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By : mannahpierce
  • From ANON - SidonieStarr on February 23, 2011
    Great story line! Interesting that they escaped with mindprint equipment.
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  • From randrinawilson on February 23, 2011
    That was betther than watching and episode of 24! I was clenching my jaw and everything waiting to see what was going to happen. you are so amazing! The storyline is so diverse that it just makes you love the characters more. Yeah, I would like to see more sasuke/naruto but you give the readers soooo much with this story that when we do get some naru/sasuke we just do the happy dance. I wonder if you will ever solve the Bara hybrid mystery for us though? But this was just so fantastic! They are going home! Haru will get to see his New brother and sisters born if there are no more problems, Klenn will go ape s... on pein now that Shika is safely out of his grasp ans Neji will Sjika a ring now that he sees how it is to be without him. I cant wait till saturdays "episode"
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  • From ANON - The Horseman of Death on February 23, 2011
    go ranmaru shikamaru and haru... maybe sasori now you can all do the happy dance.
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  • From cynaga on February 23, 2011
    [ch.61] Too easy. Let's see what happens now...
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  • From Prism0467 on February 23, 2011
    Yay! Escape! Now let's hope they make it back to Uchiha intact.

    LOL what will Shikamaru have to do for Klenn Darrent after this?
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  • From ANON - richon on February 23, 2011
    yeah the escape with little help of everyone!!! i am so happy !! the uchihahousehold will be too. Love your story the way it's , don't change anything and stay with your orignal plot !!! craving for more , see you soon
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  • From ANON - lonelylulaby on February 20, 2011
    GAH, why do they have to die soo young. Poor reprint Ranmaru, if only he could find the original, that could maybe help. I don't want to watch him slowly deteriorate..........WAHHHH. Thanks for another great chapter.

    ja ne till next time and keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - richon on February 20, 2011
    poor ranmaru !! i m so sad for him. He is so brave. hope they will escape soon. love your story. see you soon
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  • From nivell on February 20, 2011
    Hi Mannah, I admit I'm one of the few readers who come and go to read a few chapters and may or may not review. To tell you the truth, the story has gone in so many directions that it has turned me off quite a bit. I do enjoy your plot line but I feel that your preference for SasuNaru instead of NaruSasu in the sex scenes was a big factor for me not to read the other chapters. I loved it in the beginning when you made them more equal and when Naruto wasn't afraid to go growly possessive of Sasuke. That was one of the biggest reason that I read this story because it was nice to see a more subdued Sasuke getting take care off. I think you gave a reason why Naruto goes growly soft instead because he was afraid of harming Sasuke but they did so in the beginning and no one was hurt. I think I mentioned this a couple of times and you've tried writing it with Naruto being dominant but it felt like you weren't putting your heart into writing those scenes and instead it felt like you were merely pleasing me and others who like NaruSasu. I know, pairings and who's on top/bottom is a stupid thing to think or talk about but for me, as a reader, that's a big factor in why I'll read a story. Another reason for the fewer interest, was the fact that there are so many characters and children getting introduced in almost each chapter that I forget who's who. Other than that, I did read a few chapters and I'm glad Konan is getting along with Haru. Poor thing for getting hurt, though. Mannah, wasn't sure if I should have written this in a private email to you or something so you can respond but let me know.
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  • From Dorkchic on February 19, 2011
    I actually cried over this chapter. You have made such a noble character of Ranmaru and I love it. The hopeless romantic in me does hope that it will work out in the end. Maybe Uchiha could find the original or they could start over with the clone and bring him back into the fold like they did the first time. I don't know- I am just wishing for something good for Ranmaru after all of the crap that has made up his life. Thank you for updating so frequently. This has become my daytime soap opera!
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  • From ANON - The Horseman of Death on February 19, 2011
    truly amazing thats all I can say.
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  • From ANON - gingitsune on February 19, 2011
    Wow! I'm starting to like Sasori! Finally! A chance to possibly escape! Can't wait to read more. Poor Ranmaru :( Great writing as usual. :D Keep up the great work! :D
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  • From ANON - v on February 19, 2011
    I love this tale..I love it. How brave and selfless of Ranmaru's print, and how frightening these chapters are becoming. I'm scared for everyone, Naruto because he's changed, Neji because his not functioning well, Shika because he's going to do anything to save Haru, and some of the characters I don't like because they're not completely evil, I have no idea whats going to happen next...but I so enjoy the moments you show that I wasn't even aware that I need to know about. I still despise Pein and am disgusted by Konan...so there.. lol:)
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  • From satterb on February 19, 2011
    Just wanted to let you know how much I've been enjoying your stories. I really appreciate all your hard work. I'm glad you've made Sasori into someone who can be admired. He's sooo beautiful. LOL
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  • From Prism0467 on February 19, 2011
    Oh, wow! This chapter was amazing! Ranmaru and Sasori, cuddled in bed, plotting a daring escape together! I love this story so much!
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