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By : mannahpierce
  • From ANON - angelj232000 on May 26, 2011
    Chapter 87's ending was not fair. I don't want Naruto to die. NOOOOOOOO!!!!!! Please update soon. I don't want to be crying next chapter please don't kill him. God this story is so good. Keep up the great work.
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  • From blugirlami21 on May 26, 2011
    Mannah Pierce! Are you trying to give me a heart attack?! I was just reading along, everything seemed to be going well with the children and Udon was making progress and his meeting and it seemed that Naruto was as well and then the attack happened. This is almost as bad as when Shikamru was kidnapped. Almost, as bad because I think I could go on reading if Shikamaru was killed. I would have hated it but I could get by but if you kill Naruto, I might have to stop reading. I just have too much invested in the story of Sasuke and Naruto to read on when one of them is dead. I know you are a writer first and foremost and I respect that. I will go on this journey with you as I have many times before and hope that we end up in a good place. But good on you, like Naruto I did not see that coming at all. That's good writing that is.
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  • From meowkuu2 on May 26, 2011
    ....OH NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!

    I'm afraid.. he can't die yet...nnnnnnnnnnoooooo
    *rolls around*.. its Orochimaru isn't it.. or some jealous stuck up Uchiha-haters...
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  • From ANON - lonelylulaby on May 25, 2011
    OMGOMGOMGOMGOMG, what is happening? I dont understand what is goin on. How could someone attack the Uchiha compound. What r they going to do, they just started on the renovations. Are the kids okay and everyone that was in the main house? What about the prisoners, was it in their area? GAH! I just dont know what to think, and then there is Naruto, what has happened? did his suit rip and now he's tumbling into space w/out oxygen AND losing blood. Oh jeez, I cant take this cliff hanger, I think I'm about to go crazy with all the questions I have. Wonder what Klenneth
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  • From Dorkchic on May 25, 2011
    Oh. My. God. I have no idea how to respond to that except that I hope they survive
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  • From ANON - KL on May 25, 2011
    OMG OMG OMG!!! ARE YOU SERIOUS??? LIKE SERIOUS SERIOUS??? i almost cried with those last sentences!!! like omg what about sasuke??? I CANNOT WAIT UNTIL SATURDAY!!!LIKE OMG OMG OMG!!!
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  • From Prism0467 on May 25, 2011
    OMG WTH happened?!
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  • From ANON - Blubbering and Crying on May 25, 2011
    Oh my gosh...Oh My Gosh...MAAANNNNNAAAHHHH! Naruto! AHHHHH! I love this story but but but.....I love Naruto!!.............Whatever happens...Ugh. I just can't wait for the next chapter...
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  • From Gingitsune32 on May 25, 2011
    NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Oh no!!!!! :( Can't wait to read more :( I hope Kakashi is wrong :(
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  • From roro237 on May 25, 2011
    I bet you heard me screaming?:) OK I'm calming down.. I was so tickle at Udon for hoping his rod wouldn't stand up. That was a good one:) Kakashi being an ass as usual:) I had not realize that Sasuke serving tea was such a scandal?! The title told me so:) It was great how Naruto was thinking about the children growing up and their sex life's. Then bamb!!!!! In the blink of an eye all hell breaks out. You left us a cliffy that could give me a heart a tick:) Real! This is why you are the Great Queen of the Naruto Space Universe. This chapter is absolutely fantastic ^_^
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  • From ANON - richon on May 25, 2011
    no no naru to die, you can't die like that!!! it's horrible .. what happen?? i want to know more , see you soon !!
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on May 25, 2011
    ... I don't know what to say. I'm not ready yet. And I just refuse to believe that Naruto would...
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  • From superflaj on May 25, 2011
    i think i just died
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  • From ANON - silentnight on May 25, 2011
    I am crying at the possibilities. Update soon. I can't stand it ;-)
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  • From ANON - SidonieStarr on May 25, 2011
    Wow - This story goes from warm and fuzzy to thrilling so quickly. I eagerly await every update and I'm sure I'll go into mourning when you move on to other things.
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