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By : mannahpierce
  • From Dorkchic on May 15, 2011
    The amount of control that must have been required not to yell at him for calling Haru a traitor must have been staggering. Sounds like someone needs to learn a valuable lesson about not always being right or not always winning. That being you usually learn more from your failures than your successes.
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  • From ANON - richon on May 14, 2011
    love shika's solution for naru... what happen to hikaru ?? poor children they will have to behaved and charmed the old laddies. see you soon with more ...
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  • From roro237 on May 14, 2011
    Oh Great Queen of the Naruto Space Universe that was such a 'Yea Baby' chapter on so many levels:) I couldn't wait to fine out what they were going to do to Hi-chan. That was a good call for his punishment. Baby boy loves swimming in the tub that is so cute:) Ok now for the 'thingy' yea baby! WoW I love it:) The Uchiha crest on it was great yea baby:) The best part was that they both thought it was fine but it would never replace the wild or soft side of Naruto yea baby! I love those boys so much!! Marvelous chapter I loved it ^_^
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on May 14, 2011
    i love chapters like this one. I know that it would be boring if it was too often like that but I really enjoyed this. this was great!
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  • From bloodshound on May 14, 2011
    snerk... Thingie... bwhahahaha. And in Uchiah blue with fan no less. *dissolves into giggles. Where do you come up with this stuff?
    The time out room is a very good idea and the kids as distraction, equally good.
    "we are Uchiah," *huggles Haru. What a great kid.
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  • From ANON - SunaoTsuji on May 13, 2011
    Chapter 83. Ouch. This is going to be as hard on Haru as it will be on Hikaru once Naruto and Sasuke talk to them. Still, I'm curious as to how the conversation will go and how it will be approached.
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  • From meowkuu2 on May 12, 2011
    ooooooooommmmmmmmgggggggggggg wow its been ages since I last wrote I review (I've had a bit to catch up on since the burdern of school) OMG!!! TOO EPIC!!

    but since it would take too long to review alll the chapters I've read let's just stick with this one

    GO KIBA!! YEAH!!.. Though I still don't trust Konan...
    hmm Hikaru= bad egg.. I see trouble in the future and forget a pissed Naruto, its a pissed Sasuke I'm worried about, though I think its time for some tuff loving and whip out the his father's stern side cause seriously, Hikaru just feels like he's gonna cause more trouble than Haru going into the data streams

    damn I love this fic!
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  • From Satoshichan on May 12, 2011
    Ah, you update too often for me to review. That's not a bad thing! I love each and every chapter you write. I wish I had enough time to review all of them is all. Once again the story is going strong, and I wish it would last forever. It is a wonderfully complex universe you have written and there is always something new to discover. I might have said this before but I don't mind repeating it. And I hope you don't mind hearing it again!
    I love when characters in a story discover new things, and it's not very often that I read something like it. Just one of my quirks, I guess. So it's a nice surprise when I am reading a story and find it there. I have encountered it several times with your stories and can imagine myself right there beside them. I have a curious nature, or so it seems.
    One thing about writing with the characters with Naruto is that there are many characters to draw from and many new situations to encounter. I'll never know when you are about to introduce a new character or who it may be. But that is the joy of discovery. I hope you continue writing in good spirit!
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  • From ANON - angelj232000 on May 12, 2011
    Oh my god!!! What are Naruto & Sasuke going to do about Hikaru and Haru. Those two always had their ups & downs but this is very bad. I can't wait to see what will happen. I want more Iruka & Ran, they do seem to be doing better.
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  • From ANON - lonelylulaby on May 11, 2011
    is it wrong that i had a little chuckle cause Tsuneo didnt get that spoonful? Anywho, all i can say about this chapter is WOW there was so much going on that i just dont know where to start. When Yuki said Hikaru called Haru a cat i was like O_o y would he get angry because of that? Then it was explained. I thought Hikaru had gotten better about the teasing. I dont even know how Sasuke and Naruto are going to deal with this latest one. ONCE AGAIN I MUST SAY U ARE THE GREATEST!!

    ja ne till next time and keep the awesomeness coming
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  • From ANON - v on May 11, 2011
    I like getting to know Kiba more and more..he's such a big part of the everyone's life, and I did forget the importance of "Guardian". So I enjoyed seeing his natural compassion and willingness to take care of people, even though I don't think he recognizes it as such.lol
    I like the snippets of him and Choza too. Choza seems to know him very well so thats a plus :) As for Hi-chan and Ha-chan's fight...I'm a little worried about Hi-chan's personality, to say something like that to his recently kidnapped and returned brother seems particularly vicious, I know that he is still a child and we say the worst things to the people we love. I hope Sasuke and Naruto are able to sort it all out, but in the end I guess each child has to develop their own personality and have their own faults, dammit...they can't all be adorable. :) Still not sure if I care for Konan, thinking she should be happy she's even alive...
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  • From Prism0467 on May 11, 2011
    Kids can be cruel little shits, can't they?
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  • From roro237 on May 11, 2011
    WoW!!! It was very nice being with Kiba for morning:) But OMG what in the world is up with the future leader of the Uchiha?!:) I'm looking forward to fining out what his reason for saying that to his brother. This is why you are the Great Queen of Naruto Space Universe! You have all those people to figure out:) And by the way you do a damm good job:) I know I haven't said it lately but I love your story ^_^
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  • From satterb on May 11, 2011
    Poor Hi-chan! LOL Kids will be kids. I remember saying alot of things I really didn't understand. Oh well....I can't wait to see how Naruto and Sasuke handle this one. I love this story, Thank you for all your talent!
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  • From blugirlami21 on May 11, 2011
    I was surprised we didn't continue with Udon but I am happy to see the outcome of the Hana and Konan decision. It was also nice to see things from Kiba's pov. His relationship with Chouza is still sweet, even though I always think of him as Chouji. Has Chouji been introduced? I guess not but it would be interesting, maybe he could be Chouza's bastard child or something. This new development with Hi chan and Ha chan is worrying. I know that they aren't the best of friends but it makes me worry that Hikaru would both think something like that about his brother and then actually say it as well. I can't wait to see how it is resolved.
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