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By : mannahpierce
  • From ANON - v on February 03, 2011
    Well, I would much prefer to think of Pein and his group as evil, horrible, monstrous people...I am however starting to find them a little interesting, although I still hate their blood and guts for kidnapping and using Shika and Haru and for having evil intentions to harm the family in the quest for whatever it is their trying to do..I'm not too clear on that yet... I'm glad Iruka was able to help Naruto, it was such a poignant moment when he said "He let them take our baby"...I think it really illuminated how much Naruto loves his children, how you managed to give him the heart he has yet made him such a warrior and how it just melds together and works for his character...I'll be here sitting infront of my computer...hitting refresh..just waiting.. :)lol
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  • From ANON - Moonmoore on February 02, 2011
    Wow! So much has happened since I've been away. It made feel happy to see that you didn't eliminate Ranmaru from the story even if the Uchiha's Ranmaru was the one killed. I hope you get to return him to Uchiha and Konohamaru. There is so much more that I don't know how to continue...I am glad that most of the children were returned but Naru kills my heart. He still blames Sasuke and worse Sasuke blames himself. It is all so sad. Everyone is hanging in there and I really hope that they get to get them back soon. I don't think I could hold on for much longer. It kills me to have them like this. At least Haru and Shikamaru are making great progress with the members of Akatsuki even if Pein is suspicious. I am waiting for Pein to find out that Shika told the truth about KD and see what he'll do but I hope that doesn't make a hasty decision about eliminating both of them. Also, I want him to meet Naruto and see the impact Naru has on him. I'm dying fir that chapter! It is going to be awesome! I can hardly wait! Thanks for the amazing chapters and take care! *Hughs*


    Sincerely


    Moonmoore
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  • From roro237 on February 02, 2011
    When I watched the episodes of Naruto with Pein I got the same impression. That Pein has lost so many love ones that I think he didn't know what happiness felt like anymore. You captured that feeling for me. Pein seeing the other two happy not knowing what he should make of that good or bad. Haur is a chip off the old block. He has Konan wrapped around his little finger and with Shika on Zetsu. That will be Peins down fall those two geniuses! Yea! There is howling in the bed room again:) Oh Great Queen of the Naruto Universe have I told you how much I love your story lately? Queenie I love your story ^_^
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  • From ANON - Zakunai on February 02, 2011
    This chapter feel like a filler, but it's good, filler helps to move the plot along. So many problems that Sasuke and Naruto had, it's a good idea to use Iruka's point of view at the start of the chapter, it's kind of refreshing. I can't wait to read the future interactions between Shikamaru and Ranmaru, if you'll write one. Man, reading your story made me ponder on a lot of things, I almost feel like reading something required for my course, except I enjoyed this very much, so thanks for writing and making me a happy reader indeed =D
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  • From Prism0467 on February 02, 2011
    Alright! Shikamaru and Haru's effect on the Akatsuki is akin to Naruto's effect on Nagato in the manga, which totally works! I hope they make it back home in one piece!
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  • From cynaga on February 02, 2011
    [Chapter 55] What a pleasure to watch Shikamaru and Haru move in their new environment! And Kakashi and Iruka did good with Naruto's anger. That little scene right there illustrates part of what is so special about this series. The characters are so tuned to one another. They are more than family; like an idealized family really.

    Will you consider making a pdf available of this series? I would so love to have it permanently available to read and savor slowly again.

    Thanks so much for sharing your talent and your worlds with us!!!
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  • From ANON - Zakunai on February 01, 2011
    *This review contains SPOILERs for the story*

    Hi, very interesting, the last few chapters had me all worked up, with Ranmaru's death (bless him) the kidnappings and more plot devices revealed, you had me gripping the edge of my seats (I hope I used the right expression) I would have put a smiley here if not because I'm sobered up with the angst level in the chapter but the hope that I felt that the clone represented balanced it out. Very good can't wait for more =D (sorry cant help the smiley force >.
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  • From ANON - v on January 30, 2011
    I'm so glad Haru and Shika got to see each other, this was such a good chapter although i was crying at the end of it...I adore the children, watching them grow, laughing at their antics and misbehavoirs, cheering them on when they manage challenges and learn new things and now one of them is scared and hurting..which is new and upsetting..I really hope someone bashes Pein's head in...and if I forgot to say before...So completely happy than Ranmaru's head was still alive and back with a body...which..wow..never saw that coming...I'm still really worried though.
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  • From ANON - lonelylulaby on January 29, 2011
    Ho ho ho, I sense dissension in the ranks. What will happen next only you can say

    ja ne till next time and keep up the good work, and Thanks for still givin us 2 chapters. It may not last but it's nice while it's here
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  • From roro237 on January 29, 2011
    That was wonderful:) I have a lump in my throat now. I loved every word. ~Bowing~ Thank you for your hard work ^_^
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  • From Prism0467 on January 29, 2011
    OMFG give those children back to their family!
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  • From cynaga on January 29, 2011
    [Chapter 54] This is Mannah Pierce's Naruto Space Saga at its BEST. The story, which involves so many characters and plot lines, slows to a halt and holds us captive in a brilliant moment of time. We are with Shikamaru and Haru, kiddnapped by the Akatsuki. We hold our breathe as plans are contemplated and decisions are made. We see and feel everything that happens. We are there. Exquisite.
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  • From ANON - richon on January 29, 2011
    yes go go haru, konan may be trasformed in an ally. I love this story. update soon please !!
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  • From ANON - v on January 27, 2011
    Oh god!! What is going on??!! Ranmaru..alive???...a clone???..Poor Haru...Where's Shika???!! This is the best Syfy, Action, Adventure, Suspense, Thriller, Drama, Romance in the whole world!!!!!
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  • From ANON - jalana on January 27, 2011
    Oh, very interesting development! Thanks for the fabulous chapter. I'm very eagerly awaiting the next installment!
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