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By : mannahpierce
  • From ANON - angelj232000 on April 20, 2011
    So cute. I loved the children. Sasuke & Naruto are so evil in this chapter.
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  • From cynaga on April 20, 2011
    Now I feel bad... That wasn't a criticism of ch.77 - just feedback. I am always left wanting more with your work because it is so rich and deep. There is always more to wonder about. That is part of the fun of your universe. ♥
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  • From cynaga on April 20, 2011
    [ch.77] Delightful~! One tiny thought: I expected more from the conversation between Klenn and Haru. It was kind of anti-climatic. I guess I expected some kind of insight into their shared genius type.
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  • From ANON - richon on April 18, 2011
    konohamaru has got a promotion !!! it will be hard but the start is full of promise. naru will change terassade. love this story . see you sooni
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  • From Satoshichan on April 18, 2011
    Another great chapter. I love to read about discovery, about someone discoveruing something new about the world. I also love when people who are doing wrong are put in their place, guess I have this thing about positions of power and using that power. It was nice to read about other characters, too.
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  • From ANON - lonelylulaby on April 17, 2011
    HI!!!! Life just took a hold on me and wouldn't let go. Anywho LOVED LOVED LOVED this chapter. I just want you to know that you are a very deep writer. I feel like I'm watchin a tv series every time I read a chapter. I especially liked the different points of view in this chapter. I think once school lets out ima read the story from start to finish over the summer cause the characters have just evolved and I want to go through the process again with them.

    ja ne till next time and keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - xxShadowheartxx on April 17, 2011
    Gomen, gomen, I haven't reviewed in awhile, I've just been so busy. But I've finally caught up, and I still love your work. This story got so many great twists and turns, I don't think I'll ever get tired of reading it. :D

    I love how you sorta brought Ranmaru back in Ran. He's so cute sometimes.
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  • From ANON - v on April 16, 2011
    I'm really enjoying these chapters..I'm catching up with the characters with out the highs and lows of disaster and danger and WTF!! climaxes..although I really enjoy those too :) I love that were getting to learn more about them as they deal with certain emotional and social challenges with their plan for the future still firmly in mind. It is still very exciting but also gives me a chance to build the story in my head as I read..I'm also happy about Konomaru's new job title, I hope he's able to find his purpose :)..I've also found that I adore the tidbits about Yuki, I of course love all the children equally, but I'm able to picture Yuki easier than the others..may be because he seems like a combination of Haku and Naruto..lol :)
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  • From blugirlami21 on April 16, 2011
    It was really interesting to see more of the inner working of the refit of Uchiha into Tarrasade as well as Maru moving on with his life. We are also getting to know Kamatari more and I think I saw some interest into Konohamaru there that I would not be adverse to. It would be nice to see Konohamaru have someone new in his life.
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  • From roro237 on April 16, 2011
    I loved it! You had a lot of people in your computer room again:) You zoom me into their space station and I totally enjoyed ^_^
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  • From Prism0467 on April 16, 2011
    Wow. Lots of stuff going on in this chapter.

    When Kamatari asked Kono-kun about Naruto helping the purebreds as well as the hybrids, my ears perked. It hadn't occurred to me that Naruto was, consciously or otherwise, facilitating bias by his actions. I don't feel that he is, it only surprised me that someone might have interpreted his efforts that way. But that's the way of the world isn't it? If you're for something you invariably have to be against something else.

    And life goes on...
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  • From satterb on April 16, 2011
    Kono-kun is going to have to learn to bust some chops! lol Another great update. I like how the narrative from any one persons point of view gives the reader the necessary information, but makes it interesting to see the characters feelings and opinions. You're the best! Keep up the great work.
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  • From bloodshound on April 16, 2011
    awwwww, Kono kun is healing. Thats great. I hope he finds another someone special in the future.
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  • From bloodshound on April 15, 2011
    that was tough. facing your ghosts is never easy. Sas is lucky he has such good back up. Go Naru.
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  • From ANON - Kat Saama on April 15, 2011
    Brilliant keep it up ^^
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