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By : mannahpierce
  • From ANON - v on May 28, 2011
    This cliffhanger is so horribly stressful..I'm so happy that Naruto is alive and stable, i'm so worried about everyone who is injured and how terrible that this has happened when they are trying to change things and build a new life....and what if it did happen because Sasuke served tea to someone unsuitable?? Tarrasade's a horrible place!!!!! I hate Tarrasade!!!....I feel like this will definitely bring about changes for Sasuke, his family, and the people around them, I just don't know how.....i'm also trying not to think about how they haven't located Iruka...as much as we all love Naruto..Iruka means so much to everyone....
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  • From cynaga on May 28, 2011
    [ch 88] OMG! MOG! OMG!
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on May 28, 2011
    OMG Thank you! Thank You! THANK YOU! You've made my life miserable since Wednesday!!! But he's alive, at least for now. I always thought that you may write about Naruto's death but I always thought that he would die fighting, trying to keep his family safe... not in the accident from a falling piece of junk.
    But now there's Iruka... I know that you probably already have the next chapter written and ready... I hope. It's all I can do.

    Sasuke was pretty calm. I thought that he would freak out at the mere possibility of Naruto's death. Or maybe I hoped he would... just to prove how amazing Naruto is...

    And now I must somehow live to the next Wednesday... calmer but not calm.
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  • From missbri88 on May 28, 2011
    I hate you... Because I love you. But oh my God! I boo-hoo cried. I'm still crying. I need a cigarette and I'm going to climb back into my bed to finish crying over this chapter. I hope to see you again soon. Just know that I love this fic, but I'm heartbroken now.
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  • From roro237 on May 28, 2011
    OMG!!!! I wouldn't let my eyes read a head. I love how you kept the time. It was so intense. Then Choza voice and my breathing even out:) Naruto was safe! I didn't need the defibrillator:) I was so worried about Naruto and Sasuke the other got push back in my mind. Shika's parent and Kurenai. Iruka! ~Bowing~ Oh Great Queen of the Natuto Space Universe I loved every bit of this incredible chapter! I have wrote this review twice and my compute lost then 3rd time is the charm:) I hope this one reaches you:)
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  • From Prism0467 on May 28, 2011
    Kurenai? Ibiki? Suzume?

    Oh, no.
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  • From bloodshound on May 28, 2011
    someone is going to pay for this and pay dearly!
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  • From bloodshound on May 27, 2011
    NONONONONONONONONO NO dead Naru's! NONE!

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  • From roro237 on May 26, 2011
    Queenie I'm back today because I've been haunted all day with thoughts of Naruto. I'm scared! What will Sasuke and the children do without him? Will Sasuke feel responsible for this happening? Who's going to tell Sasuke what has happen? You have raise the bar to heights I can't even see! This has been the scariest chapter for me. My heart is still skipping a beat or two but I'm holding on ok! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Lixx on May 26, 2011
    OMG!!! I read this chapter last night right before bed. I couldn't sleep! I am so worried about Naruto. Great (but awful!) chapter. Looking forward to the next one stat!
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  • From missbri88 on May 26, 2011
    Okay... I'm having a 'spaz attack'. I only beg that this is tied up quickly and cleanly. Thank you. :)
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  • From satterb on May 26, 2011
    Oh my God!!!! All I can ask is please update soon. Thank you for all your hard work on this wonderful story!
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  • From ahmenet on May 26, 2011
    Ah, the cliffhanger. Quite possibly one of the most cruel and effective writing tools known to exist. You use it well, damnit. I've not reviewed in a while but I never miss a chapter. This story has been wonderful. I find myself reading exerts to my husband and best friend as I go even though they don't know what I'm talking about. I hope this is not the beginning of the end for this story, but if it is, I will enjoy and know that the ride has been a truly wonderful roller coaster and fun house and tunnel of love all wrapped up in beautiful words and flowing lines.
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  • From ANON - v on May 26, 2011
    I was gone...eight days...no internet for 5 of them....so happy to be back, have 3 chapters to read..loving Udon, hoping things work out for him, waiting to see if hikaru is alright with his punishment...Sasuke serving tea, Naruto being fabulous..little worried about Kakashi's prediction of trouble. Naruto so funny, worrying about his children and puberty.....THEN..WTF!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! OH GOD!!! NARUTO!!!!!! what about sasuke, the children, shikamaru, Iruka, .....HE CAN'T DIE!! What about Kurenei?? and Choza?? and the others with him??? Tears, Hysteria, relentless re-reading has become my life...please, please, please, don't let him die.
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  • From ANON - SunaoTsuji on May 26, 2011
    Chapter 86. Udon was so cute!

    Chapter 87. "They are only six." i can see the parent's mind of thinking there. and the way you concluded this chappie has me tingled to the bone! i want more! i must know what happens next!
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