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  • From ANON - v on April 30, 2011
    Oh! A surprising chapter, a new character..someone who could help naruto and HDL. If he's brave that is. Udon..I like that name. :)
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  • From ANON - richon on April 30, 2011
    sakura herited of a baby, I love udon like he is described in this story.What udon yo udon't know naru and sasu, you must leanr quickly!!! what will do sakura ?? see you soon with more
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  • From roro237 on April 30, 2011
    OMG!! WoW! That was scary sad intense wOw! I LOVED it:) The tittle said it all! Even though it said it all I didn't think it meet people. You are brilliant of course because that has to be done. Especially on a space station. This is why you are the Great Queen of the Naruto Space Universe. You now I believe have covered all aspects of life on a Space Station. Thank you for all your hard work ~Bowing~ ^_^
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  • From ANON - v on April 29, 2011
    I've started to see more confidence in Neji's character..his role is becoming more of his own rather than a side view of Shikamaru's. I am wondering how it will affect his relationships in the future although it has seemed to improve his and Kakashi's :) To tell you the truth, this turn of events have really thrown me for a loop, but I am looking forward to the four "enemies" reaction to Naruto, Sasuke , and the rest of the spacers. Also I'm glad we got to see more of the depth of Naruto's role in HDL, but i'm surprised how calm he was when discussing sasuke's options, but maybe i'm guilty of not realizing how much he's grown also. So I'm excited about the choices and possible scenarios coming up, and obviously O is not just a sicko perv that I thought he was...so that is worrisome. Although........ since I am continuously worried about Naruto and the kits life span....someone trying to live forever...could be of some use. lol :)
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  • From ANON - richon on April 28, 2011
    i love the way naru thing. it's easier to cut the questioningLove this story, see you soon
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  • From blugirlami21 on April 28, 2011
    You know I never thought I would say that I missed Zetsu but in this story I did. He's so cute and eager to please. I hope that he and Hana can be incorporated in the Uchiha because I think they are great characters and would be good additions to the family we already have. I hope that we also get to see and Hana's interaction with Naruto, Kiba, and Gaara. I really like her and hopefully she can be persuaded to leave Konan and stay on.
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  • From ANON - lonelylulaby on April 27, 2011
    Naruto just cracks me up, "That's what quick quickies are about" LOL. Anywho, Naruto makes everything so much simpler. I like their ideas for the Zetsu's, Konan, Hana and the baby. I wonder what Hana's reaction is going to be when she finally does meet Naruto. I don't know how she would handle being on her own, she's only ever been a servant, right? Well another awe inspiring chapter down, hopefully many more to come

    ja ne till next time and keep up the good work
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  • From bloodshound on April 27, 2011
    I do love the way Naru's mind works...

    quick quickies indeed.

    I hope In and En can be found somehting worthy of them to work on... perhaps eventually as Shika's off siders or something. Otherwise it's just a waste of a good pair of minds.
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  • From Prism0467 on April 27, 2011
    Naruto is a god.

    Sasuke's god.
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  • From roro237 on April 27, 2011
    I don't think you have wrote a chapter where I haven't fallen more in love with Naruto:) Forgive me for getting off point but... Naruto setting reading the Triplets playing in the office. I just feel that,that is how he would be to! I do love Sasuke. He had all the responsible of the clan. That's not an easy job. You know the old saying 'Behind every great man is a woman':) Don't tell Naruto I said that! He's all man where it counts:) I don't know where they could keep In-san and En-san? Somewhere that Shika can visit often hopefully. I liked the idea of Kon-san and Hana being put on a safe planet somewhere. Queenie thank you for all your hard work. PS the tittle is perfect ^_^
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on April 27, 2011
    They are all still so trusting... I know that Konan wasn't bad but Sasuke and Naruto can't be so sure. They are amazing... to just let her go... Are they going to hide her from Orochimaru or maybe use her to bait him?
    When it turned out that Oro is not actually dead I wasn't happy but now I think it would be nice to see him die again (maybe more painfully this time...)
    The theory behind Oro's longevity is ingenious! Fit's perfectly with the story.
    And I'm glad that Zetsus are back. I hope they'll stick around.

    And one more thing: thank you for your email from FF.net but you already have me on your alert list, for what I am really grateful! (it's: amatsuki@o2.pl) I'm looking forward to Saturday's update!
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  • From satterb on April 27, 2011
    Sasuke thinks too hard. LOL I love that Naruto can be so detached when he needs to be. I like that he's multifaceted. Just being volatile and passionate isn't really feasible. Great partnerships rely on both partners to complement each other. Sasuke and Naruto definetly do that in this story. They're not just both one dimensional. Thanks for all your hard work on this story. I love it.
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on April 27, 2011
    So Kakashi did not say magic words but I guess what he had said was enough.
    And now I have to wait for another chapter. Or maybe I'll just go back to the beginning of 'In the Cold of Space...'
    Naruto and Sasuke were so cute back then... I still hope you'll write another story from the Silver Leaf one day...
    Thank you for this amazing story.
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on April 27, 2011
    Ok, Garner Parrad is the best! Who would expect him to so cool?! I laughed so hard at the 'pastry-part'...
    Thank you! This was fun!
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on April 27, 2011
    I actually cried on this one! i love Iruka and his insecurities are killing me. When few chapters back he said that he is afraid that Kakashi will replace him with someone else it was... really sad. If I were Asuma I would hug Iruka instead of laughing at him!!! And I started to wonder what would Kakashi have to do to make him feel... equal... and I think he would have to let Iruka fuck him. Or maybe it wouldn't change anything because Iruka just IS that good natured and wonderful and all... (I hope my English sentences are understandable...sometimes I don't know...) ...and maybe he wouldn't even want to...! But I still wonder, is there a cure for this 'attitude' of his....?
    -melissen
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