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By : mannahpierce
  • From roro237 on June 01, 2011
    I got off work early today and the first thing, ok second, bathroom first then get on the computer:) WoW! I'm better! My heart is beating normally:) I think what I've learn from the last two chapters is I'm no good in a crisis:) I'm still thinking about all the news with Naruto. It sounds fine but what can go wrong? My heart goes out to Sasuke he has so many decision to make ahead of him without his 'light'. The title was perfect for Kakashi's thoughts. I guess I understand him a little better. He did reach out to Sasuke. I'm sorry for all their loss. I believe Kakashi said it best in that last sentence of this chapter:) Space Queen thank you for all your hard work. I love it ^_^
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  • From ANON - Aflyingmonkey123 on June 01, 2011
    I can not even begin to explain the amount of relief I am feeling right now... The next couple chapters will be hard though... I can't wait till the next chapter.
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on June 01, 2011
    Oh you play on my feelings like on some damn violin. First I only wanted Naruto to live then it came out that Iruka is in danger. When they said that Naruto is alive I felt a relief but when they said that Iruka will live I cried! In this chapter I first hated Kakashi for the way he thinks about Naruto and then... it was just one huge emotional roller coaster! Amazing....
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  • From ANON - angelj232000 on June 01, 2011
    Thank you for not killing Iruka, Haku or Naruto. WOW with the suspense. I was crying all over the place with the last two chapters. I literally just finished chapter 88 when thank god you posted chapter 89. I don't think I could have handeled waiting any longer to get Kakashi's point of view or knowing what happened to Iruka, I am so glad the Kakasi was never mad at Sasuke for the tea thing he felt so guilty for his thoughts that he never thought of it. Word can not express how much I love & look forward to each chapter no matter what you are doing to my favorite characters. Seriously keep up the awesome work, can't wait to read the next chapter. Thanks again for such a good & exciting read.
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  • From ANON - SunaoTsuji on June 01, 2011
    chapter 88. ooooo now this really makes me wonder. three bombs and yet we're still not sure if those are from within Terassade (i think i spelled it correctly) as a sign of unapproval to what Sasuke did when serving the tea or if this is one of Orochimaru's work timed to the unauthorized vid of Sasuke serving the tea................... woot! thanks for the update! greatly appreciate the hard work. hope to read the next update soon!
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  • From ANON - Lixx on May 31, 2011
    Too short! Need more! I am still tense even with some questions answered. I look forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - V-anon on May 31, 2011
    come back from vacation, catch up on stories I like to follow and what do I come back to? Well, at least I came back to this chapter and didn't have to wait...I have tears in my eyes as it stands. You killed Ibiki ;_; At least when that happened in the manga he got resurrected...I should care about the the other two, or at least Kurenai for Asuma's sake but Ibiki made me too sad :P...as always thanks for updating and I know why some people want to throw books.
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  • From Alleya on May 31, 2011
    It took me a while. Took me many days and long nights but by god I am updated and done. I can't say how much I love this story and where it is heading. It is just my absolute favorite of all Naruto/Sasuke fictions. I'm so happy that I'm finally caught up in this thrilling and exciting tale. Great...not even great, amazing job with the story. I look forward to reading more.
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  • From ANON - Kat Saama on May 30, 2011
    I'm near tears ... please let Iruka and Naruto live!
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  • From ANON - smauigirl on May 30, 2011
    Holy shit! You've got me on pins and needles.
    Nice woek.
    Aloha
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  • From ANON - richon on May 29, 2011
    ohoho ituka can't be dead ... this turn is the story is so sad ... what to know what will happen next!!! see you soon with more
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  • From satterb on May 29, 2011
    This is sooo horrible. I wish Sasuke could go super bad-ass once things settle down, and remind Tarrasade just who Uchiha is. I was on pins and needles while reading this. You really are a gifted artist! Thanks for all your hard work.
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  • From ANON - Aflyingmonkey123 on May 28, 2011
    I am now crying and I have now realized this is one of those great stories that need no praise because everything about this story speaks for itself. Every week I wait for chapters and I never forget. This story will forever have a special place in my heart.
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  • From blugirlami21 on May 28, 2011
    That was heartbreaking. I find it interesting that the Uchiha compound was bombed so easily. This will definitely be a wake-up call for them to up the security even more. Maybe bomb detectors and other security methods would be prudent at this point. I don't think it's the tea incident that made this happen. If that is all it takes to anger someone or several someones into bombing Uchiha then any little thing that they disagreed with would have sufficed. I understand that Kakashi is in distress at the moment but he needs to come off it. I thought he was wrong in the last chapter and I think he is wrong now. Sasuke and or the Uchiha cannot live their lives totally governed by how the public may or may not react and they shouldn't have to. I feel awful for the lives we have lost and especially for Shika and Asuma who lost close loved ones. It seems that Shika will now have to be a parent or guardian to Sumiko, which I hope will be a comfort and not a sad reminder of his parents. I hope Iruka is alright, his loss would be quite the final blow at this point. Good chapter as always, keep up the good work.
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  • From roro237 on May 28, 2011
    I was so all over the place this morning and my computer wasn't working right. Now I can give a proper review:) The details were wonderful and once again so many people. You always amaze me with that. I love Itachi game with the boys. That is a very good way to burn off excess energy! I was thinking it might be Pein setting off the bomb because the prisoners apartments were not touched and it was on Shika parents apartment?! I also noticed that the time was 7:23 when we found out about Naruto:) Thank goodness Haku is ok what in the world would Itachi and Kisame do without him! For that matter what will Kakashi and Rin do if they done fine Iruka?! You have made my space travel that much more exciting with this new arc ^_^ PS Thank you for all your hard work.
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