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By : mannahpierce
  • From Prism0467 on February 12, 2011
    Alright, Shikamaru! Do it!
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  • From roro237 on February 09, 2011
    When I seen the tittle I got scare! I didn't know what to expect?! Thank goodness Haur is all right! Excellent chapter as always oh Great Queen of the Naruto Space Universe ^_^
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  • From ANON - richon on February 09, 2011
    ranamaru is a print it's maid sens and it will help shikamaru to fnd an exit . Still love your story and want more, see you soon
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  • From cynaga on February 09, 2011
    [Ch.57] I like the word 'print'. It has a different feel to it than 'clone'.
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  • From Prism0467 on February 09, 2011
    Interesting spin on death, cloning.

    Excellent chapter.
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  • From ANON - v on February 09, 2011
    OMG!! Haru was injured!! Could of possibly died..someone needs to pay!!They need to go in there and bring the smack down on these people!! Obviously Konan is a complete idiot, and pein is a wackjob..I've decided to no longer find them interesting, one of To-chan's children was hurt!!
    Kill them all!!!! :)
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  • From ANON - richon on February 07, 2011
    The rescue is starting, hopefuly it will be quick
    love your story
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  • From ANON - Zakunai on February 06, 2011
    Lol, a ship named Rosie, now you made me really curious about your original fic. It was nice to have Sasuke waiting for Naruto's permission to show Klennethon the jungle/ forest, somehow the scene where he walked through and was awed by the forest that Shikamaru created is the most striking one for me for this chapter, kind of made me feel lonely...
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  • From ANON - Lixx on February 05, 2011
    I have been reading since the first chapter of ‘In the cold of space you find the heat suns’. I apologize for never having posting sooner. I am a huge fan of this fan fiction story line and live in fear of it's conclusion! Your writing skill is evident and I am never disappointed in a posted chapter, even if it goes in a different direction then I hoped! I love your portrayal of the characters, and even though they have 'deviated' from their characters from the true Naruto universe it is only to be expected as what they are going through and experiencing is completely different. They are true to themselves and your storyline. I look forward to many more chapters and while I hope everyone is reunited soon also hope that the tale will keep going! Thank you for posting this story. It is truly one of my favorites.
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  • From roro237 on February 05, 2011
    I love it a ship name Rosie!!! Fancy that:) Would you believe that a ship name Rosie used to be married to a ship named Klennethon?!(Kenneth) Small universe huh?:) I'm with Naruto we will never like Klenn but he wants Shika back and so do we. Once again all the details were wonderfully mind boggling! You are amazing!! I'm on the edge of my seat literally and physically waiting for more! Thank you for two chapters this week ~Bowing~. ^_^
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  • From Prism0467 on February 05, 2011
    20,000 hits, lady, you are all over the place!

    I like the birch trees too.
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  • From cynaga on February 05, 2011
    [ch 56] I like the hints about Klennethon and Garner...
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  • From ANON - SidonieStarr on February 03, 2011
    High adventure, sex, and interesting bioethical issues - who could ask for more? It's quite a contrast with the chapters concerned with home life and the domestic arts (optimal nursery design, sewing, fashion shows, folding clothes in the closet). I don't think you could do that in commercial fiction, but I like it all and it keeps me guessing.

    I wonder how Konan will turn out? I'm not sure what crimes she, rather than her prints, has committed. If your prints do something bad and you didn't intend for them to do something bad (unlike Pein), you can't be guilty - that would be condemning you on the basis of your status rather than your acts. Still, Konan is really hard to like.
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  • From missbri88 on February 03, 2011
    Oh I have missed this fic while my newlywed husband and I packed up and moved out of my mother's home. I was so totally pumped to take my day and sit and catch up with "Iteration". I'm still loving the story and I can never wait for more!
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  • From ANON - richon on February 03, 2011
    shika is finding this way in the pein defenses, hope they will broke soon. Love your story, see you soon
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