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By : mannahpierce
  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on May 24, 2011
    wow! Team Ebisu together! that was great! even if just for a moment...
    I love those moments when someone meets Naruto and Sasuke for the first time. It's always so amazing almost making my eyes water for gods know why....
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  • From ANON - V-anon on May 23, 2011
    before I forget to do this...Thank you for addressing that in your A/N. I'd never heard the speeded up thing and usually if I hear it and think it might be a regional difference I look it up (towards, colour,etc...the editor for reviews is American it seems) I promise I actually started to address that because I noted two issues while I was reading through but that was the one I saw last and I couldn't remember and couldn't refind the second one. I just went along my merry way thinking I misread or missed it or that you were just a ninja editor. The later is slightly less likely considering the hassle people to seem to have uploading edits. I've never dealt with it but I have heard rumors of it's evil. All that being said, each chapter I appreciate more and more your style of writing and character development and thank you for regularly updating, which could be considered insane with how large your story is. I appreciate that. Also, the first time I reviewed was after reading the entire first installment and then everything previously posted for this, so for me to appreciate each chapter your writing style seems unique and kind of awesome to me :)
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  • From ANON - richon on May 23, 2011
    naru and sasu know how to handle popularity. udon love it !!! want more !! see you soon
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  • From roro237 on May 21, 2011
    I was there walking around! I could understand why Udon was feel exposed in all that openness. And wOw Sasuke-sama servicing tea?! I thought that was fantastic! He's not his father he's a fair and good man not to forget handsome:) I loved that part! And the part where Naruto just walked in yea baby! Sunshine on legs!:) Thank you for my get away from earth to Tarrasade:) Hey the title was so perfect. Great Queen of the Naruto Space Universe I loved it ^_^
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  • From missbri88 on May 21, 2011
    Chapter 86... Wow. I love Udon. He's trying so hard with his new life. Its so sweet, and I'm proud of him. I laughed so hard at the office visit. I bet Konohamaru disappeared to arrange for Sasuke and Naruto to visit...
    I love this story so much and I thank you for working so hard to share it with us all.
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  • From bloodshound on May 21, 2011
    heh, poor udon. Adaptable as he is how could you not feel overwhelmed by all that. Ah well, at least they gave him floaties before dumping him in at the deep enD. ^^
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  • From Cognizant on May 20, 2011
    chapter 84-85. haha naruto claiming sasuke. i see me a one shot. XD although chapter 85 was short, it still left me wanting more. :D i'm expecting more updates! greatly appreciate you and ur beta's hard work. thanks a bunch and keep up the great writing!
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  • From ANON - smauigirl on May 20, 2011
    Ooooo I do love this story :) Your Udon charcter is great. A very nice addition to the story.
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  • From satterb on May 19, 2011
    Awwww! It was so lovely! I really like the way this is going. Thanks for updating. I look forward to more, as always.
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  • From ANON - V-anon on May 19, 2011
    You always seem to come up with very interesting solutions and I always wonder how much you have planned out in advance. The entire thing is almost as massive as it's space setting. But I also can't help but wonder what the Uchiha run universe will look like a century or two after they're all dead. Many of your plans are constructed to avoid corruption, and would likely work as long as a decent soul was around to enforce it, but there are likely thousands of way for the whole structure to collapse later on...but I'm probably being to realistically oriented since this is fiction :) I just always have to wonder what a little event today will impact in the future and your story is no exception :D. I very much like that Naruto is such a driving force through will-power because that really captures him in the canon, so I wanted to pat you on the back for that. I generally love the way you handle all your characters, especially for some reason, Zetsu. I hate for the first comment I leave in forever to point out flaws but I think speeded up should be sped up unless you were in third person deep POV or something like that.
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  • From bloodshound on May 18, 2011
    They're reaklly going to make it happen. There will probably be problems, but change is a coming. No more dying alone, abandoned children. At least, not there.
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  • From roro237 on May 18, 2011
    ~Bowing~ Thank you for all your hard work:) I don't know of anyone else posting twice a week less long for how long you have been doing it! You're the Queen of Naruto Space Universe hands down:) The tittle was dead on but I didn't guess right this time. I'm so happy for Udon. You know I love Naruto more all the time and his honesty with the ladies was sO Naruto like. How can you ever say no to that man?! I loved every word of this chapter ^_^
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  • From ANON - richon on May 18, 2011
    yes shik you had a wonderfull idear, but you are not the voice in the ear for nothing !!! udon start a new aventure, love the concept.
    loce this story!! see you soon
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on May 18, 2011
    Children-free chapter. Good. One of the greatest thing about this story is that one chapter can be about the every day life and in the next we're on the verge of war or something. And then just when we start to miss the kids or one of the characters they appear with something new and interesting. Everything happens in a way that can never be boring. A new character once in a while, good times and bad times. It's all so skillfully 'designed'...
    I can imagine that updating this story twice a week is a big challenge but still I hope you'll never stop. I can't imagine it ever ending.
    you are doing something really amazing and I'm really happy that you share it with us! Thank you!
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  • From ANON - v on May 17, 2011
    I very much approve of the punishment for Hi-chan, I think it was firm and because he's been with his litter for the start of his life it might show him a little bit of what Haru felt like without his family around him, since we haven't really been privy to Hikaru's thought process I am curious to see how he will react to being isolated from his brothers, sisters, and Kiba and to have his To-chan and Papa disappointed and angry with him. Lets hope it helps. Sasuke's and Haru's discussion was very touching also, they both have lovely hearts. I can't wait for the ladies of Tarrasade to get up close with Uchiha, should be hilarious. Lol :)
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