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By : mannahpierce
  • From satterb on June 05, 2011
    I'm looking forward to all information being unfolded by you in that clever way you have of uncovering the truth to your readers! I hope you can update very very soon. Thanks for all your hard work.
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  • From missbri88 on June 04, 2011
    And I'm *STILL* crying...
    I love Udon. I just want to kidnap him, then hug him and squeeze him and love him forever. I'm so glad he spoke with the media and the public sympathize with their grief. I hope things look up and move forward for Udon and Uchiha.
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  • From ANON - Aflyingmonkey123 on June 04, 2011
    And so it begans....This chapter was so so ... saaaaaaaaaaaaad. Everyone was touched someway by the enemy bombing and its just so depressing.. I have to say though I was waiting for sasuke to get angry and I was glad he did. He has to have a drive to find these killers and destroy them... Can't wait for the next chapter (like always)
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  • From roro237 on June 04, 2011
    Oh Space Queen that was breath taking:) I love the fact that it will be on count down-days. 1 of 105. I'm with Shika Udon talk with the news had me choked up to. That was just beautiful:) So these bombs were planed long ago? I'm happy it didn't really have anything to do with Sasuke serving Udon. That was so sweet the way he handle the children of Asma. He knew what they must be feeling. Between me and you I want to hug and squeeze Sasuke and make it all better:) In that motherly way:) It's only day one! He has so far to go. I'm freaking out worse than him:) Oh Great Queen of the Naruto Space Universe ~Bowing~. I loves it ^_^
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  • From ANON - angelj232000 on June 04, 2011
    I am glad to see people moving on. I can't wait to see who the bomber is. Hope Sasuke gets em!!!!!!!! Keep it up I need to know what happens next & I can`t wait fore all the injured to be taken out of the tanks & for the reunions to begin. YAY!!! getting back together sex & cuddling. I can`t to read the reunions on Itachi/Kisame/Haku, Kakasi/Iruka & of course Naruto/Sasuke. The anticipation is going to kill me. BIG HUGS for the awesome read.
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  • From Dorkchic on June 04, 2011
    I hope Kakashi, Shika, Neji, Kisame, and Itachi help Sasuke reign in and focus his rage. If they don't then things could get out of hand very quickly and Sasuke would probably never forgive himself if he damaged or killed the wrong person or persons in his need for vengence. Excellent chapter and I loved Udon.
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  • From missbri88 on June 03, 2011
    Just to let you know, while you're reading this review that I'm *still* crying, and my husband is hysterical. But it'll be okay because I love the story and you're going to make everything better like you always do. *nods with certainty* Right?
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  • From ANON - SunaoTsuji on June 03, 2011
    chapter 89? woooo this chapter really put me on edge due to the fact that many ppl were lost and many were hurt. extremely anticipating how the next few dives are going to be. greatly appreciate the update and looking forward to your next chapter!
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  • From Dorkchic on June 02, 2011
    Klenn is going to find some people and tear several strips out of out of their asses before lettting them die. They could have hurt the children, nearly killed Naruto, and did killed Shikamaru's parents - thereby orphaning Shika's little sister. Klenn's response along with Itachi's and Kakashi's should be epic. Because only those two (especially Itachi) could possibly match Klenn for visciousness.
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  • From satterb on June 02, 2011
    Very good! It's only right that Kakashi would fall back onto old Uchiha at such a time. We are never truly separated from our pasts. It's what makes us who we are. Thanks for all your hard work. I really look forward to more. I know this may seem terrible of me, but I'm really hoping for some terrible and swift retaliation.
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  • From ANON - KL on June 02, 2011
    This chapter serves to remind me how much we dont know what kakashi is thinking, even though he gives this one perception of things, in his mind there are many things going on.
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  • From ANON - lonelylulaby on June 02, 2011
    OMG, I just cant take it anymore. The destruction is killing me, I ask once again WHO WOULD DO SUCH A THING? At least now I know the reason why Kakashi was acting so mean. Oh Gosh I just cant wait till everyone is well again. Um, I dont know if this was answered but is C-san dead, injured or missing?

    ja ne till next time and keep up the good work
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  • From blugirlami21 on June 01, 2011
    Aww, we lost more people than I had previously thought. I didn't think we had lost Jiraiya as well, I'm sad to say I don't really remember who Kunugi was. It's not ringing a bell for some reason. Old Kakashi was kind of scary. I found it very interesting that he valued Kiba over Naruto like Kakashi, I was perturbed by that. Let's hope he stays hidden deep inside of Kakashi where he belongs. I can only hope that everyone makes full recoveries and we can move on from this incident. Hopefully it will only make Uchiha more aware and stronger in the future.
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  • From ANON - v on June 01, 2011
    jesus...I think this is the first time we've had a look into the person that held together the last of Uchiha so Sasuke and his family could start again...and I have to say, Thank God for Iruka, because Old Kakashi is downright cold and scary. I had no idea he could break down everything happening in a way that started to eliminate people that we feel are essential to Uchiha , like seeing Naruto as a liability rather than a necessity, his thoughts of Choza being unsuitable, gullible and How Kiba was the most important because he was guardian. Amazing that you could present it in his thoughts as an almost logical step by step reasoning, I felt deserves a bravo, because truly seeing Old Kakashi's thought process was just as shocking as the bombs themselves. As the chapter progressed, i just kept praying more and more for Iruka to be alive, because maybe Kakashi could be just as insane as Itachi was but no one be aware of it. I think this also illuminates why I'm such a big fan of your writing, your characters not only grow and change with the plot itself but also we are able to make an emotional connection with them. So again bravo!!....and please don't let scary Kakashi out too much..unless its against enemies, they'll deserve him alot more than our crew :)
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  • From Prism0467 on June 01, 2011
    I am crying over the Nara elders right now.
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