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Reviews for Iteration

By : mannahpierce
  • From ANON - richon on May 11, 2011
    poor haru, he must be so cross, hopefuly naru will make it better. hikaru will have a big speech. love this story see you soon
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on May 11, 2011
    OMG when Naruto will get his hands on Hikaru there will be one purebred Uchiha less.... No, just kidding, but Hi-chan is so bratty. It scary to think what kind of person he would be in the future. Especially if he is to be (maybe he isn't but just IF) the next head of the Uchiha. He acts like the only child, which is amazing considering how big was their litter.... ^_^
    Thank you for putting some Naruto moments in the chapter! I missed him.
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  • From bloodshound on May 11, 2011
    oh dear... how are they going to manage this piccadilo. Really, that kid needs to think before he opens his mouth.
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  • From suzannecmc on May 10, 2011
    beautiful, sympathetic character, Udon and we look forward to his rise with Uchia:)
    thank you.
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  • From suzannecmc on May 10, 2011
    very cloak and dagger - cool!

    there seems to be a real mystery behind the pregnant girl.
    the story line is getting thick again:)

    you put so much thought in a short amount of time to really
    make your worlds and characters, not only your own, but well rounded
    and fleshed out. terrific stand alone characters. kudos.

    thank you.
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  • From suzannecmc on May 10, 2011
    see you don't go on the computer for a weejk or so and there's chapters everywhere!
    it's nice though reading them in one go:)

    your character Udon is a natural born medic/researcher, great character.
    and I'm really happy your getting into the plot and fleshing out your worlds again.
    always interesting twist.

    thank you.
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on May 08, 2011
    Poor Udon... Well, I guess I'm glad that the child has a family after all and is actually wanted... Good for him!
    And now saving lower levels of Terrasade depends on Shika. He is so amazing in this story. I always felt connection with him because of his 'mendokusena' attitude, but here he is just brilliant.
    I wonder if Uchiha will recruit another genius - Zetsu... ? We'll see.


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  • From satterb on May 08, 2011
    Awwww! Poor Udon. I was hoping for better for him. Ya know, a real Cinderella story. As always, this is still great, and if you're writing, then it's part of the story. LOL Thanks for all your hard work. I really look forward to your updates.
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  • From missbri88 on May 08, 2011
    Aww Udon! I cried for him! His life is so not fair. He shouldn't have gone back. :(


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  • From Dorkchic on May 08, 2011
    I feel so bad for Udon. Am I a bad person for wishing something nasty and possibly humiliating happens to his aunt?
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  • From ANON - lonelylulaby on May 07, 2011
    Holy Crap!! this a is a revelation, totally did not see that coming. I wonder who Udon is related to then. OMG he could come from a rich family. GAH! have I told you recently that you are great? Totally freakin awesome. Anywho my answer to the question of who those men where was answered. This story is totally taking over my life.

    ja ne till next time and keep up the good work
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  • From Cognizant on May 07, 2011
    Chapter 80-82. Wooo~ Now that has a nice and different pace for the story. It felt like a "laying in the works" kinda part and I'm throbbing in excitement to see how else Udon will play into Iteration. Thanks for the update and I hope to read more soon.
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  • From Prism0467 on May 07, 2011
    Udon seems a lot like Naruto was in the beginning.
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  • From ANON - v on May 07, 2011
    I didn't review the last chapter because I really wanted to wait until this one, I was just as non-plussed as Udon...and a little scared for him. Weird, since he's a new character but I like him :) Its different getting used to everyone being in Tarrasade..but I definitely curious on how them making a home is going to go, especially since Sasuke's memories of his home might not coincide with the reality of it. Naruto seems to be much more level headed about it all, which is a little unexpected but then I'm getting used to their growth as people also. I am curious about how Haku's little family is doing since we haven't seen much from them and how child rearing is going for Itachi, I was worried with mai to raise but when they added sho, a boy, and he was so against having a boy when they were gestating mai, well...just wondering :) Love the story, favorite author, waiting always for more :)
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  • From ANON - richon on May 07, 2011
    don't cry udon, you will be bzck in level 4 quickly. Your oncle is not so bad after all. Naru and kiba have a very good idear. love this story so much , i start to read the beginning again. see you soon
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