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By : mannahpierce
  • From roro237 on March 23, 2011
    I'm still laughing at Papa telling Ya-chan don't sniff people until you know them well enough to ask:) That tickled me so much because having kids you're always telling them done do that but I never had to stop them from that one:) I love it! I have a new respect for the parents of kits:) My poor Naruto is stress oh no maybe not there was howling at the end:) Ok right now everything is funny to me! I have the giggles. It's your fault for making me laugh:) I loved it! ^_^
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  • From satterb on March 23, 2011
    The children are soooo cute. I love the individual personalities! This was a heart pounding chapter. I'm glad that Ran isn't as feral as he is self protective. Thanks for this wonderful chapter. I always look forward to your next update!!!!
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  • From randrinawilson on March 23, 2011
    That a was excititing first day with the crew!!!! Ran will be quite the new addition. I see him getting along with the children really well once he has some training because he still has that wildness about him that Naruto had even though he isnt a hybrid. He is a empath though. Once he gets over his aversion to touching people he will be able to tell that everyone wats what is best for him and just want to care for him. Seeing Naruto goo off like that was just Like Wild Kingdom, that was amazing. Great Chapter. Looking Forward To Saturday.
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  • From ANON - cynaga on March 23, 2011
    CH. 69 - Ran!!! How amazing to see how he views the Uchiha world!
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  • From suzannecmc on March 21, 2011
    nothing but smiles this one:)
    thank you.
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  • From ANON - Nemo-Hime on March 21, 2011
    O, I just ADORE Naruto in all his forms. Might I ask for a bit more Haku? ^^; I love him so much. XD
    Well done as always. Again, when you have the time and if you feel like it, I would love to talk to you, but I understand if you are busy.
    Thank you for entertaining us!
    ~Nemo-Hime
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  • From ANON - v on March 20, 2011
    so happy to see how five,chamu and the others are doing..I love their business's :) I'm very happy that Kakashi and Iruka will be able to help the feral Ranmaru grow up. I look forward to seeing all the trials and joys they go thru with him :) I definitely agree that shikamaru should not be let off the ship anytime soon, if ever!! lol..I very much enjoy seeing sasuke and naruto in their parent mode, interacting with their children, I also love how they know each other so well ;) I started reading the story again last nite, all the way back to the very first chapter of "In the cold of space"...its amazing how much everyone has changed and grown, and how us, your loyal readers have been there to see it and are dying to read more. lol :)
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  • From randrinawilson on March 19, 2011
    I am glad that Kakashi changed his mind about Iruka raising feral Ranmaru. It was a very poignant moment where Konohamaru explained that he needed to see this ranmaru grow up to know that he wasnt his ranmaru. Going to see the other Feral children that have changed and grown so much reminded Kakashi that Iruka is very good at taking broken people and helping them develope into the people that we know and love today. Look at our present crew. I am concerned for SHika. I am glad that Naruto and Haru have gained their parent/child perspectives back. since they have been reunited they have reformed the bond that had before the kidnapping because Naruto allowed Haru to see that it was okay that he relied on/loved his Shika and Naruto wasnt threatened (not any more) about it. I am concerned about Shikamaru though. It seems as though he has lost his perspective when he made the comment about how he learned a lesson with how things seemed to have run fine without him when he was kidnapped. He even ignored Sasuke when he said that they, their family were not fine. Has shika lost his way? Several readers have commented that the relationships in this story are the glue that hold this whole lovable thing togthere and I agree. Shika seems lost at this point and adrift. Hopefully Klenn can set right again when they have that "face to face" talk Shikamaru requested. I dont think that Shika wants to leave, because it seems that Sasuke might have gotten that slight fear when Shikamaru asked that but I think that Shikamaru just wants to get Klenns opinion on some things.
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  • From ANON - Moonmoore on March 19, 2011
    Nice chapter as always. I loved seeing Sasuke with the babies. I am glad that he was able to find a way to comfort Tsuneo. The little ones always create a tug at my heartstrings. Especially when I think of the huge differences between their childhood and their parents. I am glad that they have it way better, that's what any parent wants for their children. I was happy to see that The Haven is doing so well. Also, for some reason that last part of the chapter left me with a feeling of forshadowing. Dunno why but I feel like the other shoe is about to drop. Oh well, we'll see, rigth? What I would really want is for Uchiha to go on the offensive and not give Akatsuki the chance to attack them again. It is time Uchiha sent the message loud and clear to all their enemies that they will not stand for any attacks and that if they are hit they will fight and bring the fight to their enemies doorstep and they will be hell to pay. Anyway, thanks again for being so good to us with the posting and take care for now.

    Sincerely


    Moonmoore
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  • From ANON - richon on March 19, 2011
    oh kakashi find a new cat, they will be wonderfull with ranmaru. sasu and naru are a beautiful couple, their children are awesome 12 it's a lot. love this story.
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  • From ANON - V-Anon on March 19, 2011
    tiny, tiny, blaring alarms @-@...Poor Shikamaru though. Stuck on the ship~
    Thank you for updating once again~
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  • From roro237 on March 19, 2011
    I love how the chapter showed a few different meaning of the tittle:) That day in the life of the Uchiha Clan was a warm summer breeze. Just wonderful! My favorite part was Sasuke singing to his baby boy:) I loved that hold he wont stop crying but his Papa founded what worked for him! Queenie my second favorite was the last part:) Yea Baby!! Surpriseed that wasn't my first huh?:) You have a spoiled litter to you know two chapter in a week. Thank you for all your hard work ~Bowing~ I truly loved it as always ^_^
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  • From satterb on March 19, 2011
    I love reading about the little ones. They're sooo cute. We haven't seen possessive growling Naruto in a long time. I can't help thinking about the Zetsus...I'm hoping they find a way to contact Shika. I liked the friendship they had formed. It was fun reading about them. Thanks for all your hard work on this story. I love it.
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  • From Prism0467 on March 19, 2011
    That is definitely home.

    I'm so glad that Kakashi has become amenable to what needs to be done. Anything for Iruka!

    I love Iruka.
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  • From bloodshound on March 19, 2011
    d'awwwww. Scenes with the kids are cute, but scenes with sas and naru loving each other rock the most.
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