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  • From ANON - RICHON on March 27, 2011
    ran is finaly up and he is not so difficult. it's not kay but he is more an humain. Love this story, naru was dangerous a true dominant!!see you soon
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  • From Halskr on March 27, 2011
    This is one my favorite chapters in the last few. It is hard to imaging what Konahamaru is feeling dealing with Ran. I think what I like best about this is even with everything Ran endured he still has that innocence that only small children can have.
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  • From Prism0467 on March 26, 2011
    I adore Chouza.
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  • From ANON - kanazerosukenaru on March 26, 2011
    chapter 70 review...

    dude you have a way of making the simplest things in your story tear at my heart...this one made me teary-eyed!! poor ran-chan he thinks he is not a "real" boy.....like pinnochio......so sad!!!!!!
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  • From cynaga on March 26, 2011
    ch. 70 - Beautiful~!

    maybe now I'm real...
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  • From roro237 on March 26, 2011
    I have to tell you how spoilded I am. I have been checking to see if you posted all morning! My Saturday wouldn't have been right without you in it:) It was so sweet I loved it! I'm thinking Ran-chan will have two dads and a wonderful big brother in Konohamaru. ^_^
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  • From ANON - v on March 26, 2011
    I see the situation being very hard on Iruka because its been quite awhile since he's dealt with such a damaged child. Ran's thought process is also very sad, but I know his knew family will help him..I can't wait to see him interact with the children. I'm worried about Kono...I don't know what to hope happens for him because his life did revolve around his Ranmaru...very happy with the last two chapters :) humourous but a little sad also..can't wait for the next :)
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  • From satterb on March 26, 2011
    Oh, please don't torture Iruka too long. He really deserves some happiness. He's been patient with everyone elses issues, Iruka should be satisfied too. I see that Kakashi will be happy as long as Iruka is, but I think that's a cop out on his part. Maybe he should start training Ran to fight, to teach him to defend himself and his new family. I think Kakashi would love to find something of his own to be proud of with Ran. Just suggestions, I love this story anyway you write it. It always turns out wonderful!
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  • From suzannecmc on March 25, 2011
    oh something I forgot to add in the other review, I'm a little sorry that Iruka was not the first person to hold Ran.
    not that your Iruka would be anything but grateful, but still it was an important moment that should have been Iruks's.
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  • From ANON - Nemo-Hime on March 24, 2011
    Ehehehehehehe. Ran is already giving them a run for their money. I love it! XD
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  • From ANON - smauigirl on March 24, 2011
    I love this story, I love that you have continued it for so long. I hope there will be many more chapters to come. You truly are a gifted writer. Maybe someday I'll have the pleasure of reading one of your works in print. If not, I am more than happy to catch your work here. Thank you for it, and thank you Small Fox for your work in this as well.
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  • From Dorkchic on March 24, 2011
    Hahahahahahahah! I cannot wait to see Iruka's attempt at explaining the howling. He got super uncomfortable when having to talk to Naruto in the abstract about their sex life so his level of awkward when attempting to explain it to a child should be AWESOME! Maybe Naruto will help take Ran in hand and get him to understand that he is in a good, safe place. The other children should be able to help with goal- assuming that any of the parents allow the children around him until they are sure he is safe. Hopefully Kakashi and Iruka will not beat themselves up too terribly about what happened.
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  • From ANON - lonelylulaby on March 23, 2011
    “Everything is working well,” Ran assured him. “We are getting excellent data about his brain function.”
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  • From suzannecmc on March 23, 2011
    hahaha - I'm really not sure why their is no soundproofing on Nar/Sas room!
    I remember you writing it comforted the crew that their leader was happy(and horny),
    but with children about...I believe they might want to reconsider:)

    what an intelligent, exciting, and emotional roller-coaster you put them all on.
    Iruka and Kakashi are going to have challenges and great rewards.

    Thank you.

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  • From Prism0467 on March 23, 2011
    OMFG LMAO Ran must have PISSED himself when Naruto broke into a sprint behind him!

    There should be 248,000 hits on this story, not just 24,000...
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