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By : mannahpierce
  • From ANON - The Horseman of Death on December 02, 2010
    i forgot to mention with everything else yay the threesome is getting a baby yay baby (and screentime)
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  • From meowkuu2 on December 01, 2010
    wow, I was wondering if you'd put in Sakura as a fangirl and how that would have worked out, but I'm glad that she's not extremely gushy of Sasuke...then...babies..all those kids..like..it's terrifying to think about if Uchiha got attacked at this point with all the kids these people have or want to have...like suppose one of them get kidnapped?

    I also extremely love how you use the storytelling as a way to teach the kids things..its been awhile since anyone in real life has done that so to see it in a fic and used properly is awesome

    and last..I think I got really upset over the icy cold eyes thing btw Naruto and Sasuke..I mean..I know that Naruto loves the kids but sometimes you have to look at the big picture..He really can't afford to be stressing out about so many things at once..he should have things more organized and its not like Sasuke was suggesting he never go see the kids..just have an alotted time for that and for dealing with the hybrid stuff you know...I feel his extreme foxy love for those kids is eventually going to put him in a bad situation with Sasuke or with some unknown baddies out there...meh

    mew mew as always I wait for more updating and thank youuuuuuuuu!!!
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  • From Prism0467 on December 01, 2010
    I understand that, for the purpose of your plot, someone had to die. How did you decide it would be Inoichi? I'm just curious.
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  • From roro237 on December 01, 2010
    I like what you did with Sakura. I'm not a fan of hers but this was nice. I do so love your spin on all the Naruto characters you add:) The old fighters really surprised me wanting a child! I enjoyed it totally ^_^
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  • From ANON - richon on December 01, 2010
    yes they did it !! they won the battles and saved thousand hybrid. I love your story !!! see you soon
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  • From ANON - Moonmoore on December 01, 2010
    Wow! What an emotional charged ending, it brought tears to my eyes. Shika is so smart and just know how to handle stuff. He is a crucial part in the new Uchiha. He paractically solves all their problems. I wish that Neji were better at understanding him so that he wouldn't need Darrent. I hope their relationship keeps growing. Poor Sasuke, he was manipulated once again. No wonder neither of them said anything. Those two can really do some mischief if they wanted. It was really nice to see the children and the adults interaction with them. Sakura made me flinch at first as she came out first as a fangirl but I'm glad she matured and left that phase. Great job! See you next time!

    Sincerely


    Moonmoore
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  • From ANON - Moonmoore on December 01, 2010
    The closing scene was beautiful. I love to see them like this. They hardly get a chance these days to be like this with everything that is going on in their lives. Now they know that Oro is alive and super-mega obssesed with Naru. Sasuke better keep his eyes peeled and ready, we don't want Oro to get the drop on them. Awesome job as always and waiting for the next installment. Hugs!

    Sincerely

    Moonmoore
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  • From ANON - Jenova625 on November 28, 2010
    Grrr--I love this story! >_
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  • From ANON - jalana on November 27, 2010
    Yay, more growly possessive Naruto FTW! A very nice way to end the crisis situation. Can't wait to see what is up next for the intrepid crew!
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  • From ANON - v on November 27, 2010
    This was a great chapter, so happy the hybrids were able to be rescued...the feral children gathered up and how wonderful that we got to see a little more of sickler and his compassion and determination..although I am curious about the elite fighters especially Tatsuji. Excited about getting to see the children again and the reunion between Naruto, Sasuke , and Shikamaru...although I am nervous because sometimes you lead us into a deep sigh of relief only to have the breath punched from our stomach by excitement and imminent danger...somehow O and K will be involved in that I think. lol Still dying to see more of Gaara and Lee and how events that happened have changed their relationship, plus kudos for seeing Iruka's slightly bloodthirsty side..i forget between his mothering and ability to take care of all..that he's still a spacer, thanks for reminding us :)
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  • From roro237 on November 27, 2010
    I loved the ending of this chaapter so much! I needed that hook-up:) I mean Sasuke and Naruto needed that time together after everything:) For a minute I was afraid for Kiba. I couldn't remember everything he'd done to Orochimaru. Then of course Kakashi with his comment of the little menaces was to funny! You probley guested what my favorite part was oh I said it first didn't I:) Well there's more I loved. That Naruto told Sasa the he was the center of his world and he didn't blink twice when C-san came in. Ok I loved that hold last part every word of it ^_^
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  • From bloodshound on November 27, 2010
    That was very neatly handled so far, all things considered. Well done.
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  • From meowkuu2 on November 27, 2010
    yea!!!!! things are looking up....abit..we still have some foreboding atmosphere there..but as always i very much appreciate what you write and thank you!!!

    p.s....just a random thought..is Sumaru going to get with anybody in the future?
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  • From ANON - Jenny on November 27, 2010
    Wow, I'm glad that they didn't fight, but I can't help feeling that it was the calm before the storm, seems like Kurotsuchi still have some tricks left. Nice chapter, makes me really happy reading this.
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  • From ANON - v on November 25, 2010
    I loved getting a glimpse of izuma, we havent seen much of his thoughts and actions so that was a definite plus...Han made me hugely uncomfortable with his thought process....I can sympathize with Gaara because I care about his character and Naruto because I adore him, when it comes to their berserker side..but I don't know enough about Han to feel anything but a little squigged when his thoughts drift to the other side of sanity...I got just as tense as Naruto when he looked at Sasuke, but I attribute that to your ability to pull me way too far into the story line. lol. love the writing..can't wait for the next chapter :)
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