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By : mannahpierce
  • From cynaga on February 19, 2011
    [ch.60] For a while I was a little frustrated with the amount of characters and different plots going on in the story,the pacing, basically. Frustrated because each one was as fascinating as the next and it never seemed to be enough about each character/situation to satisfy.

    But this Shika capture arc has been just right. Deep, interesting characters that you care so much about. You show us their humanity in special ways that draw us right in. The story line with: the Atkatsuki, space travel, prints, data streams, planets with murderous vegetation... is worthy of a top grade Sci-Fi movie experience.

    I am a big Sci-Fi fan.When I was a teen that is all I read. I started with Madeline L'Engle's A Wrinbkle in Time and went on to classics such as Dune by Frank Hebert, Brave New World by Aldous Huxley, 1984 by George Orwell and many, many more. I read so much that when I started college I stopped reading fiction because for every 10 books I'd read only one might be excellent.

    I tell you this because you have whetted my appetite for great Sci-Fi again - something I never expected from my guilty pleasure yaoi fan-fics. I hope that you are using this as a starting board for your own book. I think even if you just changed the characters name and some of the details, it would be your own. It's a great start and I would love to hold one of your books in my hands one day!
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  • From roro237 on February 19, 2011
    Comfort was a perfect tittle:) Naruto's comforting was the sweetest! You probably thought I would say that:) But his was! Because he's the 'hug dispenser'! I love that:) Okay I'll admit the comforting by Sasori was very nice. Ranmaru really needed it. I'm with the crew I'm feeling hopefully Shika and Haru will be returning home soon! Another wonderful chapter Oh Great Queen of the Naruto Space Universer ^_^

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  • From ANON - zakunai on February 19, 2011
    In the anime Ranmaru looked like twelve, does that mean Sasori looked twelve too, because imagining him doing all those plotting and killing in an adolescent body with the mind of a thirty-year-old is disturbingly intriguing. Haru's getting scars, I wonder how the other kids going to react to that, maybe Hikaru would get jealous and tried to get himself some battle scars too, haha, I'm totally cheering for Haru and Shikamaru getting back safely and refused to angst about them in capture, and I'm really curious and loving how you will write it up. Thanks for writing, I enjoyed reading it very much.
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  • From ANON - lonelylulaby on February 17, 2011
    HI!!!!!!! I was thinkin that maybe I should put myself on the list for the email, but then I was like... I like to be pleasantly surprised when I check the website and see that you have updated. Thank you for another awesomely wonderful chapter. I really enjoyed the chapter Changes, I wonder what Haru will say when he sees it. Also I wonder what the children will say when they see he has scars. I'm sorta like WTF! with Pein, since he didn't have advanced technology, I wouldn't be able to do it. Anyho enjoyed these chapters and I'll try to review semi-regularly, I have no excuse, just lazy. ^_^

    ja ne till next time and keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - gingitsune on February 17, 2011
    I am so guilty of not doing more frequent reviews. This is another wonderful chapter from you :D I love how things are unfolding & each chapter continues to keep me on my toes! Great writing!
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  • From roro237 on February 16, 2011
    YESSS!!! Wonderful! The people the details were brilliant as always:) I loved it ^_^
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  • From cynaga on February 16, 2011
    [ch 59] YES! Help from an unexpected source - Sasori!
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 16, 2011
    I really love this story, there's so much detail.
    I'd been wondering about why the Devas were behaving unexpectedly. It's interesting that it's not even something/one else getting to them, just their convictions.
    And pein underestimates the strength of the forces against him. I can't wait to see how this turns out :)
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  • From Prism0467 on February 16, 2011
    Alright! Plot twists!

    Who was the print making eyes at Shikamaru? Better not!

    That comm method was awesome. But how is it that Shikamaru was the only one who noticed a rhythmic twitching of Sasori's index finger?
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  • From blugirlami21 on February 16, 2011
    Exciting...things are progressing nicely. I hope this Pein subplot wraps up soon and with a good resolution. I am not a huge fan of danger plots and while they add to the excitement level and all that I would rather read about the rebuilding of the Uchiha, everyone's relationships and watching the family grow especially children. I hope you continue to get the reviews you deserve so that you continue to be motivated to keep writing this story.
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  • From ANON - richon on February 13, 2011
    oh the situation with pein is more and more difficult, hopefull shi will gain his confidence and they will be back soon the sasu and naru. love your story!!
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  • From ANON - v on February 12, 2011
    I'm concerned about Haru, I do think pein prefers him ill or hurt in order to control Shika, which of course leads me to believe he should die a horrible painful death. However yeah for the two Z's for standing up against him if only for a moment. I wonder how Naruto will react if he ever finds out haru was injured and scarred? or the rest of Haru's very dangerous family.
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  • From Cognizant on February 12, 2011
    Woot! I've finally caught up! I love your way with words and the vocabulary you use. You string them together as if it's the only way that the story can be written. Every chapter keeps building onto the story and you keep bringing me to the edge of suspense every time. Even though the characters from Naruto are in a different universe, you've made them fit into your world perfectly with your own characters.

    Other than being busy with work, I hope to read more chapters from you soon! Keep up your awesome writing and know that as one of your readers, I greatly appreciate your work!
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  • From cynaga on February 12, 2011
    I am enjoying the interactions between Shika and Atkatsuki so much!
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  • From roro237 on February 12, 2011
    This was like watching anime seriously! You covered a lot!! The children in their new big kid room with the bat-poles:) That was so touching how Neji unpacked Haur stuff. I loved it! Of course nothing can compare to our boys in the bed chamber. 'Yea Baby!' The nest building is one of your most amazing ideas and I love it to death:) Because it can be for sex or sleeping. It's so real! I turn into fluffy soft 237 every time fluffy soft Naruto is around:) I have to admit that it sadden me to hearing the number of days Shika and Haur are away from the family. Haur must feel really bad if he was wishing for Rin. That broke my heart. I don't think I've said this in a while I LOVE your story it just keeps on getting better! ~Bowing~ Thank you for your hard work Oh Great Queen of the Naruto Universe ^_^
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