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By : mannahpierce
  • From ANON - richon on March 02, 2011
    yeah shika is back !!! neji must be happy, I am too. How will react haru ??? love your story. please update soon naru, sasu and me can't wait !!
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  • From suzannecmc on March 02, 2011
    that was nice, not over the top.
    very realistic.
    thank you:)
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  • From cynaga on March 02, 2011
    [ch. 63] HURRAY~! It was so clever and cute the way Shika arranged things!
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  • From Gaia77 on March 02, 2011
    I really love you right now.....Really, REALLY love you...

    Shika is back where he belongs, at last! Now I begin the impatient wait for Saturday...*fingers tapping on desk...leg shaking*
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  • From ANON - xxShadowheartxx on March 02, 2011
    Yay! Shika's home again, well, not quite home yet. But really close. I wait for all your updates with baited breath. :D
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  • From ANON - smauigirl on February 28, 2011
    Wow! I can't beleive what a great story this is. I'm not talking just fan fiction either. I read alot and I so appreciate a really good read. This is by far one of the best stories I have ever read. You made me laugh, cry, and sit on the edge of my seat trying to read just a little faster. Sorry I haven't reviewed before this but, I just couldn't stop reading long enough to. So......now that I have to wait for another chapter, I thought I'd get off my ass and tell you what a talented writer you are. Keep it up! I look forward to reading more of your work and seeing how the story turns out. Thank you (both) for all the hard work you've put into this.
    Aloha,
    smauigirl
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  • From ANON - Kat Saama on February 27, 2011
    Your story is amazing dont change a thing! Just keep doing what your doing please! I've been following your story for months but never reviewed or anything like that because I'm bad at them and I usually dont know what to say. But just to let you know I love your story and please just keep going in the direction your going I love it, it's so orginal with so many characters and setting I just simply love it! Would it be possible also if you could send us an email when the next chapter is out just I do leave it open on my tabs and check it daily so it would be much easier thanks!
    Kat Saama
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  • From Gingitsune32 on February 27, 2011
    I read this chapter twice. I like it that much! Do you think you will ever do a side story of Ranmaru with Sasori?

    I'm sad for Ranmaru but I think he made the right choice. I just hope that things will turn out as best as they can be. Can't wait to see how the actual Ranmaru will integrate to the household!
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  • From ANON - richon on February 27, 2011
    ranmaru is a good print, too gentle and realist of his good. I have looking forward to know how the uchiha household will react when tey will know they escape. love your story!! see you soon
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  • From ANON - v on February 27, 2011
    I'm so happy they've escaped but I'm still holding my breath..anything could happen. I also feel so sad for Ranmaru's print..it is hard to remember that he isn't "that" Ranmaru, however I am a little distracted from that by the original eight year old Ranmaru , thats going to be interesting I think. I'm hoping Shika and Haru get home safe, its been so long already, I just can't predict anything at this point but I do believe that is what keeps me so attached to the storyline along with the fact that the characters themselves are so fantastic they practically live in your head. :) lol..cudos to small fox for being your muse and for all the support he or she's given to you, we all appreciate it! :)

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  • From bloodshound on February 27, 2011
    poor ranmaru but i think sasori will be good for him and it's great they got feral ranmaru even if they have a hard time with him. He deserves a chance at a good life and it will help konohamaru i think too. looking forward to more
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  • From Prism0467 on February 26, 2011
    Wow, even the reprint is making the sacrifices! His essence will grow up to be a fine person.
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  • From ANON - lonelylulaby on February 26, 2011
    WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH, if I wasn't in a public place right now I would just start bawling my eyes out. I don't want Ranmaru to be left be hind, "no child left behind act" I wonder what Shika will do with the ship and fetuses. Also THANKS SMALL FOX!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! for betaing. Can't wait for another great chapter to come. GAH! all your characters just come alive, and grow. I don't want to c them go. I'm goin t miss THIS Ranmaru too. Another thing is who is goin to take care of the 8 yr old Ranmaru? Kono-kun, probably not. I would be too much. this is getting me to think. There are soo many diverse characters in this story and I really enjoy it. I'm glad that you follow your muse. If other ppl don't like it, they can click the back button.

    ja ne till next time and keep up the good work
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  • From roro237 on February 26, 2011
    I couldn't wait to see how the tittle worked in the story:) It is so sad to think about all the life developing on that ship. Because of Pein. But some happiness came when Shika said they would raise the real Ranmaru:) You and the technical side of this story is simply amazing! The real question is how in the world do you think of it?! The clones mindprints wOw! As much as I disliked Klenn D, he has been a much needed allie:) Oh Great Queen of the Naruto Space Universe another magnificent chapter! Thanks of two again this week ^_^
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  • From ANON - xxShadowheartxx on February 26, 2011
    Yay! Shikamaru and Haru are getting away. Those poor babies, I hope they'll be alright. Oh no, Ranmaru can't stay behind, it won't be the same without him.... Update as soon as you can. :D
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