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  • From randrinawilson on March 31, 2011
    Just thinking about the crew going back to tarrasaides is both heartwarming and scary at the same time. Its heartwarming becaue naruto actually had a moment where he sat in that rocker and thought about everything that sasuke has given him by postponing building the New Uchiha to build their family. He ponders some of the Little moments where he just likes to watch Sasuke with their children and he realizes that he could actually make being at tarrasaides work because he already has so much and it what Sasuke wants. I think thats its scary (for me) because they wont be on the movce anymore, the will be in one place and will be somewhat more vulnerable for a attack. Now having said that I know that they can pretty much set themselves up in a fortress that could withstand any external attack because that was what the uchiha homebas was before but it wasnt taken down by an external force. Itachi took it down from within. THey ar e talking about hiring employees and no matter how hard you screes people sometimes nasty stuff slip through the cracks anyways. I Love all of these guys. Klenn owns a restaurant on tarrasides so it looks like Shika will get that talk soon.
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  • From satterb on March 31, 2011
    Love these "day in the life" chapters! Tee hee...Narutoisation (sp?) I like this term. Your Naruto is so sensitive and caring but also strong and fierce. Thanks for all your hard work. I look forward as always to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - lonelylulaby on March 30, 2011
    I am ashamed that I fell off the review band wagon *puts out hand to be smacked by ruler* Anywho I loved the last line about the Naruto-ization of Uchiha. I'm a miss him when he's gone. And I'm just like Sasuke, I cannot imagine the kit's and babies going off to another crew to cat, just unimaginable. Maybe I will be able to see it once the 700 crews that they have have been cut down and we get to know them. Maybe. Once again another excellent job and just great characters.

    ja ne till next time and keep up the good work
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  • From Prism0467 on March 30, 2011
    Sasuke wouldn't do something as underhanded as get Naruto to agree to something so important while he was post-coital! What on earth was Kakashi suggesting?;)
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  • From roro237 on March 30, 2011
    WoW! You covered a lot! I forgot about getting the head quarts up and running. With what happen to Shika and Hura. This chapter was just amazing! The kids and Kiba. The Triplets and To-chan and Papa. You toss in some Shik Neji Kakashi and a few other crew members wOw! I'm ~Bowing~ to you Oh Great Queen of the Naruto Space Universe. My favorite part was.... To-chan and Papa in the tub with the little ones:) Then Naruto watching Sasuke dress the girls I'm with Naruto that was so sweet. Maybe I had a small nose bleed during the quickie:)I loved this chapter Queenie ^_^
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  • From blugirlami21 on March 30, 2011
    This was a good chapter. I like that we are delving deeper into how Uchiha is going to sustain itself in the coming years. What everyone needs to work on, whether the children will cat for other crews, etc. I agree with Sasuke in not being sure how I feel about the babies one day catting for other crews. It's the spacer way but I don't like the thought of them having to service the crew in such a way. The subject of individuality has come up as well with the uniform question. I think as the kits get older they will have to be allowed some freedoms and if done right I think it would be possible for them to have the freedom of choosing their own clothes, maybe once a week they can wear whatever they want. With the hiring of employees, I am nervous that will give our enemies greater access to infiltrating Uchiha and we will once again have a scare like we did with Shika and Haru.

    Not a lot happened here but it definitely planted food for thought. Good job as always, I look forward to whatever happens next.
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  • From suzannecmc on March 30, 2011
    Sasuke flushed slightly at the oblique reference to their sex life. “That new Uchiha would try to be the best employer in known space. With proper contracts and rights and... ...stuff,” he trailed off, realising he had no idea what he had agreed to do.

    hahaha...that's a bit of buyer beware, or buyer remorse:) I can't decide which:D

    thank you.
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  • From bloodshound on March 30, 2011
    'Naruto-isation' *snerk
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  • From missbri88 on March 30, 2011
    That... Made me cry. I thank you for all the hard work you do to bring us this fiction.
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  • From ANON - Kat Saama on March 29, 2011
    Internets back so twas nice reading the last two chapters together! Poor Ran-chan I nearly cried at the end of chapter 70 the pooor thing. As usual brilliant work please keep it up!
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  • From suzannecmc on March 29, 2011
    Ran liked being close to Konohamaru. He felt nice, like Mommy.
    are you saying Ran remembers his Mom?

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  • From suzannecmc on March 29, 2011
    this has just the right ulcer level for everyone!
    your Kono, floundering for his place to fit in, trying to be helpful with Ran
    and causing stress for everyone. including himself.

    your Iruka, would never complain and accepts any help, but he must be shredded inside (and a touch jealous too) that Ran does not turn to him for comfort. and good for Kakashi being there for him!

    perhaps an event will happen where Iruka will become a hero in Ran's eyes. I do recall
    your Iruka being particularly adept with a knife when one of his was threatened...
    perhaps all it will take is a touch of Iruka's hand for the little empath to feel all that love.

    nice flow and progress, very nicely done:)
    thank you.

    PS - He had just finished demolishing one of Choza’s individual fruit pies when Konohamaru appeared with Ran. The child was filthy; Kakashi had not thought the Oak dirty until Ran’s frequent excursions.
    hahaha - this was a great moment by the way:)

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  • From ANON - smauigirl on March 29, 2011
    Another beutifully written chapter. :) Thank you.
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  • From ANON - V-anon on March 28, 2011
    thank you for updating :)
    Your development of Ran is very good in my opinion and I can kind of see Ranmaru.1 (or who I consider to be .1) in his thought process. But it is different enough.
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  • From ANON - Nemo-Hime on March 28, 2011
    O god, that last part at the end... 'Real children do this'... so beautifully painful...
    I adore it as always dear.
    ~Nemo-Hime
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