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By : mannahpierce
  • From blugirlami21 on January 06, 2011
    I love hearing about the children and I am glad that Haru's specialness and the difficulties that come with a highly gifted child hasn't gone away. I think it's something that both Naruto and Sasuke will have to deal with for a long time. Although it seems that Naruto has a harder time than Sasuke. It would be nice to get to know the other children as well as we know Haru, maybe a chapter devoted to each one at some point or it doesn't even have to be that intensive. But I sometimes feel that Sasuke and Naruto have one main child and about nine other little bodies running around. I'm excited about the new babies but I just hope that they don't take what little screen time the other children have already. I always feel like I am waiting for the other shoe to drop with each new chapter which is a mark of good storytelling but it makes me a bit hesistant to read new chapters. Anyway great chapter as always.
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  • From Prism0467 on January 05, 2011
    God that made me want to cry.
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  • From ANON - v on January 05, 2011
    I'm very happy with this chapter, i love Naruto and Sasuke as a couple and a family..I also love seeing them manage the ins and outs of their relationship to each other, and their children. Also, to hear Sasuke confess his attraction to Shika!! The ins and outs, twists and turns, old clues and new revelations definately keep me coming back for more :)
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  • From roro237 on January 05, 2011
    I love all your chapters but this one was wOw! It had everything in it the kids and lots of incredible sexy stuff with our boys!! Sasuke being a wonderful dad. Calling Naruto to hug Shika was a good one of course the reasons behind it was even better:) I just loved every word of it! You know what's coming:) I have to shout it out 'Yea Baby' so good! You kicked out a bomb in the middle of the week! This is why you are Queen of the Naruto Space Universe. Ok one more time 'Yea Baby' ^_^
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  • From ANON - richon on January 05, 2011
    Love this story so much!!! What haru will decide, update soon please !!
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  • From ANON - Moonmoore on January 05, 2011
    Hi! Happy New Year! Sorry I've been absent. I don't know where to begin as so much has happened. You made me cry with Ranmaru's death and all the while reading the next chapters I has hoping for a sign that Akatsuki had kidnaped him and planted a clone for the gruesome death. They do seem to have the technology. I am very worried for Shika. I hope they figure out soon that he is the target. How do they know so much about Uchiha and the family? I thought Shikamaru protected himself while in the data streams and all info about the individuals that make up Uchiha. I am very confused and a little scared. Does Akatsuki have a type-genuis? That Zetsu seems to be pretty clever, is he a dysfunctional typed-genius? Anyway, I loved the recent chapters. I adored seeing all the children growing up and developing but I am fearful for Haru. He seems so much smarter then Shika it is scary. I hope that he can be protected. I don't even want to think of Pein getting wind of Haru. That would be horrendious. Man, it's getting so complicated for Uchiha. Sasu and Naru are crazy to want even more children with how things are at the moment.

    Awesome job as always! You are awesome Mannah! Take care and thank you for the great story!

    Sincerely


    Moonmoore
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  • From cynaga on January 05, 2011
    [ch.47] How did I get along before I had your lovely work to read? What a delight to dig into these characters psyche!. I love Shika and Haru. And the NaruxSasuxNaru action/love is always appreciated. What fun!
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  • From ANON - SidonieStarr on January 02, 2011
    Well, I guess it really does take a village. I dreamed last night my husband and I adopted eleven newborns - I blame this story!
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  • From meowkuu2 on January 02, 2011
    This made me so happy!!!
    but then..I have the huge read warning in my head screaming potential hostages of Pein blinking away...
    and then Haru..it's like I dunno.. yes Shikamaru has the whole "does-not-understand-the-full-concept-of-right-and-wrong thing" but Haru.. even a child..its like..it almost feels that he's gonna wither do an insane amount of good or his curiosity is gonna led to an insane amount of trouble that can't be fixed at all...

    someone really needs to discipline that child
    and they need defends soon.. the happier they get the more freaked out i get about something majorly horrible happening to them mew...

    thanks for the super update mew!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 01, 2011
    man how i wish that someone would do art for this fiction. those babies are so incredibly adorable, and haru-chan is my very very favorite little uchiha. I can't wait to see what happens when the naru/sasu babies are born. i hope ryu-chan will not feel left out, or like he doesn't belong because he is neither an uchiha or a a naruto hybrid-clone. i love love LOVE this story more and more with every chapter that you put up. Thank you for sharing your imagination with us.
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  • From ANON - v on January 01, 2011
    I love the chapters that are full of the children, getting to see their growing personalities and how the adults cope with the sheer number of them and their needs is always fun :)I think there is going to be some significance to Sasuke deciding on a purebred version of Naruto without the "fox bits", and I'm sure its not just lifespan because the other two girls would have a long lifespan also, but thats all i'm maybe sure about because I never know whats going to happen next, which makes for great reading :) I love to read, even romance books, I always think that even if you know how the book is going to end (in romance books they always end up together) if the author can keep you interested in the journey, they have a great talent :)
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  • From Prism0467 on January 01, 2011
    OMFG more babies! I absolutely love this story!

    Thank you, thank you, thank you -- and happy 2011!
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  • From roro237 on January 01, 2011
    OMG! That was so awesome!! What in the world did you do with all those kids in your room?:) I loved it! Thank you for all your hard work ~Bowing~ Happy New Year ^_^
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  • From ANON - v on December 29, 2010
    I'm very worried now..I don't like Pein nor do I like anything he seems to be planning. There is a giant ball of icky in the pit of my stomache.
    Ranmaru's death was horrible and we didn't know him that well, I feel like bad things are going to happen the the spacer family we all love...I loved the part with yuki, how everyone helped his gift to Mai be wonderful. I do wonder how Itachi is going to handle fatherhood, he doesn't have that much time left :)
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  • From roro237 on December 29, 2010
    Okay that was amazing! Pein's plan has come out to play. Him calling Naruto a soulless hybrid!! You know I'm out raged:) The children have grown up wonderfully. Which is no small feat:) I'm feeling in awe of you right now. The way you come up with the story line keeping everyone (the characters)in the loop and their growth it's to incredible for words! Hey I love Yuki and Konohamaru coming together that was so sweet. Papa sewing and all the other helping to make the gift so special. You add all the little touches to make this story so real:) Thanks you for the second update:) You are 'The Great Queen of the Naruto Universe' ~Bowing~ ^_^
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