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By : mannahpierce
  • From randrinawilson on January 19, 2011
    I have been waiting for this story all week! I feel a little better that they might make it home now because Shika had some plans in the works if something happened to him and sasuke is really using his head. I hadnt even thought about them giving the kits to orochomaru. You are sooo deliciously good with your plots!!! Still hoping and praying that everybody gets hime safely!!!!! pretty pretty please?
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  • From Prism0467 on January 19, 2011
    OMG how exhausting! I hope they win and Shikamaru and the children are returned safely!
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  • From roro237 on January 19, 2011
    WoW! This was so good!! I'm on the edge of my seat untill the next chapter ^_^
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 19, 2011
    I'm so impressed by how well the Uchiha function and how quickly they come together to solve problems. I think Shikamaru would be very proud of how efficiently they have worked together. I cannot wait to see what Klen is going to do. Great Chaptert. Looking forward to more. Oh and I'm also happy to see that Shika is clever enough to know that Itachi is key to the success of any important mission. LOVE IT!
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  • From ANON - Moonmoore on January 19, 2011
    This chapter is so heartwrenching and the worse is not yet over. It brought tears to my eyes. I just hope that we don't lose Shika or any of the kids. I really hope KD will aid Uchiha in this quest. Although the situation is very bad, it is very reassuring to see everyone pulling together to help Sasu and Naru. I love when families do that I find it very beautiful. I was really hoping they would at least find one of the kits in one of the pods but I guess it is too soon.

    Wonderful chapter as always! Take care and see you next time!

    Sincerely


    Moonmoore
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  • From meowkuu2 on January 15, 2011
    ..I'm sad.. I hope we'll eventually see a bright light at the end of this tunnel of darknss
    ...and so much for Naruto thinking that "he'd always choose Sasuke over the kits"...yea.. I remembered that line

    he's all gun-ho about firing on them without even stopping to think about if they have the children and I bet you if Sasuke actually did shoot and the kids were hurt he'd hate Sasuke....
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  • From ANON - Moonmoore on January 15, 2011
    The podding of the children, Shikamaru's thoughts and actions, and Haru's message made me cry. Of course, Naruto's feelings really hit home but poor Sasuke he has so much in his plate right now. I couldn't be in his shoes. It is all so sad. I can't seem to stop the tears. It was a very emotionally charged chapter. I am out of words.

    Take care

    Moonmoore
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  • From ANON - v on January 15, 2011
    I knew I did not want to read the next chapters(sniffle) this is horrible!!! What is going to happen to??!! (sniffle, sniffle) They have the children!!! (sob) They have Shika!! (sob,sob) Naruto is upset at Sasuke!! How will that help??!! (wail) I don't like these people!!! Is Neji alive?? I'm not reading anymore!!!!! ....please hurry with the next chapter....(sniffle)
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  • From ANON - richon on January 15, 2011
    ahahh it's so sad, i hope nobody will be dead!!! I can't wait for more I am so excited
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 15, 2011
    I find myself hoping that everyone's fear of Klen and what the man can and will do to those that cross him are well founded, because once he finds out that Pein has Shikamaru all hell will break lose. I think that man will move heaven and earth to return Shika to happiness. Not to mention that he is a great admirer of the Sasuke/Naruto living legend. He has to intervene, and I hope he makes Pein sorry for trying to bring down and hurt the Uchiha, by way of Shikarmaru.

    What Pein does not understand is that the only reason Sasuke is so beloved by the people is because he operates out of love and respect for all living beings, not for the love of power like his father and Pein. What does Pein think he is going to accomplish by taking his children and the voice in his ear away? He is not endearing the people to him, by attacking the Uchiha and his children.

    He's such a power hungry idiot, and he is fighting against a person who has already gained legendary status, no one will follow him over Sasuke. If anything comes of this it will be an uprising against anything he tries to accomplish, once the people find out what exactly it is he is trying to do, and what he has done to try to reach his goal of dominating and ruling over the Universe.

    Man I hope this story comes to a happy ending, I don't want any of the babies to die.
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  • From randrinawilson on January 15, 2011
    oh you are killing me!!! killing me!!!!! please let them go home please. I am absolutely begging you to please let them go home. the drama is excellent and the angst is amazing but please, as someone who has been with you through ALL THREE STORIES please let them, all of them, make it home.
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  • From Prism0467 on January 15, 2011
    *blubbers gratuitously* OMG how brave they are!
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  • From roro237 on January 15, 2011
    I'm sorry to say the same old things all the time. But omg I can't help it! This is an incredible chapter!! The details and all the people places and things have me in total awe!!! I'm scare and worried about the unknown for Shika and the kids. For Naruto who is going though hell and Sasuke who going though the same thing but has to make the hard decision. This is anime and a new chapter has started and I just want to keep watching two hour specials to see what is going to happen:) Thank you for your hard work. Your story just keeps getting better with each new chapter ^_^
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  • From cynaga on January 15, 2011
    I hate it when delicate, special people are under the clutches of the enemy! *sigh* :
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  • From ANON - randrinawilson on January 14, 2011
    I knew pain was going to get to shikamaru sooner or later and now he ends up with Neji and the kids too? Its amazing that I was dreading it/hoping it wouldnt happen and thats only because you are such an amazing writer that you make this story more than a story. You make the reader feel like your characters are real people and you, the reader agonize over what is happening to them. I was torn up about what happend to ranmaru and the whole while that was going on I was really hoping that nothing happened to "my family" but here it is. You are an amazing writer and I am really hoping that sasuke and naruto get the children and Neji and Shikamaru back. It doesnt seem likely since pain would have no reason to let them go except for konan finding out that he killed ranmaru. If they dont get rescued im going to have to skip a couple of chapters and come in a little later after the heartbreak. I know it sounds crazy but you made me fall in love with these "people" and its hard to read about them going through such things. Back to reality...this is an AMAZING story. I really hope that you are writing professionally because this gift that you have of weaving an entire world/universe from your imagination is truly profound!!!!!!!
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