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  • From roro237 on April 23, 2011
    Fan-tas-tic!!! I loved it! My our boys have grown into some fine young men:) Neji was on it! Yea Baby! Sasuke to for knowing how important this was to Shika. And not taking crap from the music teacher .He gets a Yea Baby to! Konan-san is with child! I'm kind of surprise but not:) After Haru I knew she had enjoyed being around him. Looks like another exciting adventure a head! You get a 'Yea Baby' to! ^_^
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  • From Prism0467 on April 23, 2011
    Alright! Kakashi throws a tantrum, gets a thorough talking-to from Neji, and then makes coffee for Shikamaru.

    And Konan is having Pein's baby!

    Great chapter!
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  • From suzannecmc on April 20, 2011
    oh now you have to go and gather feelings of sympathy for KD!
    like I said a very interesting and necessary OC, and Garner Parrod is being expanded a bit, that will be nice to find out about.

    very fun chapter and wonderful to see your character development.
    it's great to see that you Naruto is very different and original, but still parallels the
    manga's Naruto in empathy:)
    thank you.
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  • From suzannecmc on April 20, 2011
    hahahaha = the updates fly from your fingers faster than I can review:)
    just wanted to let you know that delving into your Uchia past is always interesting,
    and happy that your Konohmaru is finding his way.
    thank you.

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  • From Gingitsune32 on April 20, 2011
    & I love this chapter so much that I read it 3x today already!!!!! :D
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  • From Gingitsune32 on April 20, 2011
    Love love love this chapter! Klenn is a character that is growing on me. & this is a wonderful chapter. I love how you showed the human side of Klenn & how he is not always the all powerful man that he is. Wonderful writing as usual. You are really talented. & yes I would buy your books! :D
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  • From blugirlami21 on April 20, 2011
    That was way better than I thought it was going to be. It was so nice to see Klenneth in a new, warmer light. I love that we got to more time with Haru and Sasuke. As well as more time with the children and they were each singled out and given something unique to them which is really good for me because I have a hard time telling them apart. I think we got to see different sides to characters we may have thought we knew already and Klenneth and Garner's love story sounds very interesting to me. I hope we can get a little more info on that, maybe not a whole story but maybe a side chapter like with Rin and Dan. I think I will read the chapter again, I liked it so much. Great job.
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  • From ANON - lonelylulaby on April 20, 2011
    *cocks head to the side* why is Klenn toxic? is it because he loves the ppl around him too much or he smothers them and they begin to wither? I really liked this chapter because it gave us a little more insight into the inner workings of a very old dog's mind. I rather enjoyed it. Also I totally understand where Parrad (sp?) is coming from w/ Sasuke and his playing. Ummm, I was wondering if it's not too much trouble could there be some scenes with Hamaki, Terai, and Fuu. They don't have to be a chapter long I just want to know how they are doing. Well that's all i gots for today

    ja ne till next time and keep up the awesomesauce work
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  • From Prism0467 on April 20, 2011
    Okay. Klenn Darrent is officially forgiven for trying to take Shikamaru away from Uchiha.
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  • From roro237 on April 20, 2011
    Oh Queenie the opening with Papa time was so wonderful I think I smiled the hole way thought:) Of course the prank was a true Naruto personality trait:) But the surprise was on me Darrent-san enjoyed it all! I would have though he would be trying to get away as soon as possible. It was sweet how he enjoyed his self. When Tsuneo didn't cry I knew Darrent-san was being sincer:) I think all the children liked him?! Great Queen of the Naruto Space Universe I'm ~Bowing~ to you. That was fantastic! The title was spot on. Thank you for all your hard work ^_^
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  • From Dorkchic on April 20, 2011
    Awww. I hope that Klenn finds some peace and allows someone in. Even if it is only one person (maybe Garner) then maybe he can get closer to whole. Maybe seeing Haru with his family and how it could be will help him to heal. I would love it if they had more regular interaction with Klenn- letting it slip out that they are allies of a sort would probably do a lot to help quell Sasuke's security (fully justified) paranoia since everyone is terrified of getting on Klenn's bad side. They could visit him on his home planet for a vacation of sorts and be assured of safety there. Regardless, I think it would be good for people on both sides.

    What I am curious about is Naruto's origin. He is a Bara hybrid, but Bara died ages ago- meaning that Naru was in stasis until recently. Did someone take him out of stasis? If so then it must have been for a purpose and not to let him grow up as a feral child. There has got to be a story there and my overactive imagination will not stop bugging me with possible scenarios. Maybe Klenn could help them find out or could find out for them and tell them as a gift for allowing him to feel a sense of family.
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  • From ANON - richon on April 20, 2011
    awesome naru and sasu take their revenge to darren. I love it I imagine the face of darent it's so funny. love this story!!! see you soon
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  • From ANON - Tati on April 20, 2011
    Funny and sweet. I laughed so hard during the planning of the prank and during the description of Klenn's reaction.
    I must admit that I'm liking Klenn more and more.
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  • From bloodshound on April 20, 2011
    awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww. that was adorable. I like their pranking policy.
    That day probably meant a lot to Kell as well.
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  • From ANON - v on April 20, 2011
    OMG!! Ahahahahaha..hahahaha..I loved this chapter!! How wonderful that they pranked Klenn using the children!! He completely deserved it :) I loved how it was very much a Sasuke and Naruto prank :) I can just see the utter chaos on stage with the children and then Ryu...hahaha. Leave it Naruto though to turn a teasing prank into a lovely gift though, after all he did help to save Haru and Shika :)*Clapping* great job!!
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