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By : mannahpierce
  • From ANON - lonelylulaby on January 26, 2011
    O my goodyness gracious, it is getting exciting. I thought for a minute there that Ranmaru was a ghost. lol Anywho I wonder how Hana came to be with the Akatsuki. Poor Haru, the little bugger is tough, I hope he keeps it up. I don't want him to turn against Uchiha. That would be ALL kinds of bad.

    ja ne till next time and keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - SidonieStarr on January 26, 2011
    A thrilling development!
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  • From roro237 on January 26, 2011
    WoW !! That answer some questions. Like Haur and Shika will have to fine away themselves to escaped. Ranmaru is running with a new body and still has his old memories. I'm so glad Haru will have someone there:) Your story just keeps getting better and better! See you next chapter ^_^
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  • From ANON - richon on January 26, 2011
    ohoho ranumaru is not dead, I love the idear !!!it's awesome; a new ally for the uchiha. Love your fic, see you soon
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  • From Prism0467 on January 26, 2011
    Hooray! An unexpected plot twist (at least, I didn't see it coming!)! WOOHOO!
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  • From blugirlami21 on January 26, 2011
    You scared me with the warning of death and gore! I'm almost afraid to read this story because I am afraid of more bad things happening. I don't like this separation of Shika and Haru from the rest of the family, it makes me extremely nervous. I never expected Ranmaru to be alive. This gives me hope that we can make it out of this bad situation with everyone intact and alive. I just hope Haru isn't too traumatized or damaged by this experience.
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  • From ANON - v on January 22, 2011
    I'm so happy that 3 of the children are safe and home... although still terribly worried about Haru and Shika..I do not like how the enemy seem to have the Sasuke and his family dancing to their tune by threatening the ones they love..and I don't know if they can trust klenn yet..i'm on the edge of my seat with every chapter.
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  • From roro237 on January 22, 2011
    Thank goodness the hybrid children are fine! I loved the happy reunion of them!! Your Sasuke and Naruto are the best!!! I'm so in love with them:) It took longer for me to fall for Sasuke. But now I just adore him:) Queen sorry I mean O Great Queen of the Naruto Space Universe:) This chapter was just wOw! Sasuke picking up on Hi-chan need to talk that was one more thing I loved in this chapter. You covered it all. Even some Neji time:) I haven't misses that you're still spoiling us with two chapters:) Thank you! I hold my breather as I look to see if it's here:) I have to do a 'Yea Baby' for the sweet loving moment at the beginning ^_^
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  • From ANON - kanazerosukenaru on January 22, 2011
    I'm sorry I'm too lazy to log in but this is Kana-chan, and here is my review

    NOOOOOOOOOO It cannot take standards!!! Those Bastards cannot have my favorite baby Haru...they will corrupt his beautiful little mind, and when they find out the level of his genius may be greater than Shika's they will exploit his beautiful mind!! Please Please save him!! Come on Klen do something damn it, you're supposed to be some "bad ass no-one messes with me MOFO" Do something! UGH!!

    Yeah that is how that rant went in my head...it's so funny to me how I think your characters are real and they will listen to my ranting madness...LOL.

    Anyway great chapter I cried at Hikaru's reaction to saying he had wished Haru gone sometimes. I feel really bad for him, he doesn't understand that it is a part of being Uchiha, the sibling rival is inbred in them. He has a little more old Itachi than Sasuke in him, but at least he acknowledge the jealousy, and is letting his Pappa help him come to terms with his feelings. Something that would have done wonders for old Itachi if he had had a parent like Sasuke. Such a wasted beautiful life....Fugaku was such a bastard! He stole so many years from Sasuke and Itachi by his brutality and hunger for power. I'm glad Haru and Hi-chan will be spared that life....well that is if we get Haru back as Haru. I have faith in Shika's ability to protect his son though....so I'm still hoping for a Happily Ever After.
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  • From ANON - richon on January 22, 2011
    they retrive 3 chldren , to left,I love this story, I can't wiat for more, what will happen.
    see you soon
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  • From Prism0467 on January 22, 2011
    OMG this is breaking my heart. Their family has been torn apart!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 20, 2011
    The Lions roar,
    The Mother's cry,
    The Father's scream,
    The Nighttime silence,
    The Loss of The Child causes all these things,
    But Fear Not in the dead of night,
    When these omens taunt and fright,
    The Child is found,
    The Mother is comforted,
    The Father screams no more,
    The Lion sleeps.

    author David Blades copyright 2010 all rights reserved Master David Blades

    This poem is I think how I would like this story to progress and I have it on the author's authority who I am in regular contact with that the legend this poem was based on had a happy ending. i hope for shikamaru's and haru's sake that this story matches that one and the lion is never even near the child
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  • From ANON - v on January 20, 2011
    I'm going to believe in Sasuke..I'm going to believe he can handle this and bring the children and Shika home...I'm going to believe Itachi is a mastermind of horrible things to retrieve their loved ones.. Klenn will come thru like a mighty sword..and that Kakashi will be an unstoppable warrior...I'm going to believe that Shika is awesomely dangerous when annoyed and worried for his son...and no one we love will get hurt.....and if none of that happens...well then...I'll cry, but i'll keep reading.
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  • From meowkuu2 on January 19, 2011
    heartbreaking but oh so very cool! I was on the edge of my seat reading this!!!
    Thank you for the update I look forward to more!
    p.s. Uchiha needs to go 300 on Pein's ass!!!
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  • From ANON - lonelylulaby on January 19, 2011
    I hope the retrieval doesn't take standards (that's yrs right). I think I would become depressed and cry a little. Or if one Shika got away and Haru was stuck there. My imagination is running wild here unchecked. Pretty soon I'm going to start hyperventilating. Anywho these chapters have been getting me tru the beginnin of my semester in college. Thank you muches

    ja ne till next time and keep up the great work.
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