on November 11, 2010
    well it looks like the next chapter would best be called ...and then the shit hit the fan... on noes inoichi i liked that selfish baka if only because kiba threw him and that was funny, now who will try to mess with choza's relationship with kiba which boiled down is a business exchange with love and sex being traded for love and food and oh dear sasu-kun you should have taken shikamaru's advice or shika-san doing the door-jamming on his own behalf. and finnaly it cannot be said enough YOU ROCK!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - v on November 11, 2010
    I can't believe you called this chapter "Lull", I thought.."Oh a moment of calm, its over everything will be well"..and then of course I looked up the actual meaning of the word!! Now S is out there getting children that can't get on board..crew is out there with pyscho nut jobs...and Lord knows what else is going to go wrong!! I can hardly wait for the next chapter :)...I loved the interaction between Gaara and Naruto, it felt like Naruto knew how Gaara was feeling in that moment, and maybe gave us an little incite to his developing feelings for Lee. I'm also very glad that the children were podded..I can picture Haru organizing them into little mini-snipers..and with that thought...I realize once again..I'm way to involved in the story line!! :)
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  • From meowkuu2 on November 11, 2010
    ..I foresee sooo much trouble happening with that Kurotsuchi person....can't they just like..you know..fall down some stairs and disappear...

    on the other hand..I'm not sure how to feel about Inochi..in this fic..I really didn't like him that much..no..more like neutral towards him..its sad that he died but it makes a better story when the good guys have losses too..as much as happy endings are awesome..they don't really happen as much as we'd like them to
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  • From bloodshound on November 10, 2010
    oh not good. ican see things getting hectic again... and the new mayor type... foolish, foolish foolish.
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