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By : mannahpierce
  • From ANON - v on December 23, 2010
    I don't know what to write...I can't believe that Ranmaru is dead...I had to read the chapter twice, there I was so happy for sasuke and Naruto, laughing over the children and their antics..and then shock, heartbreaking shock...he was such a lovely character..and i can't believe it. Poor Kono, this will be bad for him..and what about the children, they love him...and Haku, who he was shopping for, and the fighters..and OMG!!! This is just horrible. The writing is wonderful as always but waiting for the next chapter is going to be very stressful.
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  • From ANON - SidonieStarr on December 23, 2010
    Wow. I have to say, I almost cried and I can't remember doing that since Beth died in "Little Women". I thought I was familiar with the rhythm of your storytelling but evidently not. I'd guessed you'd write a few more warm fuzzy chapters (including Mai's decanting) before slowly building up another dramatic arc. I've also wondered whether you'd kill off an important, sympathetic character - you've never done it before. It feels right, though. I suspect now we will see the full wrath of which Uchiha is capable. I've been wondering about Moegi lately ...
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  • From ANON - KL on December 22, 2010
    So i dont really have an account here, but i read your other story on ff.net and i been following this ones here
    okay on with my review... HOLLY ----- OMG!!! HES DEAD!!! TOTALLY GRUESOME DEATH!!! HORRIBLE!!! im honestly hoping that the ranmaru they found is some sort of fake or something, omg that was horrible!
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  • From ANON - jalana on December 22, 2010
    Oh, that ending was heartbreaking! I had tears in my eyes--poor Konohamaru!

    Thanks for the constant updates. They've become the highlights of my week. :) Can't wait to see what happens next!

    Happy holidays!
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  • From roro237 on December 22, 2010
    First of all I don't know how chapter 42 got by me.(don't roll your eyes at me like that) I didn't see it up really!:) I loved it! You had all those people in your compute room and it was wonderful:) Rins news for Naruto was surprising! Shino and Anko made me laugh. Haku is a pris I think that's him all the way setting in the tent:) Then chapter 43 is when all hell broke loose!! Poor Konohamaru!!! Oh Space Queen of the Naruto Universe I did not see or feel that one coming! This is why you are Queen. You know how to work the bomb ^_^
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  • From ANON - lonelylulaby on December 22, 2010
    OMGosh, that is all I can say.....Ranmaru had grown on me, I can't believe this happened. They were only shopping. :( I wonder how the children are going to take it. And for the longest I was like Konohamaru, i thought it couldn't possibly be tru that it was a clone. But I guess not. Also I'm glad about the babies. But I think I'm in shock, so this is all I've got.

    ja ne till next time and keep up the awesome job
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  • From blugirlami21 on December 22, 2010
    Oh Mannah...you have me sitting here near tears, staring at the computer screen in shock, all over a fictional character. You certainly don't pull your punches. I don't know what to say about this development. I didn't even know I had liked Ranmaru this much until he was gone forever. This is most likely the beginning of Pein and Zetsu's attack on Uchiha and I am fearful of who we will lose next. I can't imagine how Maru is feeling, he had finally found the person for him and now that person is gone, stolen from him in the most horrific way. I want to say I look forward to what happens next but I am more apprehensive than excited at this point.
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  • From ANON - richon on December 22, 2010
    ohhoo no ramaru cant' be dead!!! the begin was so happy, the end is sad, too much emotion
    see you soon I love it
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  • From ANON - Gingitsune on December 22, 2010
    Woah!!!!!! This took a very unexpected turn for me! The happiness at the beginning & then Ranmaru dead at the end of the chapter. Wow. I feel sad that Ranmaru died. :( The way you wrote the story made me feel like I knew each character & Ranmaru is one of those I liked. Great writing as usual.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 22, 2010
    OMG that was such a shocker!!

    I feel bad for Kono-Kun, but the children will be devestated! Inoichi was one thing, they were not very attached to him, but Ranmaru was an integral part of the family. Poor Haru, I know he will figure out what happened before anyone else does. I wonder how he will deal with it? I can't wait for Shika-kun to find the bastards (Pein, Konan, Akatsuki), and kill them all slowly and painfully. Bastards!!!!!!!!
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  • From meowkuu2 on December 19, 2010
    Brave, Strong Uchiha warriors in pink and yellow.. LOL that image is hilarious!
    Next thing.. Poor Sumaru.. hopefully he'll find the person for him neh? Every knife needs a sheath right?
    I like how Iruka spoke to Naruto, I actually thought of that while I read Rin and Dan's part (and on a side note.. the breaks btw characters is really cute *huggies*)

    I look forward to more updates ^_^
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  • From ANON - lonelylulaby on December 19, 2010
    Omgoodness, I totally forgot that the kits would die before Sasuke too. Man, that just makes me all depressed again. If they do end up having this mixed baby, will they only have one or more? that is the question. Anywho I really enjoyed the look into all the lives of the couples, I sorda want to know more about Itachi, Kisame, and Haku.

    Welps ja ne till next time and keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - v on December 18, 2010
    Sometimes I can predict where a story is headed from the plot and actions people take and also from previous story written, I just have no idea what the future holds in each chapter when it comes to your writing and your characters..that alone makes every chapter very exciting to read. I can't wait for the next one...also..I never connected the dots about the childrens lifespan..how sad for Sasuke to know he would not only outlive Naruto but the most of the children as well (sniffle).
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  • From Prism0467 on December 18, 2010
    Okay, I'm totally blubbering now...
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 18, 2010
    I don't know why but this chapter made me cry!!!!!!!!
    I loved the snow and the family time, it reminded me of Christmas time at home.
    Poor Naruto I hope he tells Sasuke they can have a NaruSasu baby together, that will outlive them both.

    Oh and is it weird that I want Sumaru to end up with Sasuke if Naruto dies???
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