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By : mannahpierce
  • From ANON - SunaoTsuji on April 15, 2011
    Chapter 75. ouch poor Sasuke. XD cute how Naruto wanted to put Mikoto's desk in Sasuke's office and how Sasuke thought to gift his mother's kimono to Haku.

    I'm seeing Haku's image with new kimono and all I see is Haku's image screaming "come hither and fuck me" XD

    thankies for the update and i hope to read more from u soon! greatly appreciated!
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  • From randrinawilson on April 14, 2011
    It was very brave of Sasuke to go through his mothers things knowing that he would have to eventually relive that memory. Even more from that will be that Itachi will know that Sasuke will be remembering what he did to him by his reaction when the returned even though Itachi himself doesnt remember it so it will be a tough couple of days for both of the brothers. I think that just like Sasuke was able to be brought out of his dark place by is beloved Naruto, Itachi will have his Haku and Kisame. The Same Kisame who hid Sasuke away from the Itachi. It was very Sweet of Sasuke to automaticly think of Haku when thinking of what to do with his (Mothers) kimonos. Haku will be unbelieveble moved by that gesture because they belonged to mikoto and he would see the meaning/love behind that and Itachi/Kisame would be grateful for the consideration for their princess!
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  • From Prism0467 on April 13, 2011
    Wow. Naruto is Sasuke's happy place.

    That's quite a place to be.
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  • From roro237 on April 13, 2011
    Oh Great Queen of the Naruto Space Universe that was so intense! I loved every word:) Sasuke experience was so very sad for a little boy to go thought. The last part was the best:) His love for Naruto ^_^
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  • From Dorkchic on April 13, 2011
    That was so sad and incredibly sweet at the same time. I can only imagine the guilt that Itachi carries around even if he cannot remember what happened. Especially now that Sasuke is having to go through all of this again. I imagine that his reactions to Haku wearing Mikoto's kimonos would also be draining.
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  • From suzannecmc on April 13, 2011
    the end gave me a big smile:)
    thank you.
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  • From ANON - SunaoTsuji on April 12, 2011
    Chatper 74. OOOOO Haru is wicked smart. i love how you're giving the kids their own spunk while leaving Naruto and Sasuke and the crew to leave a bit of influence to make them their own persona without throwing the story out the window. thanks for the update! greatly appreciate the quickness of it and hope to read more soon!
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  • From suzannecmc on April 12, 2011
    hahaha - forgot to mention, nice use of a Venn diagram!
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  • From suzannecmc on April 11, 2011
    this was great in so many ways, and so many insights to your
    characters:) a excellent informative chapter.

    and I believe your Kiba was channeling me with my kids;P

    sweet - you gave Ran and Iruka a happy beginning:)
    thank you.
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  • From ANON - Aflyingmonkey123 on April 10, 2011
    AWWWWWW! I freaking love this story!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Kat Saama on April 09, 2011
    Nawh bless! That was just amazing and so cute too! Thank you, wonderful work as usual please keep it up!
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  • From suzannecmc on April 09, 2011
    Klennethon Darrent - still have mixed feelings about him,
    but I think he is a great OC, and very much necessary.

    I would like to see Neji's POV.
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  • From ANON - richon on April 09, 2011
    haru is genius. They will be a real family now. love this story.craving for more
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  • From randrinawilson on April 09, 2011
    Ran is such a beautiful addition to the crew. That was a really amazing chapter. I am really also starting to see te ever growing dynamic of Haru and Kazuki.
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  • From cynaga on April 09, 2011
    [ch 74] Very lovely! ♥
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