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By : mannahpierce
  • From ANON - Gingitsune on December 18, 2010
    My heart is brimming with love & joy. This fic is able to pull so many emotions out of me that it's amazing. YOu should really considering writing & publishing a novel.

    I love the previous chapter where Shika build a section of the ship for the kids. I miss the kids! :D

    The idea that Sasuke & Naruto can have their kids is intriguing. Can't wait to read more on that!
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  • From ANON - Colter St. Clair on December 16, 2010
    WOW! I love this story so much! I normally don't start a story that isn't finished yet because I hate waiting but the first story was finished. I was tricked! *fake glare dissolves into laughter* You are a really great writer. The characters come alive when I'm reading it and I have cried several times already and stayed up 48 hours reading the first story(with breaks, just no sleep). I feel sorry for Neji's pain and Shika's loneliness, Naruto's issues and Sasuke's problem dealing with those issue. All of your characters have developed so much, it is amazing! I can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From Prism0467 on December 15, 2010
    Lollipop, eh? ^_^
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  • From meowkuu2 on December 15, 2010
    awww that was sooo cute!! LOL poor Naruto trying to explain the birds and the bees to Haru.. ( I feel Hikaru might end up bieng a trouble maker when he gets older.. like when Kakashi referred to him as a "proto-Itachi"...

    and now you have me thingk about Berserker Naruto having a.."go" with Sasuke.. like that persona would be an absolute dom....*drools*
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  • From ANON - v on December 15, 2010
    wonderful chapter!! I loved seeing everyone have a day reconnecting and being together as a family again:), I laughed so hard when it came to Haru and his spying and his To-Chan trying to deal with it.lol
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  • From ANON - vera on December 15, 2010
    you let the characters development be primary and the storyline secondary, wich creates a captivating flow. it is lovely, thank you.
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  • From roro237 on December 15, 2010
    That was so amazing wOw! I didn't know I had misses their loving so much until this:) My nose is bleeding and my eyes watering. 'Yea Baby' That's what I like:) Naruto comforting Shika was the best. Shika chip off the old block is a rascal. The question he had about the pee-pee showing how long he was peeping:) I hope Hi-chan and Haru will grow out of their rivalry. Sounds like two other people I know:) This chapter is the bomb! After all the fighting and hyebreeds rescue they need this ^_^
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  • From ANON - lonelylulaby on December 15, 2010
    Awww, that was sweet of Shikamaru and the ending too. I really hope that Haru and Hikaru will be able to get along when they grow up. They both are just too smart for their own good.

    ja ne till next time and keep up the good work
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  • From Gaia77 on December 11, 2010
    Oh HELL NO!!

    They better leave Shika alone dammit!!
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  • From meowkuu2 on December 11, 2010
    cool, sweet, scary...
    hmmm.. I'd love to know about those other type-seven geniuses..
    *thumbs up*
    Though it would make me fret alot..Uchiha has become very..how do you say..relaxed? I'm sure at least Itachi must realize with the level of popularity of Uchiha growing means that the level of risk, danger and enemies will also increase over time right?

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  • From ANON - v on December 11, 2010
    Okay..this I did not see coming..targeting Shikamaru...not good, the twists and turns in this storyline keep my brain nervous. lol
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  • From ANON - SidonieStarr on December 11, 2010
    This is still a great story and Shikamaru is one of the most interesting characers - can't wait to see what happens.
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  • From Prism0467 on December 11, 2010
    OMFG they want to kill Shikamaru?! NO!!!!!
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  • From roro237 on December 11, 2010
    That was powerfully intense! They know so much about Shika in that much detail. I'm scared ok maybe just worried no I'm scare and worried:) Shika's a smart guy he'll figure it out when they make their move. I just hope that move wont be to deadly ^_^
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  • From cynaga on December 11, 2010
    No! They can't have our Shika!!!
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