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By : mannahpierce
  • From roro237 on April 09, 2011
    That was so wonderful:) I sure as heck didn't see that coming. I mean Kakashi going to Haur for help! Which was brilliant by the way:) I'm so happy to know that Haur is like Sasuke to because I was thinking like Kakashi he is Shika in a Sasuke package. The tittle so fit this chapter ^_^
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  • From satterb on April 09, 2011
    Again....sitting here crying like some kind of boob! lol I love this particular story line. I'm so glad Iruka was able to give Ran a cuddle, and I'm glad Kakashi agreed to become part of the family. Thanks for all that you do.
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  • From bloodshound on April 09, 2011
    *sniff.
    that was so, so sweet.
    *wonders off to brush my teeth before the sweetness gives me cavities.
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  • From Satoshichan on April 08, 2011
    Hi! I have read everything you have! Well, at least on this site. You have such great stories and I love your universe you have created. I look forward to reading more. i don't think that anything I will ever write will compare to the complex series you have created. I love the length of the chapters, the characters are well-written in my opinion and the story is always something new and never gets old. This chapter I love the way Naruto thinks during the interviews, he was taught well! Keep on keeping on!
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on April 08, 2011
    I've just read 29th chapter and I met my first disappointment with the story. It was refreshing and great that there was no Sakura. Well... I guess I will just have to deal with it.
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  • From ANON - SunaoTsuji on April 08, 2011
    haha loved how chapter 37? or was it 73? yea, 73, ended. i can tell that the possibilities are endless and i can't wait to read what happens! me guess at what may happen? a drop off cliff of an unexpected occurrence! thanks for the updates and hard work! looking forward to more updates!
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  • From ANON - richon on April 07, 2011
    what a busy day, naru did a great job with his little show. Love this story.craving for more
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  • From blugirlami21 on April 07, 2011
    Busy is right! I like that we got to see some of the goings ons in Naruto's world. And that the whole chapter was from Naruto's pov. I just love Haru chan's demanding "How does this work?" He is so Sasuke and Shika, it's hilarious. I wouldn't mind seeing him meet Klenneth, I think everyone should have the opportunity to be amazed by Haru. I hope we get some more time with the other children and the kits, I'm ashamed to say I still don't know half their names or who they are personally except for Haru, Kazuki, and maybe Ryuu.
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  • From ANON - Kat Saama on April 06, 2011
    Brilliant work as usual please keep it up ^^
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  • From roro237 on April 06, 2011
    OMG!!! YOU are totally Amazing!! Do you still have all those people in your house?:) You covered an incredible day in the life's of our To-chan and Papa. I loved every word ^_^
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  • From ANON - v on April 06, 2011
    I enjoyed this chapter very much, I'm also glad that your in charge of leading everyone where they need to go, I adore the characters and storyline so much that I could be happy just reading about their daily routine and I forget that they're trying to build something legendary. Also a new favorite excerpt of mine :

    “What do you want to do?” he asked the children.
    They were too surprised for his liking. Hikaru recovered first.
    “Play netbag?” he suggested.
    “Dancing with To-chan!” Yuki squeaked.

    I wanna dance with To-chan, too!!! lol..I can just imagine. Kinda liking Klenn more and more, and I'm glad reprint Ranmaru is safe and cared for. Can't wait for the next chapter :)

    “Dancing with To-chan! Dancing with To-chan!” the others called, even Hikaru.


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  • From Prism0467 on April 06, 2011
    That Klenn is dedicated, isn't he? What the hell did Shikamaru do to that guy?
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  • From ANON - lonelylulaby on April 06, 2011
    Hi, I'm back! another chappy for the record books, I look forward to knowing what type of typed genius Haru is. I can't wait for the next chapter. Great job, I don't want them to grow up. I'm trying to visualize the portrait of the Uchiha family and I just can't. I think i might have to draw it....no promises I am a procrastinator.

    ja ne till next time and keep up the good work
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  • From Dorkchic on April 06, 2011
    I am glad that Naruto is warming up to Klenn and that Sasuke is becoming more amenable to working with Klenn and vice versa. Also happy that they are considering let Haru meet him- it would be nice for him to meet someone who thinks in the same way that he does. That might help alleviate some of his isolation.
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  • From ANON - Nemo-Hime on April 04, 2011
    I LOVE how you are developing Ran. Can't wait for more!
    ~Nemo-Hime
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