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By : mannahpierce
  • From roro237 on March 05, 2011
    OMG! This chapter was breath taking!! Now that Shika and Haru are safe all the fear and worries are coming out in Naruto. Just when I think I couldn't love him anymore you step it up and I fall even harder for him:) But he has a breaking point to and I think fluffy soft has let it come out thank goodness! He has been strong for Sasuke Neji and all who needed it. Hey listen to me I'm defending Naruto to you:) You can just call me that silly girl:) I loved this chapter! I didn't have a nose bleed because Sasuke was so worried something wasn't right. Boy was he right! The main thing is their all right and will soon reunite. There's so much to look forward to in your story for me! The other point I loved so much was Haru said Hello to To-chan first. Once again Naruto is the first light seen at the end of the tunnel:) ~Bowing~ Thank you for another day in the life of Naruto Space Universe ^_^
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  • From ANON - xxShadowheartxx on March 05, 2011
    Aw, poor, poor Naruto. I hope Haru and Shikamaru come home soon and then they can de-pod the other children.
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  • From bloodshound on March 05, 2011
    poor Naru. sniffles.
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on March 04, 2011
    This story is becoming more and more deep. I love it.
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  • From ANON - Tai on March 03, 2011
    Okay. I can breath now. Shika is back and with Neji. I couldn't take the stress much longer.
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  • From ANON - The Horseman of Death on March 03, 2011
    whoohoo... whats in the box? or is that who?
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  • From bloodshound on March 03, 2011
    shipping himself as freight... brillient and utterly hillarious. kudos.
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  • From ANON - v on March 03, 2011
    So sneaky!! I know a cliffhanger when I see one, I'm not calm at all..anything could go wrong at this point!! Just when were all so ecstatic..BAMMO!!..where's haru? What happened to Ranmaru's print? Where's the ship with all the clones? Is that even Shika? or is it some weird clone/drone that Pein made??!!..You see!! You see what you've done to a calm, otherwise normal person like myself....i really love this story...
    ...please hurry with the next chapter :) lol.
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  • From ANON - lonelylulaby on March 03, 2011
    I just wanted to add that I am TOO stocked (sp?) right now. don't even know if I spelled that right

    ja
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  • From ANON - lonelylulaby on March 03, 2011
    Holy Crap, was not expecting that. I didn't know who it was cause you can't hear voices when you read. So I really wanted to know. GAH!!! they are back together again. Now they just have to make it back onto the Oak safely *knocking on wood* GAH, another great chappi thanks


    ja ne till next time and keep up the great work
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  • From ANON - maliya on March 02, 2011
    I wish to say that your story has truly touched me. Is incredible to read the way you made the characters develop. I learned to love them in each and every chapter. I also love the way you write, is strange, the complexity of simplicity. I feel like reading a flow of water, sometimes smooth, sometimes rough. I will always admire your talent to bring up those kinds of emotions. You make it look so easy. You truly have a gift when it comes to create fantasy. Thanks you for allow us to enter this fantastic world!
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  • From roro237 on March 02, 2011
    That was fantastic!!!!!! I was on the edge of my seat and you Oh Great Queen of the Naruto Space Universe had it in the last sentences of the chapter:) They found them! I'm so happy!! You are a master mind!! I really feel happy like a family member returning home:) That was an incredible chapter! You know how much I love your tittles:) Well this one still has be smiling because it is so Shika ^_^
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  • From Prism0467 on March 02, 2011
    YES! I swear to God I can feel Neji's exhilaration right now!
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  • From Gingitsune32 on March 02, 2011
    I definitely didn't expect the cargo part. Yeah finally home! :D

    I wonder if Klenth (? spelling) is going to 'request' a meeting to see if Shika is well :D Yeah!!!!
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  • From blugirlami21 on March 02, 2011
    That was great, I wish we could have gotten a little more reunion time with Shika and Haru but that will probably happen in the next chapter. The suspense was great, it nearly killed me to find out if they were going to find him and be able to take them home. I wonder if Shika will mention Ranmaru's role in their escape to Maru. On the one hand he deserves to know but on the other hand he has grieved and has moved on and there is nothing he can do to get his Ranmaru back. I'm really happy that you have gotten all the reviews you deserve and I hope that you continue to find inspiration to write this story.
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