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By : mannahpierce
  • From ANON - Kat Saama on March 18, 2011
    Amazing as usual ^^ Keep it up! ^^
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  • From suzannecmc on March 17, 2011
    "Kiba had wanted to wag the tail he did not have."

    this was a fun line!
    this whole chapter brought a much needed smile to my face.
    long week of illness and obligations:(

    but like I said you make it interesting/different without going
    over the top. Was Ranmaru's name his feral name, or one the Akatsuki chose?
    also I would like to see a little Iruks/Kakashi baby - perhaps Kakashi will surprise himself
    and want one too after getting a taste of parenting his own:)
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  • From ANON - richon on March 17, 2011
    iruka has got a hard challenge but it will be good for everybody to see ranmaru. love this fic. see you soon
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  • From bloodshound on March 17, 2011
    you for thinking outside the box Naru and killing two birds with one stone. Ir chan can learn about ferals and check on their protoges at the same time. Yay for multitasking. ^^
    And he'll need to learn. poor 'Keshi... this isn't going to be easy.
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  • From ANON - v on March 17, 2011
    I love it when Kakashi gets all crazy when it comes to Iruka, and how wonderful that they might end up raising the feral Ranmaru, plus I'd love to see how five and his little family is doing, i got such a kick out of him. I'm happy to get a break from the stress of the kidnapping, to see the family interacting together with their different perspectives and personalities. Although the adventure of the story is wonderful, the day to day of it is just as good and I think helps me to connect with all the characters. can't wait for the next chapter :)
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  • From ANON - lonelylulaby on March 17, 2011
    GAH!!!! This story just gets me soo excited. I love how Iruka is going to be the one to raise feral Ranmaru and they get to visit Haven! Too geeked. I really like the chapter before, Haru is just too smart. I loved the scene with him and Hikaru. Then the den/snug scene in this chapter just touched my heart strings. They are all growing up. And I don't want them too. I feel as though I am a part of this family and I'm watching all this happen first hand. Time is flying. You have AWESOME character development and I don't think anyone else could pull this saga off half as good as you are. Oh, and the part in the chapter where Yoshimi (I think) asked why Papa wanted more kids, I wouldn't have know the answer, the first thing that popped into my head was 'cause you guys (kits) are going to die and leave me all alone' and you cannot tell children that. lol Anywho I really liked these chapters. I think I'm going to read the whole story all over again cause it's just an awesome fanfiction. I do believe this is the longest review I have ever written.

    ja ne till next time and keep up the good work

    PS Konohamaru's reasoning behind why they needed to keep feral Ranmaru on the ship was very sound. Can't wait for the adventures to come.
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  • From ANON - KL on March 16, 2011
    hi, this is kaname_luvr from ff!!!
    omg!!! i felt insulted when you made the distinction between purebreds and hybrids!!! that was like racisim or something!!! yes thats how into the story i am, so yeah no more racisim amongst the litter!!! though im still loving this story!!!
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  • From roro237 on March 16, 2011
    That chapter was wonderful! I was so there in every moment!! I didn't see it coming? That Iruka-sensei would want to raise Ranmaur. That was brilliant! No one better. Now just to get Kakashi on board:) Then the den issue wOw! Thank goodness Kiba realized his err and fixed it. I do see where Kiba was coming from but To-chan has to feel comfortable:) You know I love it that the little-est Naruto has strong lungs:) When all the kids got into the snug even Hikaru that was just so precious:) Oh Great Queen of the Naruto Space Universe I loved it all! The tittle was marvelous ^_^
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  • From ANON - A Flying Monkey on March 16, 2011
    I love it when this story is updated. It is such a vast world and I think its amazing how Naruto and Sasuke have so many kids! This story is the Best!
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  • From Halskr on March 16, 2011
    I am still engrossed in this story. I went back and reread it from the beginning and I enjoyed it as much as the first time around! I think that what you have done to these characters is brilliant. They have evolved from the anime and become your own. I cant wait to read more about The Uchiha and Akatsuki. I am curious will we ever learn more about Naruto's past? If not, the story is fine as it is. Thanks for writing and sharing this!
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  • From ANON - Nemo-Hime on March 16, 2011
    Hello! I am sorry that I was expecting a reply. I am not used to AFF yet, as I spend more time on y!gal and FF. My e-mail is tipcdragon@gmail.com, and I would be honored to hear from you. I would also like to be added to your mailing list for new chapters.
    I love this chapter and how everyone is coping with Ranmaru. I must admit, I do harbor some hope that he will grow into a person similar to his clone. I admit, I was not able to get this story out of my head all day, and I blame you for the classes I cannot remember.
    Best Wishes,
    ~Nemo-Hime
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  • From ANON - Moonmoore on March 16, 2011
    Hi Mannah. It's been a while since I chacked in. A lot of stuff happened that kept me away. Things are still rough but I hope that soon everything will go back to normal. Anyway, I finally had a chance to catch up and I'm so glad that Shika and Haru are back home. I actually chacked on the link and saw the amazing pic og the two together in captivity. Kyubbi is very talented. I asked him if he could make some more for your universe so I'm hoping that he would do more. I'm particularly interested in one of Naru and Sasu in full Uchiha regalia, Sasuke as The Uchiha head and Naruto as his Champion and partner. With the way he draws it would ne amazing. So let's keep our fingers crossed and hope for a favorable outcome.

    The story has come so far and so beautifully. When I am reading tons of stuff pop into my head that I wish I had a redorder in my mind to catch every single thought. I love where the story has gone. I find Naruto's character so complex and enthralling. I would've been pissed at Shika for not protecting Haru enough and very jealous of the closeness between the two which I know it is more than justified but I am possessive like that. Dunno where I get from but is a huge flaw in my character.

    I am glad that Ranmaru will have a chance for a better future with Uchiha and especially thankful that Iruka is going to take him in. That is going to be very good for him. I also loved tha part about Kiba realzing his mistake and fixing it. He is another great character in this story.

    Well, that is it for now and I hope to be able to read the next chapter soon. Tkake care and thank you.

    Sincerely


    Moonmoore
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  • From Prism0467 on March 16, 2011
    Wow. Lots of moving parts in this chapter. I'm glad that Iruka will be taking on raising the feral Ranmaru.

    I can't help thinking that the time is passing very quickly; how much longer does Naruto have?
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  • From ANON - V-Anon on March 16, 2011
    Thank you for the update~. Your Iruka really feels quite Iruka-ish. Your Kakashi is also pretty cool. I like the compromise and Kiba's reaction to praise.
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  • From satterb on March 16, 2011
    I chuckle at Kakashi's dilemma! He's not "selfish" per say, but he is content with his life and selfish with his Iruka. I would love to see him find something to love about being a "parent" to Ranmaru. He's capable of loving and needing Iruka, I would think that if Ranmaru were to have some quality that touches his heart, or makes him a "proud papa" it would be lovely! Thanks for another wonderful update to this incredible universe you've created. As always, I'm thrilled when I see more.
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