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From Gingitsune32 on March 16, 2011
Woah! I didn't even think that Iruka will be the one to raise Ranmaru! Wow...... Btw the image of Yuki in a kimono is still sticking in my brain! :)
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From ANON - Nemo-Hime on March 15, 2011
Hello again. I am happy to say that I am not looking through tears to write this review. Thank you. I would also like to say that I never really hated you. I hope you know I was just very sad. And to address the author's note at the bottom of this chapter, I would like to formally plead, beg, pray, wish, hope and offer any of my services you may wish, including acting as an extra beta, testing my very limited writing skills, even more limited art skills, a friend, or someone to bounce ideas off of, that Rin and/or Kotohime find some way to help Naruto live as long as Sasuke. I understand that my views and wishes probably mean very little to you, but I have to try. I would also like to bathe you in love for Haku, who might be my favorite character. And also for giving Ranmaru back, albeit in a round about and beautifully clever way. I can tell you with no uncertainty that you are incredibly talented. I can also tell you that I know many people on y!gallery who would worship you, including me. I know posting all of this there would take a long time and be lots of trouble, but please think about it. I can't help but hope that you will read this review and reply. I hope even more that we could grow to be friends. I would love to talk to you about your talents. But I understand if that is just to creepy for words.
Thank you for reading my review and for being amazing.
~Nemo-Hime
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From ANON - Tati on March 15, 2011
All caught up, yay! Fantastic... the reunion and the shift in relationship between Haru and Shika and then Shika and Naruto, so well developed and written.
What more can I say but keep on writing. You so rock!!
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From ANON - Nemo-Hime on March 15, 2011
I am not going to lie to you. Reading this chapter made me hate you just a little. As unfair as that sounds, it is the mark of a truly great writer; to make someone care so much about a character that their death hurts. I am going to read on... and hope that he comes back, even though I know he can't. I keep telling myself, maybe... but I know that it wont happen. I am sorry that my first review to you was in sadness. This being said, I have spent the past two days and nights reading your stories. I didn't sleep at all the first night I found them. I am such a hopeless romantic, and I keep telling myself that Ran-kun will come back and they will fix Naruto so that he will live as long as Sasuke. I hope that I am right. I truly do. Please, continue these stories with everything in you, they are breathtakingly beautiful.
Tearfully yours,
~Nemo-Hime
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From ANON - richon on March 13, 2011
they are finaly together!!! konohamaru know about ranmaru, he will be able to educate the new one. I want to know how the new babies will be. see you soon . love this story so much !!
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From ANON - lonelylulaby on March 13, 2011
Hiya girlie, i liked this chapter and im going to leave a longer review later. I have a flight to catch at 6 so i need some sleep.

ja ne till laytar
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From Gingitsune32 on March 12, 2011
Another wonderful chapter. I spot a tiny error?

�Hana gave me her reason,� Shikamaru replied. �She told me to take Hara back to his To-chan

I think yo meant Haru?

I personally can't wait for Shika & Klenn's reunion XD

I don't know.....I'm still semi rooting for a threesome. Then again with Neji, maybe it's a foursome? So many unrealized feelings btw Shika & Sasuke. Shika & Klenn. Hmm.......
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From ANON - Kat Saama on March 12, 2011
Amazing as usual keep it up! I personally find your writing style brillant I love it, as it's unusal to a certain degree as you have so many different characters! Sorry never reveiwed the last chapter my internet was down but so glad that Shika and Haru are back safe and mostly sound. Again keep it up and can't wait for the next chapter. Don't change, keep with whatever feels right for you! :)
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From ANON - v on March 12, 2011
I love that they are all back together, I also see how much this has changed Haru, Shika, and Naruto. I'm wondering how the feral child Ranmaru will effect the family and how different he will be. The small glimpse of Hikaru and Haru's relationship was very welcome, I was worried about how they interacted with each other but now I think that brothers in general have complicated relationships and due to their intelligence and way they are raised theirs just started sooner but still, there's love :) Klenn and Shika interacting in person, something to look forward too :), and how will Neji deal with that? Now to address your author note...you are making me nervous...yes, quality is important..to love and live, happy days are the best...i'll cry if anyone we love dies...i just want you to know. I don't expect it to change the things that occur but I feel that you should be aware of cause and effect..just saying.. ;) lol
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From ANON - xxShadowheartxx on March 12, 2011
Oh, I hope Sasuke will be kind to Hana and the Zetzus. If/when they find them.

I love this story so much, it's the highlight of my day.
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From ANON - kanazerosukenaru on March 12, 2011
chappie66 review

okay so maybe i can agree about the quality of life being just as good as the quantity in some instances. yeah naruto has had a good life with sasuke and it will continue to be good for however long he lives it, but i still can't help but want them to live a happily ever after.

I also can't help but be annyoyed by the way sasuke is acting like a jealous lover over shika.

seriously? he is worried about shika meeting klenn? come on sasuke you owe the man, and shika has proven himself loyal, it's not like klenn would take him away from uchiha he knows shika is happiest acting as sasuke's primary advisor, and staying behind with haru.

i'm excited about the new babies, i hope everyone adust to the new additions to family. omg and the whole "you're not my leader" thing that happened between haru and hikaru was awesome...if that was not a moment of one sibling telling the other who he thought was going to be the leader, i don't know what was....LOL...but there are 3 more sibs coming into the picture,and haru may meet his match in one of them....who knows minato was a genius and i'm assuming minato was probably the human that naruto got his human genes from....anyway...i digress into my own imagination....so i loved the whole "brotherly make up session" between the two boys, but i was sad to hear how hikaru interpreted his papa's admonishment....i hope he gets that straightened out...he reminds me more and more of an old itachi every time he has a fight with haru. maybe uncle itachi needs to step in and give guidance on how to love a little brother....and how to serve a little brother.

i liked this chappie, and i'm still on the save naru campaign...narusasu is my favorite all time pairing, and it would be hypocritical of me to say otherwise....i know this is YOUR story but i can still express MY opinions, and i know YOU appreciate them even if other's don't.

thanks for sharing and for all the work and effort you put into entertaining your readers...that is why you have such a loyal fanbase.... :)
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From missbri88 on March 12, 2011
I love how complicated the story is and the open doors in the plotlines. It makes for better reading and the unexpected. I can never thoroughly guess what will happen next. Its way better than the soap operas I use to watch when I was younger. Lol.
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From roro237 on March 12, 2011
You totally blow my mind when you do the children together!! That was wonderful and amazing!!! I loved it:) I gotta tell what else I loved. To-chan spending the morning with Haru and the way Haru was loving it! I bet you're so surprise that was it:) The decisions that Sasuke made all day showed just how much he's grown as the leader and father. I do love Sasuke! The stuff he was thinking about Yu-chan was so parental and sweet. Hey I checked out the picture it was fantastic! ^_^
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From Prism0467 on March 12, 2011
More babies! What a brood!

I am so glad that Shikamaru and Haru are back with their family.

YOur fan art is amazing, by the way.
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From ANON - cynaga on March 12, 2011
[ch.66] Delicious chappy~!!!
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