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By : mannahpierce
  • From roro237 on May 07, 2011
    I'm happy Udon did get some kind words from his Uncle:) I was piss with the way that man talked to Sasuke but I do understand. He was still an ass about it. But actions speak louder than words and Sasuke handled that beautifully. So there is no miss staking he's not like his father. That was a wonderful story within the story or just another day in the life's of Naruto and Sasuke ^_^
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  • From ANON - Tati on May 07, 2011
    I was wondering where Udon was in this story. The idea of scavengers is so disturbing but effective in showing the darker side of space stations. I am always amazed at the way you develop this story. This just doesn't stop getting better.


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  • From randrinawilson on May 07, 2011
    I hope Udon actually takes his chance soon and goes to see "Angela". He has had a chance to see what it is like on the other levels now and now that he is back home and has it uncles words in his mind, maybe he will think about where he wants his future to go. Now that Uchiha has found out who the baby belongs to they may have found a solution to their orphanage. it was a beautiful idea to set it in memory of the babys mother with a butterfly being the theme. also to have naruto and sasuke on the charity circuit would prove entertaning as well as drama filed. and finally, it is just eating at me that Uchiha is just making such a grand damn gesture for these baby nappers! okay realisticly it was just Konan and Zetsu because Hana was just a servant. But Uchiha is suppoused to be this force to be reckonned with and feared and here are the people that kidnapped their children and threatned their lives and they are "readying rooms and making preparations so that they will be comfortable" Naruto once asked Sasuke what does Uchiha do? evidently nothing. They owe nothing to these people but here they are about to take them in and eventually give them money to relocate. real scary uchiha. what can I say...IM LOVIN IT!!!!! every single time!! even if I want them to make an example out of Konan and Zetsu by just doing SOMETHING besides saying "" welcome to hotel uchiha we hope you enjoy your stay" I absolutely adore this story
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  • From bloodshound on May 07, 2011
    Awwww. I hoope things get better for Udon... and are we ever going to have Ino show?
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  • From missbri88 on May 06, 2011
    OMG! I've missed you! I've been away because of a new job I started and all I could think about for my down time was that I needed to hget back to my favorite fan fiction. Lol. Its been ten chapters and reading them all back to back today was like heaven. I'm so happy to be back. I'll be awaiting the next chapter with open arms. Thanks for sharing your hard work.
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  • From ANON - Kat Saama on May 05, 2011
    Sorry haven't reviewed the past while but wow alot has happened while I was away!
    Chapter 77 was soo funny with Klenn and whatnot could not stop laughing throughout the whole chapter!
    Chapter 78 it was nice to get a more indepth perseption of the Zetsus and Kakashi getting in his little revenge at the end made me smile!
    Chapter 79 again seeing more into the Zetsus was cool and just showing us again how amazing Naruto is I enjoyed!
    Chapter 80 new characters yay! Nawh Udon is such a dote! When he saved the baby ... just I like where this is going!
    And finally Chapter 81 The baby is now with Uchiha hmm sorta didn't expect that! And seeing Moegi come out of herself is nice!

    Love the way your developing the characters please keep up the good work!
    (sorry about my bad spelling and that my reveiws aren't very helpful but I truely do enjoy your stories!)
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  • From Prism0467 on May 04, 2011
    Wow. Another baby for the Uchiha brood.
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  • From roro237 on May 04, 2011
    Wonderful! Of course Naruto would naturally see the joy with the situation:) That why I love that man!! Thank goodness Udon will be away from that aunt and uncle. With family like that I done think it could get any worst. Oh that right he was heading up:)! Another great one Queeny ^_^
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  • From ANON - richon on May 04, 2011
    what will they do to udon, who are this men ?? wha happen to the baby. what more!! see you soon
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  • From bloodshound on May 04, 2011
    'no good deed...' huh Udon? But I think it will come out well for him.
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on May 04, 2011
    OMG another baby! I can't believe they just took it in. I thought that they would hand it over to some facility or that Saskura would keep it. Sasuke said once, when Naruto brought Ryuu that they won't do it again. Will he just take the baby to join the new litter? Well, we'll see. I guess it's just their New Uchiha style... I must say that for a gay boy Sasuke does a great job in rebuilding the clan!

    I loved Sasuke's quick reaction for Saskura's visit. He run away! I laughed my ass off when Shika blackmailed him with that tape few chapters ago... Sasuke's so cute!

    Thank you for the update and for answering my question. It was kind of important.
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on May 01, 2011
    wow this was... interesting but a bit creepy - the scene with the pregnant woman.
    It seems that another step toward the changes will be a difficult one. (Not that it was easy so far.)
    Is Udon a human or a hybrid?
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  • From blugirlami21 on May 01, 2011
    Where does your imagination end? I am constantly amazed by what you can come up with story wise, world wise, character backstory, all of it. I would even go as far to say that this world is on par with the magical world of Harry Potter or the ninja world of Naruto. It's that good. I mean you have your own words, foods, traditions, jobs, time. About the chapter. The way death was portrayed here didn't really disturb me and I find Udon to be a very interesting character and choice. He seems very reluctant to expand his horizons and he seems like a character that we should get to know, so I hope that Sakura can convince him otherwise.
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  • From ANON - lonelylulaby on April 30, 2011
    UDON!!!!!! I knew there was someone missing. I liked this chapter. I think it's because there was a new person introduced.

    ja ne till next time and keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - Aki-san on April 30, 2011
    I was wondering when Udon was going to come in. Moegi and Konohamaru were already part of the Uchiha crew, so I figured it would only be a matter of time before Udon came in. Unfortunately, he still isn't crew, but he does have that coin with Naruto and Sasuke's faces on the sides so maybe there's hope yet. Plus, he's made (brief) contact with Sakura or "Angela". I wonder who the baby is. I have to give Udon props for saving it despite the slummy atmosphere they were living in. The life of a Scavenger sounded to me like being trapped in Hell. Having to watch people suffer and die. It was awful just reading about it; I can't imagine living that. I don't know why Udon would want to continue staying there, especially since his aunt and uncle don't really seem to care that much about him. Anyway, I didn't mean for this to be so long. Great job, and I look forward to the next chapter, Mannah.
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