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By : mannahpierce
  • From Cognizant on April 03, 2011
    Chapter 72. Aw~ Kazuki was cute and Haru was extremely cute doing his best not to scare Ran away. :D Thanks for the update and I hope to read more!
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  • From ANON - richon on April 03, 2011
    ran integrate the family slowly, don't worry iruka you will be his mommy; love this story want to know how they will be in terrasade... see you soon
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  • From ANON - Kat Saama on April 02, 2011
    "Mommy Irkura" ... am I such a softie for reading this on mothers day and being even more moved by it? Oh well great work as usual please keep it up ^^
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  • From suzannecmc on April 02, 2011
    really nice to have Ran's perspective
    simplistic, age appropriate, heartbreaking and hopeful.

    the interaction with Haru was especially nice.
    someone his age and size to give a simple concise
    explanations for him.

    and won't it be magical when (if?) he holds out his hand to Iruka.

    thank you.


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  • From Prism0467 on April 02, 2011
    Gosh, reading this story makes me feel so good! Who could have imagined the shinobi of Naruto being loving, nurturing parents to such a variety of children! This story isn't just a masterpiece, it's a celebration!
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  • From satterb on April 02, 2011
    I really cried!!!!! This was sooo heartbreaking. I feel so bad for Iruka. I hope you don't string him along for too much longer. Iruka deserves sooo much. I love this story, and I appreciate all your hard work. Thank you for updating so often.
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  • From ANON - v on April 02, 2011
    I'm excited about the move to Tarrasade, I hope everything goes smoothly..I do have much sympathy for Iruka but I think Kakashi is doing very well in helping his relationship with Ran and supporting him. It shows how much he feels for his Ir-chan, because I do believe he's much to spoiled by Iruka :)lol. Lets hope Ran and Iruka relationship deepens because I believe they really do need each other, loved this chapter.
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  • From ANON - V-anon on April 02, 2011
    Kakashi to the rescue~ Thank you for the last two chapters. Ran is making progress :)
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  • From cynaga on April 02, 2011
    ♥ Maybe touching children would always be fine. Maybe children never felt horrid. [Ran's thoughts] ♥

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  • From roro237 on April 02, 2011
    Oh Queenie that was beautiful! Ir-chan of course will be even more than Ran can hope for:) You know what I want to get in the 'snug' with Naruto and the children. I bet it's the most comfortable sleep ever! Hoshi is adorable. I liked how she tried to include Ran in their play. Every great clan has to have an even stronger women behind the scenes and Hoshi will be that for the Uchihas. Kazuki was to cute in his inter actions with Ran. I loved it:) I did wonder what Haur has been up to that Kiba was keeping an eye on him?:) I was so wrapped up in the children I almost forgot about the media and the family moving to Tarrasade. I'm looking forward to that! The title was great:) This was another adventures day in the life's of my favorite people:) Thank you for all your hard work Oh Great Queen of the Naruto Space Universe ^_^
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  • From ANON - Aflyingmonkey123 on April 01, 2011
    Amazing as always! This is my favorite story that is currently being updated. I wonder where this story is gonna go next...
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  • From Cognizant on April 01, 2011
    Chapter 57-71, woot! finally time to read! and i love how Haru said "Sasori was interrogating me." and Ryuu's "We were stalking him." and of course Sasuke's "My children catting for a crew?" i can imagine his expression of "dang it i didn't think of tat" thank you very much for the great work and even though i wasn't able to review as often as i would like, know that you and your beta's work are greatly appreicated.

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  • From ANON - Kat Saama on March 31, 2011
    Haha love Kakashi's explaination at the the end "Naruto-isation of Uchiha" sorry if I spelled it wrong but that made me laugh :) As usual amazing work please keep it up!
    May I ask a question, have you ever considered wrighting a book? I think this would make an awesome book, just change the names in it because it is basicly completely different from the original Naruto series besides the placement of characters, i.e Kakashi being Sasukes sensei ect.
    Prehaps you can think on it ^^ love your work please continue it
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  • From ANON - Tati on March 31, 2011
    I love this new Ran. Your speech pattern for him really shows his development and personality. Iruka is really the best person to help him develop into a great trainee. I just hope Konohmaru finds his place and moves on. Great few installments. As always, I love it.
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  • From ANON - richon on March 31, 2011
    naru is so nice, he know sasu and he play well. i loved the card idear and what sasu wrote about himself. love this story !!!
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