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By : mannahpierce
  • From ANON - v on January 13, 2011
    Are you trying to kill me??!!I wasn't able to review the last chapter cause I just read it...with the new one...my heart is in my throat. I really, really , really don't want to read the next chapters. This is a horrible cliffhanger....I'll be checking everyday for your update :)
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  • From Prism0467 on January 12, 2011
    NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!
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  • From meowkuu2 on January 12, 2011
    ...OH MY GOOOOOOODDDD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! the shit has just hit the ceiling!!!
    I'm terrified right now..soooo terrified....

    I'm on the edge of my seat waiting for your next update!!
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  • From ANON - jalana on January 12, 2011
    Ohhh, the kids AND Shikamaru! This promises to be very exciting! :) Looking forward to the next chapters!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 12, 2011
    i knew this was coming but i was hoping that haru would not be taken and that he would be able to help sasuke and the crew rescue shika....now i'm wondering what will happen since both level 7 geniuses have been taken???
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  • From roro237 on January 12, 2011
    OMG!!!!!! That was wOw! I was hit by a truck! I didn't see it coming:) I'm ~Bowing~ to the Great Queen of the Naruto Space Universe. I'll be strapping myself in for the next chapter:) I'm so proud of Kazu-chan for protecting his brother. Poor Neji. I can just image how help-less he must feel. Can't hardly wait to read you next time! ^_^
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  • From ANON - gingitsune on January 12, 2011
    This got my heart racing. I was waiting for the other shoe to drop & now it has :( Argh! I don't know how they are going to get Shika & the kits back & it's so nerve racking! :( Thanks again for another wonderful chapter.
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  • From cynaga on January 12, 2011
    [ch. 49] OMG OMG
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  • From ANON - richon on January 12, 2011
    ohoho this attak was unexpeexded!!! i love the idear... What sasu will decide, I want more update soon please
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  • From meowkuu2 on January 10, 2011
    hhmmm Temari wants a kid of gaara's?? Is that what's being hinted at and not Lee???..What's going on there...

    They're going to the planet...does anyone else feel utter dread and a sense of foreboding coming on them..I sure am...


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  • From ANON - SidonieStarr on January 08, 2011
    An enjoyable chapter. It's interesting that Ranmaru was in stasis - still a lot of mystery surrounding him. (Or them. Or whatever.)
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  • From ANON - Moonmoore on January 08, 2011
    Mannah! I don't like where this is going! *whines* They are going to the planet that is where Akatsuki will make their move. Now I feel dread filling me. Worse, Shikamaru will have Haru and Kazuki with him too! That sounds like a recipe for disaster! Oh God! *covers eyes and trembles* I don't feel so good. *pouts* All of this is like the calm just before the storm. And what a storm have you created.

    I feel contradictory feelings. I want to read what's coming but at the sametime I want to be a coward and just wait it out for when it gets resolved and I have a happy conclusion as a prop. I'm so weird. Thank you for the amazing story Mannah! You are incredible! You are such a great author to create this feelings in me through words alone. Take care and see you soon again! I will get over my misgivings and continue to tune in!

    Sincerely

    Moonmoore
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  • From roro237 on January 08, 2011
    I loved it! Once again you blow my mind with all the people:) The names for the triplets and all the children having input into the new nursery. That screams Naruto to me:) I see the alpha male is definitely Hi-chan. I like how they want him to be a better person without crushing his spirit the same with Haru. That is one of the details that I so enjoy. I got my laugh when Gaara said the smell of Naruto and Sasuke room made him want to mate. That caught me off guard I think it got Naruto to:) Thank goodness Mai has settled! I look forward to Neji's big adventure with Kazuki and Haru. You're the best oh Space Queen of the Naruto Universe. We has two chapters this week!(yesss) ^_^
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  • From cynaga on January 08, 2011
    I enjoyed the details of Shika's research and hearing that Gaara and Lee are partners. ♥
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  • From meowkuu2 on January 07, 2011
    yea!! Haru gets it!..I think..
    Hikaru.. I agree with Sasuke, that child needs to just get over his jealous thing, I know some siblings can be like that but seriously he needs to focus or someone needs to show him his own strengths and to appreciate his brother...he feels like he could grow up into a bratty boy if he doesn't grow out of it *sighs*

    hmmm I'd like to see a bit of Hoshi..she's been such a darling on the sidelines, how does she feel about her pure-breed brothers and her hybrid brothers hm?

    I think I'm starting to miss Orochimaru...*ponders*

    and as always THANKS FOR THE UPDATE MEW!

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