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By : mannahpierce
  • From roro237 on November 25, 2010
    Thank goodness that part went well! I was afraid Han would attack. Fox-boy has done it again. Of course with some help:)
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  • From meowkuu2 on November 25, 2010
    yea!!!! though now I'm afraid and curious of what that woman's actions are going to be and what trouble they'll cause....
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  • From ANON - lonelylulaby on November 24, 2010
    Oh goodness, this chapter was very good. I liked the last sentence Han said. I can't wait till the next chapter.

    ja ne till next time and keep up the good work
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  • From Prism0467 on November 24, 2010
    I didn't understand the title of this chapter but I enjoyed it immensely.
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  • From ANON - Moonmoore on November 24, 2010
    Thank God this problem got resolved with little violence. Awesome chapter as always! I just hope that Han doesn't change his mind. Maybe in the next chappie Sickler can get reunited to Ebisu? *crosses fingers* Man, for some reason I get the feeling that this wont be the end of this problem. I hope I'm wrong. Uchiha really need a break, time to assimilate all the they have become and to mourn their losses. Also, of course, I would love to see them being more domestic with big scenes time with Naruto and Sasuke; Naruto, Sasuke, and the Litter; and Uchiha as a whole dealing. Just minor intakes from everyone but Naru and Sasu being the center of attention. It would be awesome. Of course, this would have to be after the situation in the Warren is resolved. Anyway, no matter what happens just know that I'm reading even if not reviewing every chapter. I am a lazy person and sometimes busy. Really sorry for that. On that note I thank you for your awesome work and I wish you a Happy Thanksgiving Dady. (Early)

    Sincerely


    Moonmoore
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  • From ANON - toosweet on November 21, 2010
    Hi once again I am compelled to write something. I have read all of your stories (looked under author and read them.) and I really hate cliff hangers. I can picture in my mind what will happen when Han and Kotohime see each other again. I don't think I like Han, he is too clever. Keep writing this great story because your mind is a good place to visit.
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  • From ANON - v on November 21, 2010
    This is the moment...the possible turning point!!!I'm so excited to hear how Naruto will respond, I'm going to be checking everyday!! I'm also hoping no one forgets about Sickler's friend..he's helped so much up to this point, I'm also concerned about Shika and Neji...but I'll just wait and see..very happy Lee's up and about :)
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  • From blugirlami21 on November 20, 2010
    Sorry I didnt review the last few chapters but because like one of the chapter titles we were definitely in a lull. I just really didn't have anything to say good or bad. They were good though, I can see from the end of this chapter we are going to reach a high point soon. You know when Naruto realized that Sasuke had a surprise for him I stupidly thought that he had brought him two of the babies...I must miss them more than I realize. Anyhoo good stuff I can't wait to see what happens with Han.
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  • From meowkuu2 on November 20, 2010
    the votes are in... I WANT TO PUNCH HAN IN THE FACE...MANY MANY TIMES.... like seriously? If he honestly cared about freedom of hybrids he wouldn't be trying to sabotage Uchiha worse "his people"??? that's no different than the Warren issuing permits making sure that a hybrid had to be owned..he's just as bad as the hybrid-haters..
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  • From ANON - richon on November 20, 2010
    ohoho naru is in trouble, hopefully han I unterstand... Love your story!!! really enjoy reading it
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  • From ANON - Gingitsune on November 20, 2010
    OMG!!!!!!!!!!! Wow! I really can't wait to see what happens next! This portion of the story literally has me at the edge of my seat. This is going to be an epic story :D We still have Orochimaru & Kabuto somewhere out there XD Great job on your writing. Simply loving it!
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  • From roro237 on November 20, 2010
    WoW wOw wOw! I love how you worked us up to that ending. Getting Sasuke out of bed to standing in front of Han. That was an awesome chapter! The title was perfect to:) It has me on the edge of my seat because our Space Queen is unpredictable you just can't guess what might happen. (That's a good thing) It is so sweet of you to thank me in your opening but you don't have to. You work hard enough on this story. I thank you for sharing it with us:) I look ward to reading each and every chapter. ~Bowing~ ^_^
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  • From Prism0467 on November 20, 2010
    Aw, hell yes! Showdown!
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  • From meowkuu2 on November 18, 2010
    I was about to go to sleep..its 3 AM in the morning and I have to wake up in a couple hours...I am VERY VERY HAPPY I DECIDED TO CHECK FOR AN UPDATE!!! THANK YOU!!!
    Like...wow..is there gonna be a face off with HAN and Sasuke?????????
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  • From ANON - v on November 18, 2010
    I'm curious about Shikamaru's feelings for Sasuke..we know he loves Na-chan...but...still curious about their relationship and how it will evolve. I'm also feeling some hope for the evacuation...but I'm beating it back with a very large stick...just in case things roll outta control again :)....I find it amazing how you stay true to all the different personalities yet allow them to grow and change with the situations..plots and sub-plots..my hats off to you and your characters...also, the more I learn about Shika's genius the more I worry.
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